Greek Prince Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 My first time making a card, please let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 where is the card(s)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 oh! my computer is very bad! sorry! i see it now! 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 lower the defence by half Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 that is a good card, very balanced, and a good effect, especially since it is your first, and i love that pic, awsome. 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demi Ryu Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Not bad. I'd like to think I could abuse a few of these to get Cyber Harpies. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 wow! demi ryu i like the pic in your sig! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwhkiller Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 pretty good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Great card,since it is your new and first.Can I advice you when will this card be a bit more realistic?Do you know this card can add 1 Cyber Dragon to your hand as well!!!It is a little overpowered.Add 1 more star level to it. So,I 'll be mild and I'll rate this card as 9/10!BTW,You should have this(I think);(ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.ONLY Greek Prince can use this exact effect on this forum!!!)---------------->When this card is destroyed by battle by a non-Machine monster,this card is removed from play and you can add 1 card that includes "Cyber" in its card name from your Deck to your hand.Your Deck is then shuffled.If this card is destroyed by your opponent's monster in battle who's ATK is 1900 or less,draw 1 card from your Deck.------------>ATK->1000------------->DEF->18005 Star Level----> xxxxx This is your first post and 1st card.Good job.------------------------------------Did I help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 COOOOOOOL. One of the best things I saw from a new member :D 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 tdath - Glad you liked it, and glad the image showed up I was getting worried! rahim - I was thinking of that, but then I thought Machine monsters have a natural high defense so anyone using this card will always place it in defense mode. Boss Z - Thank you! I love the pic too!! Demi Ryu - Lol, yeah I was thinking someone might use it for cards other than Cyber Dragons. dwhkiller - Thanks for your comment. Balvarine - Err yeah i'm well aware this card can add a Cyber Dragon to your hand, i made it remember. i suppose it is a bit too overpowered considering it's stats and ability but i wanted to make it playable, if it had 5 stars like you said then hardly no one would add it. The part where you remove this card from play is a good idea though, thanks for that input. OldMaster - Thanks! I was worried since i'm not too sure whats expected on this forum. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Balvarine - Err yeah i'm well aware this card can add a Cyber Dragon to your hand' date=' i made it remember. i suppose it is a bit too overpowered considering it's stats and ability but i wanted to make it playable, if it had 5 stars like you said then hardly no one would add it. The part where you remove this card from play is a good idea though, thanks for that input. [/quote'] No,that's not true.It is playable for sure.It will be overpowered if it remains 4 stared,considering the nature of this card's effect.You got to trust me on this one.You could just change its Attribute into DARK and from there this card can be Special Summoned by "Mystic Tomato".AND ONE MORE THING if you change its attribute;If this card is real,people would use mostly mystic tomato for this card's Special Summoning from a Deck so I reccomend you to remove that part of an effect where it is written that you have to shuffle your Deck(my version),because the tomato's effect already does that,so your card will be more appriciated in one more aspect.-------------------------------------------------------------Thank you for reading this!.And also decrease your card's DEF by 200(if you want,as I mentioned,increase its star lev. by 1.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 truthfully if that card werre feal i would combine by trusdale deck with my alexis rhode deck and ofcourse i would have to have 3 of that card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 pretty good but the only thing is that with an effect like that, it's stats could be a bit lower to keep it balanced but nice pic and OCG4.75/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Balvarine - Yeah I suppose you are right when it's put like that, if it was a dark attribute monster it would be in just about everyones deck just like what happened with the Cyber Dragons. Thank you so much for your advice and the ref! Hmmm i will make another and try to make it better, i'm thinking of making some other Cyber Support cards such as spells and traps. Boss Z - Hahaha i'm pretty sure if this card were real it would be limited in an instant. Since you could use it effects to summon itself. instinctmeister - Yeah suppose i should lower it, it's either increase it to a level 5 monster or decrease it's defense points to 1600 or something. Thanks for the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 Maybe, MAYBe make it "When destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle...", that would make this card slightly less good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Maybe' date=' MAYBe make it "When destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle...", that would make this card slightly less good...[/quote'] Thats a good idea! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 It is overpowered a bit. Listen to how the effect should be:When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard select and activate one of the following effects:- Select 1 card from your Deck that includes "Cyber" in its card name and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled-Draw 1 card from your Deck. Overall: 8/10 Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Very good card maybe it could be more common though 9/10 I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 God GAK - I thought thats what I wrote o_o Zaca - Thanks, glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 im loving the card man =) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Thanks Bloodrun!! So glad you like it, i'm loving the spawn card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ribery1993 Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Nice Card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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