ZeroLuneth Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 [spoiler=Prologue]In the year 2397 There was two main affiliates in this on going conflict one was the Engetsu Federation Armed Forces and the other is the Asahi Imperial Army each with a strong hate for each other and both trying to gain control over the small planet of Denrin. The main difference between these armys was their methods of destruction while the Hakumei Etsuei Gunryo tryed to keep the casulaties to a mininum and protect the refugees of war while trying to defeat the Keimei Taiyou Gunryo to save the lives of many while the Keimei Taiyou Gunryo destroys everything in their paths not caring about the lifes of others while thier cruel leader tried to take this planet for him self but after years of years of war it looked like the battles would never stop but during this time a group of young men and women formed a rebellion called Mikomi hoping to put an end to this war and their leader (who I have not thought of yet) dreamed of an idealistic future where there was no war and where every one could get along. Even though his forces were not that large he hoped that his group could be the deciding factor in this ongoing war. [spoiler=Character Entrant Form]Name:Age:Gender:Appearance:Background:Personality:Picture:Fighting Style: Optional, character doesn't have to be a fighter. Note: By posting your character you agree to allow me to make some adjustments to the character. If I edit your character I will inform you that I did. Please point out any errors if you see them. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 Some of your gratuitous Japanese is definitely wrong. If you PM me with the English meanings, I can help with better names. However, there's one thing that I noticed that I can fix immediately. Erekutorikku Suzu > Denrin (although I honestly think that plain old Electric Bell in English is a better name, IMHO). As for the story itself, I'll submit something, but not now. It seems like a good idea, albeit a bit cliched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 Almost sounds like this guy is like Loluche from Code Geass...Anyway, seems kind of wierd. Wierd as in common.I'll wait to see more before I choose to submit anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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