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OCG can be improved:

 

The Material Monsters for a fusion need to be between quotes: ""

so you have, for the example of the Twin-headed Hamster": "Hamster" + "Hamster".

Same for Dwarf Hamster: Bubonic Vermin must be between quotes.

Don't forget the point at the end !

When you say "All "Hamster" cards...", that supposes only the "Hamster" monster. Say instead: "All the monsters with "Hamster" in their name..."

 

Finally, the overpowered Rainbow Hamster and Twin-headed Hamster: It looks like it is easy to have them, they don't have drawback effects (they don't even have an effect at all). These two were the silly ones. Reduce their ATK to something between 1000~2400, same for DEF. As ALL the cards you made are Rare, it supposes they're a bit easy to get (except Two-headed). To be more realistic, make the two fusions Ultra rare at least.

 

Overall the idea is pretty funny, and I like it. 6,5/10. Keep it up.

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