koramore Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 I'm trying out a new style for me. CnC. Class. [align=center] [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Bad. You chose a bad person for the tag. He blends in with the background, which takes away from the focal. And just take out the text. The left building sticks out too much. Too many random elements. Bad composition altogether. You really have no idea what you're looking at. The only discernable thing would be the guy's suit and the building on the left. BnW looks like a failed print out of something. Keep the colour. He feels squished. You tend to keep looking at the effect to the left of the guy's head. Have no idea what it is. Smoke? Keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Yeah it's random overload. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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