Army of Darkness (Deck in construction)

[Terry Starlox]

Hello, I want to show them a card that I create, want your opinions and if it was possible, that was saying to myself if there is some mistake in the grammar of some card.

 

If you want to help in the creation of this card to contact for MSN. [email protected].

 

Thank you, here I leave the cards

 

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[jemjosher]

work on some of your wording and your good to go

[Master52394]

I agree w/ the person above me

[bozataaaaa]

I agree with both of you

[Terry Starlox]

The problem is that I do not speak English, using a translator to write effects and names, so I want someone to help me in grammar.

 

Thanks for comment.

[jemjosher]

9- as long as this card is face up on the field increase the ATK/DEF of All Dark monsters by 300

[jemjosher]

8- activate only when your opponent summons a monster pay half of that monsters ATK to your life points and remove it from play

[jemjosher]

6- select one Dark monster from your deck and so it to your opponent that card is then added to you hand.

[Terry Starlox]

Thank you very much jemjosher, I value your help.