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Superman Drawing by NickLD


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Okay your good blah blah blah, blah :D

 

What is the thing in the background? Is it what he's shooting from his eyes cause if it is then some of it needs to come out in front of superman, cause the way you shaded it makes it seem flat, but if the blast were to come forward, it might make the shading less awkward

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Hmm...

 

The shading is extremely nitpicky, but that's present in all your works. It's not seamless enough to be realistic, but too precise and not contrasting enough to be stylized; I'd make up your mind. Still, V2's shading is pretty damn good, as it decides to play up the contrast for more seamless stylization.

 

The real problem is with the line art, as it is with all your works. Put bluntly, it's an eyesore. Supes's face, as is the case with the middle picture in your signature, qualifies as nightmare fuel. Your armored Raviel-thing on the left of your signature is fine, so I'd just work on perfecting your human anatomy. Also, the S should be tilted the other way.

 

In short: Colors good, lineart bad.

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