Osiris the All Powerful One

[starboy2905]

This card may seem overpowering, but the ritual to summon it is pretty darn rough.

[Denominator]

do you have a photo?

[Saiba Aisu]

OMG.....no it is not rough. Please use more than three brain cells....

Spell Economics+Ritual+1 card in hand=really broken and unfair monster. I hope you can do the math. 3/10. You have some OCG issues.

[Cyber Altair]

it is very overpowered and the ritual is not that hard and your OCG is not correct.6/10.

[jemjosher]

are you kidding its so ez you can pay tribute from your hand its to stron chop it deff if you want to keep the ATK think plz

[Viera~Fran]

I don't usually say cards are bad, but well......this card is BAD. It's effect is overpowered and it's pretty easy to bring out. Also the way you wrote the card's effect was pretty bad. I'm sorry, but spamming the forum with cards like this is so unnecessary.

[wizardology]

There are also two things that no one has mentioned:

1) Sending your hand to your graveyard is a cost, meaning that it must be paid BEFORE the effect is resolved. This could be a problem because a Ritual Monster has to be in your hand to be summoned and because of the Ritual Spell Card required to summon it you have just thrown it out.

2) The key feature of a Ritual Spell Card is that "You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal (8) or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand." Also, a Ritual Monster must state the restrictions of it's summoning on the card.

 

To balance it, consider altering it to this:

Osiris the All-Powerful One (Divine-Beast/Dark/12 stars/Attack/Defense 2600)

"This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Underworld Ritual". This monster may attack during the same turn it is summoned. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100 points for each Monster Card in the Graveyards. As long exists on the field or in Graveyard, no cards can be removed from play. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle you may send 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to reduce the damage inflicted by your opponents monster to your life points to 0."

 

The Ritual Spell Card would read:

 

Underworld Ritual

"This card is used to Ritual Summon "Osiris the All-Powerful One". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 12 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. If this card is successfully activated, return all Monster Cards removed from play to their respective Graveyards and pay 400 Life Points for each returned card."

 

That's much better, and the original concept of your card is preserved. I altered the effect a little to better reflect the role of Osiris in the Egyptian mythology he comes from. But I wonder why you used a dragon as the picture as opposed to, oh, let's say...OSIRIS.