KrakenNLD Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Hai everyone... new here... just registered because then I can save every card I make. But heck, why not post my cards I created for everyone to see. I was previously busy with another set from the Elemental Dragons, but somebody also made it and I hate copying actually. But still, here is a sample if anyone wants to see that. [Dragon Egg](please ignore this one, it's simply a little extra) Anyhow, that is not how I was planning with this, I am now a bit more into another theme, and I decided to go and try to make Deity monsters. Actually, until now I don't have a LOT and I just use a few website's for any information about how that card could be created and their power. Not every card is done... so some you see another one, I will post them with them if they are done :). I know some pictures suck, but I can improve them, I just wanna create the effects first... since that is the first priority, other ones (I deeply like the Hypnus) just have the perfect picture already :P. Cards that have yet to be created:* Madness - Maniai (for "Rage - Lyssa" effect)* Goddess Night - Nyx (for "Old Age - Geras" + "Sleep - Hypnus")* Goddess Love - Aphrodite (for "Youth - Hebe" effect). * Some equip card that only works on Deity-monsters* Some traps which only work if a Deity monster is active* Some anti-deity cards (to make it a bit more balanced). Mistakes I found out AFTER previewing but are too lazy to actually alter them now:* "Justice - Dike" needs a: "shuffle your deck" in his effect.* "Memory - Mnemosyne" needs the extra effect that also all monsters with the same name are also destroyed. What stands now is just that it's looking when you summon, not when it's already on the field what is the point.* "Strife - Eris" ... smae story as "Justice - Dike". Needs a shuffle. Ideas:* Change effect; "Youth - Hebe" to:"FLIP: Put 1 "Youth - Hebe" and "Goddess Love - Aphrodite" from your deck to your hand. Then shuffle your deck. If "Goddess Love - Aphrodite" is in your graveyard. This monsters attack is increases with 2000 points." * Make Aphrodite effect also:"When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Youth - Hebe" from your graveyard face up on the field in ATK position".(aphrodite herself is slightly weaker then a powered-up Hebe) Well? How am I doing actually? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Good for now.Your OCG needs correcting and the effects are decent.7.5/10-Some Pics could be better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrakenNLD Posted November 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Thanks, after not knowing what OCG first was (until I found some guide) ("Original Card Grammar" right?) I kinda do agree, taken a look at some cards which do exist in the real place and set them next to each other. About the pictures, that I do agree. Some pictures are good (Hypnus is the one I like the most as a picture) but for instance Eris. For the titan version I only found black and white pictures, together with some other as well (Garas). I am now looking for a better picture for Nemesis. Until now I found one, but I don't know if it's okay (comes from a game, ah well, as long as the art is good). Well, it's better then that black and white picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 they are ok 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Dark Dragon Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrakenNLD Posted November 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 BUMP! But have no sweat, I only bump when I have new ones :). So here are the 2 rituals in the set. Effect: "This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "War Ritual". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as Tribute from the field or your hand. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent’s Life Points." Normal ritual info + Spear Dragon text actually without the going to DEF-position :p. Should be right :). Effect: "This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Love Ritual". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more as Tribute from the field or your hand. When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the original ATK of the destroyed monster. When this monster is destroyed, special summon 1 "Youth - Hebe" from your graveyard on the field." Normal Ritual + Guardian Angel Joan with the effect that also "Youth - Hebe" will be back on the field (to use the effect of Hebe). What then makes Hebe in terms of ATK even with Aphrodite. The 2 ritual Magic Cards: Other News: Also, "Fear - Phobos" and "Panic - Deimus" have been made. Which mainly focus on the ability to get "God War - Ares" Ritual cards in your hand. (in the stories, Phobos + Deimus were Ares his sons). But I seem to have a problem finding a good picture for both of them. I only get the moons of Mars (which makes sense as Mars is also the God of War in Roman Mytholigy, the same as Ares which is the Greek variant). So far, both Phobos + Deimus look like this:Phobos:LVL4/Effect/DARK/Common/Deity/1700ATK/900DEF"FLIP: Place 1 "Panic - Deimus" from your deck to your hand. Your deck is then shuffled. If "Panic - Deimus" is face-up on the field, this card ATK is increased with 400. When this card is destroyed as result of battle, place 1 "War Ritual" from your deck to your hand."Deimus:LVL4/Effect/DARK/Common/Deity/1100ATK/1700DEF"FLIP: Place 1 "Fear - Phobos" from your deck to your hand. Your deck is then shuffled. If "Fear - Phobos" is face-up on the field, this card ATK is increased with 400. When this card is destroyed as result of battle, place 1 "God War - Ares" from your deck to your hand."So far, I am searching for good pictures for both the brothers. But it's pretty annoying... unless everyone want to see the vase variant again. (see "Old Age - Garet" how that looks :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishfood20 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 great cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 dude good cards, some of the pictures seem uh, to not fit, and i dont really like pictures with words on them but hey, anywhom 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aftex Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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