Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 a card I posted in other cards, thought it was worthy of the promotion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Very balanced. Just a few issues with capitalization. Nice picture. Although it is a little underpowered...make it lvl 7 i think. :] 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 The card's effect is balanced. The pic isn't too great though. Other than that, great job. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Very balanced. Just a few issues with capitalization. Nice picture. Although it is a little underpowered...make it lvl 7 i think. :] 10/10. I made it lvl 8 to work with trade in and such, as 7 and 8 don't make much dfference. and where did you notice cap errors? I'll fix them. (typed out for easy editing)This card cannot be special summoned from your hand. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this monsters attack by half of the defense of the destroyed monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Not a bad card, but could use some fixing: Special Summon needs to be capitalized, you should put an ' in monster's, as it is showing possession (a normal grammar thing), replace attack with ATK when talking about the cards ATK points, and lastly, it should be DEF, in place of defense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Very balanced. Just a few issues with capitalization. Nice picture. Although it is a little underpowered...make it lvl 7 i think. :] 10/10. I made it lvl 8 to work with trade in and such' date=' as 7 and 8 don't make much dfference. and where did you notice cap errors? I'll fix them. (typed out for easy editing)This card cannot be special summoned from your hand. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this monsters attack by half of the defense of the destroyed monster.[/quote'] I will list the capitalization needed.S pecial S ummoned M onster M onster ' s DEF Otherwise it's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Actually, monster doesn't need capitalization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 oh well, fixed it anyway :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 oh DAMN. I always capitalize it. Sorry, I had no idea. X_X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 A little overpowered. Lower ATK to 800. Good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 800? ........That is underpowered. Unless you meant 1800? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 A little overpowered. Lower ATK to 800. Good pic. 7/10 how is a toon-based level 8 with 1900 ATK Overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doji33 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 7/10 sry but 1900 cant kill much.+ cant attack the turn its summoned. itll probably die before it can attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus the multiple Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Pretty good 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Yeah, if the ATK was lowered to 800, it would be virtually unusable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 "toon-based?" Huh? *stares blankly* Explain please. And I'm sure he meant 1800. Maybe if it had 2000? It would be overpowered. 1900 is fine I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Oh! *Smacks head* You mean "toon-based" because it can't attack first turn right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 "toon-based?" Huh? *stares blankly* Explain please. And I'm sure he meant 1800. Maybe if it had 2000? It would be overpowered. 1900 is fine I think. Oh! *Smacks head* You mean "toon-based" because it can't attack first turn right? aye :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Oh! *Smacks head* You mean "toon-based" because it can't attack first turn right? xD Two can play at that game! *SPAM* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwhkiller Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 pretty good, nice effect, not overpower, by the way is monster not ( Monster)overall good job 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kousotu Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Can't please'em all lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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