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[CLASS] New Name - Asuma's Courage - IMRPOVED WITH RENDER!


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Too messy. Low novice.

 

There is no focal. He's too randomly placed in there.

 

The focal is the thing on the left.

 

Would've been a good background for something else.

 

Stop making sprite tags and make some real tags.

 

I'm practicing sprite tags. How else am I going to get better? >,>

 

At least it's low novice instead of beginner.

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What does the [CLASS] thing mean anyway? [/clueless]

 

Anyhow, it is very messy and it took me too long to figure out what the hell you were trying to present. The background actually looks really nice, and could've been used for something more practical instead of a spite. I mean, I don't even know what the hell that sprite is.

 

The effects you used were fine, but I feel like you have trouble to present the focal.

 

I think you should try your bet at regular sigs, because sprites aren't appealing.

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What does the [CLASS] thing mean anyway? [/clueless]

 

Anyhow' date=' it is very messy and it took me too long to figure out what the hell you were trying to present. The background actually looks really nice, and could've been used for something more practical instead of a spite. I mean, I don't even know what the hell that sprite is.

 

The effects you used were fine, but I feel like you have trouble to present the focal.

 

I think you should try your bet at regular sigs, because sprites aren't appealing.

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Thanks for the CnC and I can't just give up on something because I suck at it. It's called practice =D

 

What does the [CLASS] thing mean anyway? [/clueless]

 

Classing is when you are told what you rank in the design world.

 

Beginner

Novice

Moderate

Intermediate

Semi-Pro

Professional

 

Anyways' date=' low novice.

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At least it isn't Beginner ;D

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But overall' date=' I rank your stuff at mid-Novice IMO :)

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1. Don't class unless you are the part of YCM Class Crew, or have a decent amount of art or design experience, like Mia or Shade.

 

2. Mid-novice isn't really a class. xD I assume you meant Solid, but this isn't solid. As an abstract with maybe some nice colors, this could be a solid, but at the moment it is not.

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