ITI3L33 Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 This is Chapter one:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=16209These are the characters:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=16207 Now let's begin our story. As the guard drags the three he starts talking.guard: Well hello. I am not a mean guy. Actually I am a yu-gi-oh card battler myself. My name is Garn. I am a really good trainer because I have every type of card.Dran: I am not a bad trainer myself.Garn: Yeah? How good are you?Dran: Not as good as you.Garn: ReallyDran: Yeah I mean it.All of a sudden The Battling Station For masters comes in sight.Noob: Is it really?a voice: Yes it is.Dran, Noob and Dines look around. They see this guy who is in dark clothes.guy in dark clothes: That is The Battling Station for Masters. I tried to be a battler there but I wasn't good enough. WHO IS THE STRANGE BATTLER? FIND OUT IN CHAPTER THREE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 I just looked at the chapters and I knew one thing. You obviously didn't put effort into the chapters. My fan fic has over 1000 words per episode and is in story style, not script style. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=13633 I suggest you read my fan fic and figure what improvements you should make on your fan fic. Edit: Put every chapter in 1 thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 You shouldn't make different threads when you make another chapter add it to the other thread. About the chapters they're kind of short try making them longer like look at God Kaze's, Remix Duelist's, and Serronox's Fan Fic's they have pretty long episodes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Yeah, I think I pretty much said that when I stated that mine had over 1000 words... Anyways, tallman is correct. Please don't post every single chapter in a different thread. Especially when your chapters are under 250 words... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Well I am under age ten so I write short stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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