guess who this fan fic is about. 1 rep for the first right answer!!

[duel tester]

The sun is setting in jump city a large sea side city.

shadows fell from the peaks of the skyscrapers as the orange sun ray glazed the edge of the sea, sounds of cars beeping an sirens blowing were crying Throughout the city. it was almost 8:00 and everyone was in their homes watching TV,and about half of the city was watching a story about a criminal steeling a important parcel that was to be stored at the city bank and not noticing a young man running as fast as he can though the shadows of the mighty skyscrapers. he was blond haired teen about 17 he wore a brown ski hat a maroon vest with a white t-shirt underneath and a green backpack with a Grey wing like protrusion that rattled as he ran. he also had black jeans and brown shoes on. he tightly hugged his parcel,a black briefcase With City Bank printed on the front. He rushed through the soggy alleyways of jump city knocking over trash cans and cardboard boxes. he stopped and leaned on the wall of a building and Caught his breath."(Gasp Pant) Whew. The police will never find me here. I better make the call too the boss saying i got the package. as he pulled out a Cellphone From his back pocket it flew out of his hands on onto a wall. Whoa! what the ...... no it cant be!! a red and green bird shaped Shuriken was impaling the phone. "Oh man i got a get out of here or they might find me" he heard a howl and a eerie whisper. as then as the the moon rose into the sky 5 long shadows fell on the building. "on no its them!!!"The criminal ran as Five shadows followed him.

 

Who is fowlowing the crimanal?

Can you name them?

and is this a good fan fic?

sorry about spelling errors.

[Eury]

I'm not guessing till you fix your grammer. Proofreading, use it.

[ThatPhantomGuy]

Can't. Read. Too. Many. Errors... I'm sorry, but it's kind of hard to read this. I agree with davidroof1, Proof. Read.

[OMGAKITTY]

lol. Since the first line is "Jump City"...

Teen Titans.

[duel tester]

2 out of 3 questions right.

you get points for participation

[Yankee]

lol. Since the first line is "Jump City"...

Teen Titans.

 

Win.

And, hate it. The errors...

[duel tester]

fine winner OMGAKITTY

1 rep 4 u..

[Yankee]

So...is this really a ff? Or was this just a game?

[bury the year]

Evil text block is evil. A blank line in between paragraphs, new paragraph when attention is on someone new, etc etc etc blah blah blah.

[Weather Report - Stand]

I'm not guessing till you fix your grammer. Proofreading' date=' use it.

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[Kendo Fish]

And, uh, THAT POST WAS COMPLETELY USELESS, BRUHTHUR.

 

And...yyyeeaaahhhh. It's too horrendous, really. Read some quality stories and see how they became much better. LEARN FROM THEM, YO. ZORZ.

[Weather Report - Stand]

Really, what's the point of this now? It was a stupidly small game, and now it has no purpose.

[duel tester]

-_-................

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