crazybutt Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 [attachment=12867][attachment=12866][attachment=12868] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devil.dreamz Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 not to bad a lil 2 powerful doe 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 The first card is a ritual monster... it's effect is totally off for means of summoning. And the second is just flat out overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazybutt Posted November 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Here is the spell for "Dark Magicain- Lightning God"[attachment=12881] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazybutt Posted November 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Ok look at this[attachment=12883] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterOfMagicians Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 The second one needs to be redone. The wording is barely legible in it.3/10As far as your Dark Magician - Lightning God.Grammar errors in the description box.Picture is niceAttack and Defense rediculously strong for a normal monster card.Star Level of 10? So 3 sacrifices in order to bring out a monster with no special abilities to defend itself, and it is called a god?Can be better,E for effort.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Well, the Spell card you posted made an already overpowered card 10 times more overpowered. The effect is ridiculously insane for a Super Rare card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 love th pic for the dark magician but you need work on your flavor text and he is far to strong it b good if he had a draw back like (this card is destroyed if you opponent has no monsters on there side of the field) or (you must tribut dark magican girl or this card will be destroyed at the end phase of your 2nd turn) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 wow. That spell is broken as hell. "infinite?" Honestly. Work on your grammar, too. I don't really like these... "magician" is spelled wrong, as is "captain." 2/10 for trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazybutt Posted November 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 I don't CARE!!!! if it's overpowered or My spelling is wron, Just look at this[attachment=13017] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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