Dark Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 But you wrote it with a certain meaning at hand. The meaning I got from this is the humdrum of life, how repetitive it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 At least half the active fanfics aren't about yugioh in that section. I want that section's description reworded... And of the half that aren't yugioh fanfics, at least 1 of them isn't even fanfiction. Just put a PG-X warning on it, and it'll be fine.But you wrote it with a certain meaning at hand. The meaning I got from this is the humdrum of life' date=' how repetitive it is.[/quote'] All works of art are created with a meaning behind it. That doesn't mean its the same meaning that everyone will get. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Sorry; I forgot the "your new" in front of it. EDIT: It'll be locked on sight if it gets too bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 xD lolz... Well we're sorry ol great Prince(y) that we are not as giftly talented as you are in this art at so which you call a awesome epic poem and the songs...... =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Fool, You had a dollar, From your dad, yes?He said you were the best,Of all the West. You, out of your joy,Went, "More, more, more!"So you went to explore,Dashed through the door. Walking to the market,You found Ben Will,He said you want two quarters,For dollar bill? You thought his offer,Made complete sense,So you traded your bill,For 50 cents. Two is more than one, you said! As you were walking,You met Ms. Lime,"I will take two quarters,For three nice dimes?" You thought her offer,Made complete sense,So you traded your change,For 30 cents. Three is more than two, you said! Walking with great haste,You saw Big Pickle.He said, "30 cents please!For 4 nickles?" You thought his offer,Made complete sense,So you traded your change,For 20 cents. Four is better than three, you said! You were running now,Tripped on Renny,He said, "20 you have?"For 5 pennies? You thought his offer,Made complete sense,So you traded your change,For 5 cents. Five is better than four, you said! You now started walking,Back to your home,And explained to your dad,Why you came home. When you showed him change,He asked, "What's this?"You told him your journey,With very much bliss. Your dad took your arm,And hugged you a lot"And that's why your the bestOf all the West." (Made to explain stupidity) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 @GL: That was actually really good. I thought the"You thought his offer,Made complete sense,So you traded your change,For x cents."got a little repetitive though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 That was a funny poem. :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 "I lost myself in the shadows,I'm lost again in the dark,I didn't notice it at least,I didn't avoid it at last. I can't see between the darknessthat surround me when I walk.I don't know if that's my faceor the one I want to display. How many times others said mehow I must talk or must act.So many times they said mewhen to love, to laugh or to cry. And I do not know, I'm not sure,if that's my reflection or not.Today my mask is so strongthat I can't remove it from me." Poem by dark-spider of DeviantArt. I have permission to use her poem here. Credit is below. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 wow really good poem...The original writer did great... =3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 I only liked the mask metaphor about that poem, the rest was meh-ish. I feel dA people don't make good poems. And they can't do anything for the lulz. Wishy, washy tub.I step inside to find a,Small rubber duckie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Meh i don't like rubber duckies=/ The darkness surrounds meThe coldness stills my wramthThis sickness is engulfingCrushing me in it's wake What am I to do?As i grow weaker from this battleI begin to ask myself Will I lose or Will I win? My body is rattledfrom this endless battleI see the darkness engulfingand i urge to flee But i am stuck hereand i can't even shead a tearthis time is nearI must fight or face what i fear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Last two lines of the last stanza is the only part I liked. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 -sigh- yeah I like those two as well... meh.. I'm too sick to write poems.. I don't wanna think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Excuses aren't going to get you anywhere in life. Being ill should not change the quality of your poetry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Excuses aren't going to get you anywhere in life. Being ill should not change the quality of your poetry. really I'm dizzy headed, can't think, My whole body hurts... and I may be getting Swine Flu on top of it all..... =/ plus... I can't rest..... but Here is a poem Green of the leavesBrushing around himas he stalks his preyin the hay His tail switches slightlyAs his eyes travel lightlyHis senses on highas he spies On his little treatScurrying in the heatit's tiny heartbeat Sounding in his ear He tenses his musclesReady to springand get his tastey mealbefore it can hide. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Memories of you,That time when you got so drunk,It was amazing. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Memories of you' date='That time when you got so drunk,It was amazing. ;)[/quote'] This is a WTF haiku How did you kno i got drunk.. >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Memories of you' date='That time when you got so drunk,It was amazing. ;)[/quote'] This is a WTF haiku How did you kno i got drunk.. >.> NO WAY. Not you. The last line is "suggestive", so NOT YOU. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Memories of you' date='That time when you got so drunk,It was amazing. ;)[/quote'] This is a WTF haiku How did you kno i got drunk.. >.> NO WAY. Not you. The last line is "suggestive", so NOT YOU. I kno but to messWith your simple minded BrainIs very Funny ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 all of your damn cheaphaikus that dont make much senseare getting old fast Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Memories of you' date='That time when you got so drunk,It was amazing. ;)[/quote'] This is a WTF haiku How did you kno i got drunk.. >.> NO WAY. Not you. The last line is "suggestive", so NOT YOU. I kno but to messWith your simple minded BrainIs very Funny ;D You do not screw around with people writing suggestive poems. And why are YOU calling ME simple-minded. That should be switched around. Also, your haiku was horrible. And you have bad grammar and spelling. Please GTFO,You are really not wanted.Goodbye, forever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Now now, Dark, is that anyway to talk to Kitty? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I'm sorry, kitty.But please stop being stupid.kthxbai ppls. Another one: Row, row, row your boat.Into the pit of fire.Engulfed with magma. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 That made me chuckle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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