MacaruOsamaru Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 I am accepting people into the TCN. for more Information PM me. Prologue Twenty years ago a group was formed honoring the Goddess Nephthys. The Clan was known to be disbanded but it would appear that they didn't. Chapter 1: The Seal The day started like any other. Macaru awoke got dressed grabbed his deck and headed for the usual spot. He made it to the ally where all of his friends would meet. When he made it there only Richy had showed up yet."Where is everyone?" Macaru asked."Not sure, but i was thinking that we should sneak into that excavation spot down the street." Macaru knew of the spot. A few weeks ago a group of people showed up and found a cave under the old abandoned house where Macaru and his friend used to hang out."Yeah but we are not allowed to go in there anymore.""That's what you think.""They took away our keys.""Not all of them." Ricky pulled out a small golden key from his pocket and threw it to Macaru."Sweet" Macaru and Ricky left the spot not even waiting for the rest of the gang to show up. When they made it to the house they went up to the door and unbolted the lock. Once inside they locked the door again to make sure they were safe. They walked down the hall and found the cave. Macaru went into the cave and Ricky stayed outside to keep watch. Inside the cave Macaru instantly found a wall that was in his way. He reached out and touched the wall. The wall started glowing and dissipated. Macaru walked through the wall and found himself in a small dark room. In the room there was a small amount of light coming from a hole up above. In the center of the room was a small case that was locked shut with a wax seal. Macaru walked over and broke the seal to open the case. As soon as Macaru opened the case he fell to his knees unconscious. Chapter 2: The Dream "Nephia....Nephia...........Wake up lord Nephia!" Macaru found himself in a room lying in a bed. "Thank Nephthys your awake." Macaru looked at the person who was talking to him. "Hurry we must go. The base has been breached." Macaru looked around and recognized the room as one of the rooms in the old house. "Nephia! Please we have to go. Now!""Who are you?""Lord please we don't have time for games." Another man ran in."Lord we have to go. Get your deck and lets get out of here." The person ran over and grabbed a deck that was sitting on the table besides the bed Macaru was in. Suddenly the person burst into flames and disappeared."When will they ever learn. Okay look I'm your adviser Nihnus. Grab the deck and lets go.""Okay." Macaru sat up in his bead and grabbed the deck. He stood up and followed Nihnus down the stairs to the main entrance. Macaru stopped suddenly, "We have to hide the deck.""Wait, Why.""So that they cant get it." Macaru ran down the hall and pressed on the wall. The wall moved aside and Macaru ran inside. He took a case and put the deck inside it."Here use this." Nihnus handed Macaru a wax seal. Macaru pressed the wax to the case and placed the case on a rock. As they were leaving a wall of stone appeared behind them. They left the secret room and closed the door. "This way." Nihnus started running farther down the hall. Macaru chased after him but was suddenly grabbed by someone who had been hiding around a corner."Now then. Were are the cards." Macaru recognized the voice and tried to remember from were but then everything went black. Chapter 3 the beginning: “Wake up, Wake up” Macaru found woke up and saw his friend Ricky. “Hey man, you okay? You were gone for a while, so I came and found you knocked out cold on the floor. I think you hit your head on the ground.” Macaru remembered that he had been about to look into the case when everything went blank. Suddenly he realized that the case was gone.“Where’s the case!” “Oh that old thing.” Ricky pointed over to a small black case that was sitting on the ground near the entrance. “What’s in it? I can’t get it to open.”“I don’t know I haven’t opened it either.” Macaru stood up but got dizzy and fell back down. “Don’t worry I’ll get it.” Ricky walked over to the case and picked it up. He tried to open it but it seemed to be stuck. “Here he threw the case and it landed right in front of Macaru. Macaru picked it up and pulled on the top of the case. “What the hell, how did you do that?” Ricky ran over to Macaru and looked inside the case. Macaru pulled out what looked like a card sleeve. Inside of that were a few really rare cards, a few cards neither of them had every seen. Macaru went through the cards one more time and saw that there was a not in the case. He reached in and picked it up. He opened it and pulled out a letter. To Whom It May Concern: The card that you have found must not be used. The Nyphthys cards were my creation and were sought after by a man named Pegasus. He had invented the game of Duel Monsters and was angry that I mad a card more powerful than his precious God Cards. I am giving them to you because he has sent goons to try and take them from me. I needed a place to hide them and I can only trust the clan. You were destined to find this box since the day I hid the cards. The prophecy said that you would be blessed by many of the most powerful cards. I don’t know what that means, but I think that I have to give you my most rare card. Keep it with you until the day you need it. I hope that you will be able to use the card for what ever it is meant for.P.S. you can trade any of the card except the Nyphthys cards and the god.Your Clansman,Nephia While Macaru was reading the letter Ricky looked into the Case and found a card that was placed upside down. He picked it up and looked at the card. “Oh my god. Macaru look at this!” Macaru looked over from the letter to see that Ricky was holding a real copy of Obelisk the Tormentor. “Oh my god is, is that what I think it is?”“Yeah it is. It’s the lost Obelisk.”“What do you mean lost? We have it now.” Dude this is so great remember long why back when, we always used to pretend that we had the God Cards, and that we were in the Den City tournament. Well now that’s all true. Oh yeah and the letter said you can trade. Now you might finally be able to get that Ultimate Rare D.D.M.”“Your right lets head over to the UR shop.” The UR shop was a normal card shop but they would specialize in ultimate rare cards. Macaru and Ricky made the short walk to the UR shop and walked in the same way they had done for the past year. Always going to look at the ultimate rare cards.“Can I help you two?” it was the familiar voice of the shopkeeper.“Yeah my friend here has a card to sell you.”“Really you don’t say.” Macaru walked up to the counter pulled out the sleeve and pulled out a ghost rare Power Tool Dragon and placed It in front of the shopkeeper. “Well, well, I never thought that you would actually get a rare card like that. I’ll give you 70$ for it. What do you say?”“Sure.” The shopkeeper took the card and placed it in a box beneath the counter. “Here you go.” He pulled out 70$ and handed it to Macaru.“Oh, and can I buy that D.D.M., the Gren Maju Da Eiza, and a Golden Homunculus?”“Here you go.” The shopkeeper pulled out the cards and handed them to Macaru.Macaru and Ricky left the shop and headed towards Trade Central. They made it there and right away a guy ran up to them.“Hey, don you by chance maybe have a ultimate rare Feather Shot card.” Macarureached into the sleeve that had all of his rares. “Wow I do actually. What will you trade me for it?” “Well I don’t have much but I can give you this Rainbow Dragon card, please say yes.” “Yeah sure here you go.” Macaru gave the guy the Feather Shot and put the Rainbow Dragon in his card sleeve. “Thank you so much.” The guy ran off yelling and telling all of the people about Macaru. A guy wearing a black cloak with weird purple lines on it walked up to Macaru. “I see that you have a Rainbow Dragon. You wont be able to use that without this.” He pulled out a deck box from inside his cloak. This is my crystal beast deck. I’ll give it to you if you give me that Ultimate rare Red Dragon archfiend that you have.” “Alright. Sure.” Macaru took the deck box and handed the guy the Red Dragon Archfiend. “Thanks.” The man walked away. “Hey Macaru who was that? “No clue, I’ve never seen him before. Hey, lets get out of here. I’m getting a headache. Macaru and Ricky walked back to the usual spot and when they got there they found all of the rest of the gang. “Hey guys.” Suddenly Macaru got a familiar feeling and fell down unconscious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 The prologue is too short. Kind of a short chapter but makes me want to read chap. 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MacaruOsamaru Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 The prologue is too short. Kind of a short chapter but makes me want to read chap. 2. for the prologue, every other chapter will be adding to the back story. (I know it might get confusing but that's how it is. and in truth the first chapter was only an introduction to get people hooked. oh yeah and i have chapters 3 and 4 ready i just need name ideas. (Sadly i am really bad at making up good names for people.)Sorry, that i haven't added chapter 4 yet i'm still working on the names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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