Infinitus Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Hmmmmmmm, Leonic, can you remind me to ask Michael what Harry Potter is like? I've never read it, and I'm too busy reading another book to read it, and too lazy. Michael: Shut up. I SWEAR I've NEVER read Harry Potter. DMG wouldn't leave me alone until I read it! Then Exodia kept ranting about his favorite parts, and I did it to make them shut up. I read the first few chapters, then stopped. I SWEAR. Liar. Michael: Shut up. Your face. Michael: Seriously, shut up. geeksayswut Michael: wut. Exactly Michael: Grrrr.... Anyway, I like how you added the common activity of teenagers being on the internet on a rainy day. Also, I like the Harry Potter bit. Also, try having Michael read TWILIGHT Michael: NO! Never! Don't do it! Anyway, a little more on topic, you actually captured a bit of my personality of using "If _____ then I'm gonna ______" Like Michael did with the retirement home. Great job! Keep it up, and your detailed descriptions are as good as ever! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Fantastic, really captured the essence of a typical mysterious rainy day. Amazing build-up, you just feel that something sinister has got to happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 LOL! I only made Michael read HP for comical effectAnd the answer was the Princess Diary (more specifically the 1st book) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 LOL! I only made Michael read HP for comical effectAnd the answer was the Princess Diary (more specifically the 1st book) I hated that book -_-Lily is not amused -_-Anyway, when is the next chapter comin up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Got to be patient, I haven't finished writing chapter four yetIt wont be here for a while, I seriously need to update WCAGA as well as getting Dollhouse over with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Oh boy... waiting...Oh well, let's hope chapter 4 is another great part! [in the words of sonic the hegehog: "Wait? Aww... I hate that!"] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Crikey Leonic, you've done it again! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 thanks Orcman, even though you were never involved in Ultima? XDbut I have to ask, are you actually following the story and not being sidetracked by the continous in-house gags, references, etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Wow, what a mysterious ending... now that's the sort of story I like, honestly, bestselling book coming right up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 *sniff* I was first...and I didn't get to eat that sandwich....poor sandwich... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 lol, it's ok JZ, i'm sure your snawhich is ok anyway, that was pretty neat leo-chan ;) not really sure what happened to us, but now i'm even more curious then before, we still have no idea where our DS's are ;( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 I thought you said I couldn't have Exodia? Oh well. Anyway, it was a great chapter, and I think I know where they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Well, there is one very clear reason why I didn't allow you to (you'll understand in the next chapter) but I've sort of billed Exodia as a secondary, less important duel spirit (like DMG was to Michael) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Well' date=' there is one very clear reason why I didn't allow you to (you'll understand in the next chapter) but I've sort of billed Exodia as a secondary, less important duel spirit (like DMG was to Michael)[/quote'] So I couldn't have him as a main spirit? That's fine. I wanted Exodia clearly because he's awesome. How many other spirits do you know that need 5 cards to contain it's awesomeness? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 OK, gonna bump this ever so slightlyExpect an update sometime around the weekend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 sweet!!! update coming soon!!! although i don't know if i'll survive the wait, i have work all weekend :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 An Update!? oh, Yay, YAY! I can't ewait, hope it's as good as the rest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Sorry for lack of updates guys, I'm being kept busy by schoolwork. Judging by the current amount of work, I don't think I'll be able to update on a weekday, so you'll have to wait until the weekend (again). Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 i understand about schoolwork, trust me ;) but that sucks :( oh well, the longer we wait the better we're gonna think it is once it's here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 So I must still wait...dang it....right now Seijin feels a little shocked *bad pun detected* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Sorry for the long wait everyone, but it's finally up! Chapter five has been completed :DHave fun reading ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 i loled at the end... what will JZ say when he reads about the legacy of the panwich [pancake sandwich] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 lol, the poor sandwich was crushed twice :P but now we do start to go a bit more serious (jokes will still be there ... I'm going to try and mention sandwiches at least once per chapter) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Well done. Chapters are long enough, with the right amount of detail. Keep it up. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 "the sandwich...ah......I completely crushed it.....nooooo!" I loved the story, there is only one itsy bitsy little problem, my name is Seijin in Ultima, remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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