Official Poetry Thread

[Womi]

Hehe, funneh ones, Dark!

[Dark]

You laugh and you die.

Such a slow and painful death.

Make sure to laugh hard!

[Huntar!]

Makes no sense. ;-;

[Dark]

Makes no sense. ;-;

 

You need to find the deeper meaning hidden beneath the words.

[OMGAKITTY]

You laugh and you die.

Such a slow and painful death.

Make sure to laugh hard!

 

My interpretation: We're all going to die one day, so make the most of your life now, and laugh it up.

[Dark]

You laugh and you die.

Such a slow and painful death.

Make sure to laugh hard!

 

My interpretation: We're all going to die one day' date=' so make the most of your life now, and laugh it up.

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Close enough.

 

It basically means if you don't have laughter, it seems like you die earlier. Not literally, however.

[Altαir]

Actually, when you have fun, your life goes by much faster than when your bored.

[Dark]

Actually' date=' when you have fun, your life goes by much faster than when your bored.

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But if you are bored, you feel like there is no point to living.

[Huntar!]

Nearly every single day

I see you come my way

So I look at you in disguist

Just the way I must.

 

It wont work well, dear

'bout time you need to hear

As much as you want to try

cant hurt this kind of guy.

 

I say your funking psycho

And look like a dyke oh!

Well my dear Im crazier than thou

I'll tell ya if you dont know how.

 

I'll start a war; a war of words

Screw guns; they're for the birds

I'll write a poem to beat you round

And maybe kick you while your down.

 

My dear I'm not here to play

You want to play, now play my way

God you dont give up

You were just a lost little pup.

 

Oh so weak and so feeble

Just not meant for people

Give up while you're behind

No need to hit rewind.

 

No need to relive the memories

That you cherrish here

So now I'll be your tease;

That you just cant have my dear.

 

I'll be all that you would fix

I'm changing, just for you

I'll see what makes you tick

And see what makes you blue.

 

From here on out watch your back

I'll be somewhere near

Plotting, waiting for my attack

Of words you need to hear.

[Kitty]

Nearly every single day

I see you come my way

So I look at you in disguist

Just the way I must.

 

It wont work well' date=' dear

'bout time you need to hear

As much as you want to try

cant hurt this kind of guy.

 

I say your f***ing psycho

And look like a dyke oh!

Well my dear Im crazier than thou

I'll tell ya if you dont know how.

 

I'll start a war; a war of words

Screw guns; they're for the birds

I'll write a poem to beat you round

And maybe kick you while your down.

 

My dear I'm not here to play

You want to play, now play my way

God you dont give up

You were just a lost little pup.

 

Oh so weak and so feeble

Just not meant for people

Give up while you're behind

No need to hit rewind.

 

No need to relive the memories

That you cherrish here

So now I'll be your tease;

That you just cant have my dear.

 

I'll be all that you would fix

I'm changing, just for you

I'll see what makes you tick

And see what makes you blue.

 

From here on out watch your back

I'll be somewhere near

Plotting, waiting for my attack

Of words you need to hear.

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Great as always Princey....

Depressing (only cuz I'm depressed[big suprise])

I'll post one later.... =/ if i have time

[Kitty]

My poem/song/venting rage

 

(It's out of stanza and it's not finished it's just a rough draft)

 

Love has fallen

Depression has prevailed

Prolonging my suffering

Making my mind frail

I feel as though I’ve lost my calling

And that my body is nothing more

 

Oh how I wish I was on a shore

Where my mind was free to soar

But no I’m stuck here

Thinking of you in the silence

You thoughts bring violence

Upon my fragile heart

 

Why do you do this baby?

You feel me with doubt

Yet I still want to be with you without a doubt

But how can I when you do the treason

Upon my hearts condition

And my state of mind

 

 

(Whatcha'll think?)

[OMGAKITTY]

I don't think forelonging is a word?

[Kitty]

I don't think forelonging is a word?

 

OMGAKITTY in poems you can make up words... i took it outta yours and darkys books of bending poetry my way... =D

that and i didn't know another word to use any suggestions?

 

Edit: Forlonging is for a long while

[OMGAKITTY]

Well even making up a word to fit, it doesn't look right in the context.

Prolonging?

[Kitty]

hmmm yep i like it... I'm changing it now thanks

O.A.K(lol xD)

[Huntar!]

Kitty, you need to get happy. Uh, try masturbation. :)

[Kitty]

O.o WTF?!

No.... i refuse....

[OMGAKITTY]

Kitty' date=' you need to get happy. Uh, try masturbation. :)

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Q4T

[Kitty]

Kitty' date=' you need to get happy. Uh, try masturbation. :)

[/quote']

 

Q4T

 

 

Getting Laid works too... =/

and this relats to poetry how?

[OMGAKITTY]

Kitty' date=' you need to get happy. Uh, try masturbation. :)

[/quote']

 

Q4T

 

 

Getting Laid works too... =/

and this relats to poetry how?

 

Rapadapdap,

You need to fap

It relieves stress,

Keeps you from being a mess,

Rapadapdap

You need to fap.

[Huntar!]

OMGAK explained things to you better than I could.

[Kitty]

yeah Princey.... but then i couldn't stare at your avi

 

Thanks OMGAK

[Dark]

Living in a box.

So unfortunate.

I want a big house.

 

Try to decipher the meaning of that.

[Kitty]

Dark your a hobo who wants a house but you got to settle with breaking into other peoples houses to user their internet?

[Dark]

Dark your a hobo who wants a house but you got to settle with breaking into other peoples houses to user their internet?

 

Not even close.

 

You should really make an Official Quote Thread, because people like myself want to post short quotes or blurbs of text with meaning that is not suitable for a poetry thread.