Griffin1555 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 hello every1 i know i have bad grammar , i made some cards, can any1 please tell me what you think about them :D?[attachment=13284][attachment=13280][attachment=13279][attachment=13278][attachment=13277][attachment=13276][attachment=13257][attachment=13258][attachment=13259][attachment=13260][attachment=13261][attachment=13262][attachment=13263][attachment=13264][attachment=13265][attachment=13266][attachment=13267][attachment=13268][attachment=13283][attachment=13282][attachment=13281][attachment=13275][attachment=13275][attachment=13273] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 oh my lord, yes you do. but I'll help you...the "--" indicate a new card. thank you.---[beast] or [beast-Warrior]"One of the most powerful Minotaurs of all time at one point, the ravages of time have caught up to him. He is no longer young, and his movements are slow and confused."---If your opponent has more than 1 monster on their side of the field, select 1 of those monsters and destroy it.---[Warrior]The reinforcements have arrived, and the trumpets sound as this samurai army enters the fray.---"Romanian Wolf"[Zombie, Beast or Beast-Warrior]This monster is a fierce werewolf from Transylvania.---Select 1 Zombie, Beast or Beast-Warrior monster in your Deck. Special Summon the selected monster to your side of the field. The Deck is then shuffled.---General of the Elven Army.---"Select 1 face-up Monster on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it."--- "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, destroy 1 monster on the field."---"A great Elven Elder."---Increase the ATK and DEF of all Warrior-type monster on the field. You may pay 500 Life Points to place this card on top of your Deck.---"An angel that only appears in the dark."---"Increase the ATK of all Zombie-type Monsters on the field by 500 and decrease their DEF by 400."---"A futuristic warrior who loves fire."---"A centaur with a bow."---"The most mighty creature of the sky, he is well known for his grace and beauty in battle."---"This huge ape crushes his enemies with his fists and feet."---"The greatest Viking warrior. He slays his enemies with his mighty axe."---"Some say he is human; others say he is a monstrosity. No one knows for sure."---"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell, "The Arrival of the Assassin." You must also offer monsters of Level 8 or higher as a Tribute."2800 atk for a lvl 6? I don't think so. Make him 8.---"The Arrival of the Assassin"This card is used to Ritual Summon "The Great Assassin." You must also offer monsters of Level 8 or higher as Tribute."---OMFG.....YOU ARE SO BROKEN! x_x Not even Raigeki was that good..... god....oh well."furry?" x_x Minotaur's FuryDiscard 1 card from your hand. Destroy 1 card on the field."---"He is the hero of the Minotaur race."---Honestly. Are you new? I took pity on you and edited ALL of your cards!!! The grammar was terrible, the effects broken, and you don't seem to know what Effect Monsters are. -8/10. Please do not think I am mean. I am being honest, and I was nice enough to waste 15-20 minutes of my life editing your cards....better luck next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlblack123456789 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 good 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 ARE YOU INSANE....? 10/10?! I wouldn't give him a 1/10. Honestly.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlblack123456789 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 ur a newbie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlblack123456789 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 don't answer back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 play nice! to be honest the grammar is bad 2/10 only because you asked for help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 oh my lord' date=' yes you do. but I'll help you...the "--" indicate a new card. thank you.---[beast'] or [beast-Warrior]"One of the most powerful Minotaurs of all time at one point, the ravages of time have caught up to him. He is no longer young, and his movements are slow and confused."---If your opponent has more than 1 monster on their side of the field, select 1 of those monsters and destroy it.---[Warrior]The reinforcements have arrived, and the trumpets sound as this samurai army enters the fray.---"Romanian Wolf"[Zombie, Beast or Beast-Warrior]This monster is a fierce werewolf from Transylvania.---Select 1 Zombie, Beast or Beast-Warrior monster in your Deck. Special Summon the selected monster to your side of the field. The Deck is then shuffled.---General of the Elven Army.---"Select 1 face-up Monster on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it."--- "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, destroy 1 monster on the field."---"A great Elven Elder."---Increase the ATK and DEF of all Warrior-type monster on the field. You may pay 500 Life Points to place this card on top of your Deck.---"An angel that only appears in the dark."---"Increase the ATK of all Zombie-type Monsters on the field by 500 and decrease their DEF by 400."---"A futuristic warrior who loves fire."---"A centaur with a bow."---"The most mighty creature of the sky, he is well known for his grace and beauty in battle."---"This huge ape crushes his enemies with his fists and feet."---"The greatest Viking warrior. He slays his enemies with his mighty axe."---"Some say he is human; others say he is a monstrosity. No one knows for sure."---"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell, "The Arrival of the Assassin." You must also offer monsters of Level 8 or higher as a Tribute."2800 atk for a lvl 6? I don't think so. Make him 8.---"The Arrival of the Assassin"This card is used to Ritual Summon "The Great Assassin." You must also offer monsters of Level 8 or higher as Tribute."---OMFG.....YOU ARE SO BROKEN! x_x Not even Raigeki was that good..... god....oh well."furry?" x_x Minotaur's FuryDiscard 1 card from your hand. Destroy 1 card on the field."---"He is the hero of the Minotaur race."---Honestly. Are you new? I took pity on you and edited ALL of your cards!!! The grammar was terrible, the effects broken, and you don't seem to know what Effect Monsters are. -8/10. Please do not think I am mean. I am being honest, and I was nice enough to waste 15-20 minutes of my life editing your cards....better luck next time. wow!!!! you can type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 ur a newbie xD? I am a newbie because I rate fairly for grammar and don't just fling 10/10's around? Ha. That makes me laugh. I don't see you giving up some time to help others like I did. So please shut it. Thanks very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlblack123456789 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 WTF l={it makes me want to cry wawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 ur a newbie u sure u should call someone a newbie?? u rate cards that have normal monsters and some spells and trap with bad grammar 10/10 and u double post......maybe u should think before u post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 thanks! *high fives* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 There alright 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwhkiller Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 ur a newbie newbie eh xD i think ur talkking about ur self? lol those card have bad grammar, pic is not so good ( some is good) if i were u i'll just give MOST 2/10 wrost 0 o.o if not, like me i give 1/10 ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 OK. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 lol gettin in the game my man, 8/10, grammar takes alot of practice, some of the ideas seemed, um old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwhkiller Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 lol gettin in the game my man' date=' 8/10, grammar takes alot of practice, some of the ideas seemed, um old.[/quote'] How he practice grammar if he dont make any EFFECT monsters ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 lol gettin in the game my man' date=' 8/10, grammar takes alot of practice, some of the ideas seemed, um old.[/quote'] How he practice grammar if he dont make any EFFECT monsters ^-^" lol i cant tell if your criticizing my comment, or helping along with it. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwhkiller Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 lol nvm why are we fighting over this anyways? =O i just kenw da lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Griffin1555 Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 WOW GUYS THANK YOU FOR HELPING ME :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Wat everyone els said but next time use http://www.tiny.com/ to upload your cards so we dont have to open a load of windowws Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Griffin1555 Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 AHM this were my 1st cards , my grammar is pure cause:1 i am 12 years old, 2 because i am from Romania and not many ppl are speaking here english , most of them speak Romanion , Hungrarion, and German.i hate to make "Effect" mosnters cause i find nothing cool to make "effect" mobs , and i think that the pics are pretty cool.Oh yeah and really really THX to CYBER COMMANDER , man you really spent some time on writing that , THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 AHM this were my 1st cards ' date=' my grammar is pure cause:1 i am 12 years old, 2 because i am from Romania and not many ppl are speaking here english , most of them speak Romanion , Hungrarion, and German.i hate to make "Effect" mosnters cause i find nothing cool to make "effect" mobs , and i think that the pics are pretty cool.Oh yeah and really really THX to CYBER COMMANDER , man you really spent some time on writing that , THX[/quote'] lol man i told you people, were gonna dog your cards.. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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