Huntar! Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Sarcasm is excepted, to an extent. And you can tell someone that you dont like their poem, without being an ass about it. But thats only on poems that people dont want real comments on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Sarcasm is excepted' date=' to an extent. And you can tell someone that you dont like their poem, without being an ass about it. [b']But thats only on poems that people dont want real comments on.[/b] Seriously? So if I don't like it, I'm not even allowed to voice my opinion? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Sarcasm is excepted' date=' to an extent. And you can tell someone that you dont like their poem, without being an ass about it. [b']But thats only on poems that people dont want real comments on.[/b] Seriously? So if I don't like it, I'm not even allowed to voice my opinion? No, you can use sarcasm and say that you don't like it without being an ass about it on poems that the creator doesn't want comment's on. At least that's what I understand. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 That sums it up, you can voice your opinions as you please if the writer doesn't say otherwise. =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 heres a poem i wroteyou can post your commentsI am the hawk bold and strongWith a wingspan a foot longI am the hawk with powerful sightI have a frighting biteI am the hawk with powerful clawesI am protected by many lawsMy lifespan can be longI am the hawk bold and strongnot everything is true because i wanted it to rhyme. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 good poem =DA Poem about a Bird AWESOME.... (FYI: The Eagle is protected by laws a hawk isn't.. =3 but oh well XD) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 heres a poem i wroteyou can post your commentsI am the hawk bold and strongWith a wingspan a foot longI am the hawk with powerful sightI have a frighting biteI am the hawk with powerful clawesI am protected by many lawsMy lifespan can be longI am the hawk bold and strongnot everything is true because i wanted it to rhyme. Never compromise the message you're trying to tell for better rhymes. And a quick html tip: you don't have to align/center every line. Put [ align=center] at the beginning' date=' and the [ /align'] at the very end of the poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 ok thanks for the tips Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 The hawk's wingspan is only 1 foot long from wingtip to wingtip? lol It doesnt really flow like it could. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 [align=center]HoursWithin These HoursThey will fight for powers, Within these Hours [/align] [align=left]One Divinity,Divine powers.But this entity,Will die these hours.[/align][align=right]One thief,Hungry for power.Will make this godFear and cower.[/align][align=left]One battleFor this power.No one can stop it,so we hide in towers[/align][align=right]One HourTo gain this power.and kill that god,then blood showers.[/align] [align=center]This Anarchic warIt will not endWith light pink rosesstained dark red. but we must fightfor what is oursto seek the light within these hours within these hoursthe world will diebut the fight for powerswill forever cry[/align] within these hourswithin those hours Hours Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Loved that poem, man. ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Wow Nazello awesome Poem...=D 10/10=3 and a positive rep... ;D [/jking] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 scary.. O.o but awesome =3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 i didn't think it would be that popular. aweshum =D i had to use a rhyme generator website Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 [align=center]"He was riding his bike""When the lightning strike""And now he can read really fast""He's good at science and math""Black Docter"[/align]-Whitest kid's you know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Warning:poemLips are redLove is blackTime is shortLife is long No rhyme.Bets: You would all be like "OMG DEEP" when in reality its a crap poem.Shame on you all. MAKE BETTAH POEMZ NAO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Your poem isn't good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 The poem was terrible yes, like the rest of the 2 second typed up poems in this thread :PPeople need to take it to a new level -_- Thanks Hunter for being such a douche. :P (Edit post whore) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Warning Edited poemLips meet Love is sweetTime never sleepsand life never weeps better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 i would put it like this: Your Lips are lovingBut your love is taintedAnd my time is so shortSo we must make our love long lolieditedatrollpoem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Butuguyz r-'nt feelin mah poem :P it deep. it very philosophical.lol. yeah, not horrendous edits ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Let's usher in the "Hardcore, gangster Hip Hop" age of YCM. My words are so disgusting, they leave your ears inflictedMy rhymes are sadistic and unrestrictedMy lyrics are ingenious, uneasily contradictedThe reality in what I spit cannot be depictedI'll paralyze your mother, piss in her mouth and let her drownTo me, the world's better off if she's not aroundAnyone who'd birth you needs to be foundAnd destroyed like silence penetrated by sound SOMEBODY TAKE IT FROM HERE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 It only sounds good if you say it really slow and rap it like a 20 year old white boy trying to act like hes a gangsta. bastards dont know about my rhymesI rap with them about my crimesI been lookin for a new crewI'll make your face black and blueThey dont know what I've been throughThey aint even got a clueSo I pull out my gun, and cock it tooI aim it at my head and I aim it at you tooI'll be laughin out loud as i pull the trigger Next parts up to someone else. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 weird. =/ very weird Princeyi never took you as one who raps. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 [align=center]"One day in YCM""YCmaker entered his lovely den""Once he entered he saw this messages of junk""From another mod, a member named Frunk""He asked if he wanted to be friends""Hang out together in the sunny sand""Maybe even see Father Wolf and ban""This was a poem that I made last night""And man, this poem is quite a fright"[/align] :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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