Umbra Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 This fanfic features my Alien Heroes as the main character's deck. Enjoy! Several decades have passed since Jaden and the rest finally graduated from Duel Academy. But this is not about them. Instead, we travel north, to the city of Cardington, (pun intended) where a young boy have just bought his first booster pack... ????: Finally! Dark Beginning 34 is here! I can’t wait!He ripped up the package, and looked at the top card.????: Gather your Mind? Awesome!?????: I wouldn’t say that.The boy turned around. He saw a man in his twenties, with a deck attached to his right hand.????: Who are you?The man smiled.?????: They call me Kuan, Dark Ruler.????: Well, I’m Thomas. Thomas Huntington.Kuan: I see you just bought yourself a booster pack, Thomas. Dark Beginning 34, right? Thomas nodded.Thomas: My friends say that it’s the best booster pack ever!Kuan: Well, I think you should use this.He then pulled out a sealed package from inside his coat. On the front, you could see a bright shape covered in twirls and the text “Terra Galactica”Thomas: What’s that?Kuan: It’s called a Structure Deck. Shouldn’t be used for dueling on it’s own, but you bought that booster, right? So you should be fine.Thomas looked concerned.Thomas: But my friends have never even told me of this Structure Deck! Kuan smiled.Kuan: I would be surprised if they knew about it. I designed it myself, you know.Then, Kuan threw the Structure Deck at Thomas and walked away.Thomas: But wait! You never even told me your name!Kuan: I did.Thomas: I know. I just wanted to continue this cliché opening for a fanfic. Later that day... ????: Ok, Thomas, show me what you got!Thomas: Right, Pete!Thomas and Pete: DUEL! Pete: 4000 Life Points, 6 cards in hand. No card on the field.Thomas: 4000 Life Points, 6 cards in hand. No card on the field. Pete: I begin! I Summon my Vorse Raider in Attack Position! And then, I’ll place 1 card face-down. I end my turn.Thomas: I just drew the perfect combo! Darn cliché for a first turn. Thomas: I place 1 monster in face-down Defense Position! Along with 1 face-down card. I’ll end it there. Round 2: Pete: 4000 Life Points, 4 cards in hand. Vorse Raider + 1 facedown S/T.Thomas: 4000 Life Points, 4 cards in hand. 1 Set monster + 1 face/down S/T. Pete: Alright, my move! (draws) Vorse Raider, attack his face-down card! (Thomas’s face-down card flips up, revealing Alien Hero - Gamma Ray) Thomas: My card’s effect activates! Return to my hand! The Alien Hero returns to Thomas’ hand.Pete: What?Thomas: Whenever an Alien Hero’s flipped up, it returns to my hand! And it’s second effect activates, giving me 400 Life Points! (4000 + 400 = 4400)Thomas: But that’s not all! I activate my trap! Beam of Destruction! Destroy Vorse Raider!A shining copy of Gamma Ray appeared above Thomas’ hand, blasting a surge of energy at the Vorse Raider.Pete: ARGH! I end my turn. Thomas: (draws) I set 1 monster, along with 1 face-down. Your turn. Round 3: Pete: 4000 Life Points, 5 cards in hand. 1 facedown S/T.Thomas: 4400 Life Points, 4 cards in hand. 2 face-down S/Ts. Pete: (draws) I activate my facedown card! Ultimate Offering! Which allows both of us to Normal Summon or Set as many monsters as we want, as long as we pay 500 extra Life Points per monster! Which I’m going to use! First, I summon Swordsman of Landstar in Attack Position.(500/1200) But then, at the cost of 500 Life Points, I tribute him to bring out my Summoned Skull! (2500/1200) Summoned Skull, attack his face-down card!Thomas: Come back, my Solar Flare!(Alien Hero - Solar Flare returns to Thomas’ hand.)Thomas: Now, Solar Flare! Sunlight Slash! Solar Flare runs up to Pete, and slashes him in the face.Pete: 4000 - 400 = 3600Pete: What? Thomas: Whenever my Solar Flare comes back to my hand, you lose 400 Life Points! Pete: Guess I’ll just end my turn. Thomas: (draws) Good. I activate Cyberfusion! Now, I can select 2 cards in my hand, and if they happen to be a part of any fusion, I can Special Summon that one to the field, ignoring any summon requirement, as long as I pay 500 Life Points for any other monster also involved in the fusion. And I pay 2000 Life Points! Thomas: 4400 - 2000 = 2400 Thomas: And I summon Alien Hero - Extraterrestus! (5000/2500) Pete: What? Thomas: Extra! Attack his Summoned Skull with Terraforge Hatred! Extraterrestus suddenly appeared behind Summoned Skull, and smashed him with his hand. Pete: No! Pete: 3600 - 2500 = 1100Thomas: However, I must show you my hand. Thomas holds up Alien Hero - Gamma Ray and Solar Flare, along with Cyber Brigade Base and Cyber Brigade.Thomas: I end my turn. Round 4:Pete: 1100 Life Points, 3 cards in hand. Ultimate Offering on the field.Thomas: 2400 Life Points, 4 cards in hand. Extraterrestus + 2 facedown S/Ts. Pete: (draws) I activate my face-down Call of the Haunted, to bring back Summoned Skull! (2500/1200) And then I equip him with Megamorph! Thomas: What?Pete: Which raises his ATK to 5000, just like your Extraterrestus! Now, Summoned Skull! Attack Extra with Thunder Storm! Thomas: I have no choice, Pete! Activate facedown! Reverse Trap! Pete: What? Thomas: Which decreases your monster’s ATK by equal to it’s current increase. And since it increased by 2500....Summoned Skull: 5000 - 2500 = 2500. 2500 - 2500 = 0.Pete: No!Thomas: Extraterrestus, crush his weakened Skull! Terraforge Hatred!Pete: NO!!! Pete: 1100 - 5000 = 0. Next chapter: Rise of Alpha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted November 23, 2007 Report Share Posted November 23, 2007 meh.Don't like it, sorry... It misses something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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