Official Poetry Thread

[Kitty]

Thats dark. ;-;

 

:twisted:

I never said i was an angel

 

and Dark I really don't care what other people like' date=' I read twilight i liked the books (preferably the 4th while they were on their honeymoon) but i [b']do not[/b] incorporate it in my life..... In fact i act vampirish cuz of my boyfriend... duh. =D

[Altαir]

Rhythm,

 

The beat from a wing,

Pounding softly on my ear,

Bringing joy to life.

 

The pound of a drum,

Booming loudly through the air,

Fear decsending down.

 

 

Melody,

 

Birds in early dawn,

Sweet sounds of joy echoing,

Brings me paridise.

 

Trumpets blaring so hard,

Rash notes of beautiful song,

Blasts my ears to bits.

 

I don't know. First try. I had peace in the house, so...

[Dark]

Thats dark. ;-;

 

:twisted:

I never said i was an angel

 

and Dark I really don't care what other people like' date=' I read twilight i liked the books (preferably the 4th while they were on their honeymoon) but i [b']do not[/b] incorporate it in my life..... In fact i act vampirish cuz of my boyfriend... duh. =D

 

Yes, we will obviously believe this to be true.

 

This is also an lulz haiku, but find a deeper meaning. Trust me, one or more exist.

 

The light bulb is cracked,

It will shine no more for me.

Time to buy (a) new one.

 

The (a) means an "a" should be there, but I didn't have enough syllables.

[Altαir]

I despise Haikus. Too simple = Kids in my class. Whenever we need to create a poem, the same thing.

 

My pencil moves fast,

As I write this Haiku down,

For my fun homework.

[Dark]

I despise Haikus. Too simple = Kids in my class. Whenever we need to create a poem' date=' the same thing.

 

My pencil moves fast,

As I write this Haiku down,

For my fun homework.

[/quote']

 

Haiku's are simple, yes, but they can hold just as much meaning as an actual poem can.

[OMGAKITTY]

I despise Haikus. Too simple = Kids in my class. Whenever we need to create a poem' date=' the same thing.

 

My pencil moves fast,

As I write this Haiku down,

For my fun homework.

[/quote']

 

Ohsnap! He's found out my secret! >_>;;

[Altαir]

I despise Haikus. Too simple = Kids in my class. Whenever we need to create a poem' date=' the same thing.

 

My pencil moves fast,

As I write this Haiku down,

For my fun homework.

[/quote']

 

Haiku's are simple, yes, but they can hold just as much meaning as an actual poem can.

 

That's exactly what my teacher told me. And he forced me to make a Haiku to "express my feelings".

[Dark]

I despise Haikus. Too simple = Kids in my class. Whenever we need to create a poem' date=' the same thing.

 

My pencil moves fast,

As I write this Haiku down,

For my fun homework.

[/quote']

 

Haiku's are simple, yes, but they can hold just as much meaning as an actual poem can.

 

That's exactly what my teacher told me. And he forced me to make a Haiku to "express my feelings".

 

TBQH, I am the only person in my English class for 2 (possibly 3 this year) years who could actually produce a poem with meaning and not some sheet I did in the morning while eating toast.

 

Bread and some butter,

The staple of all our lives,

Is simple like this.

[Huntar!]

I sit in this room

so cold and so dark

so filled with such gloom

just driving me stark

 

I look to the sky

so bright and so blue

I might just seem shy

But I think of you

 

I breath in and out

the air just so stale

I know its about

my face then grows pale

 

I'm dying from this

this same funking scene

Not filled with no bliss

It makes me so mean

 

I"m here freaking out

So snug and so small

I sit and I pout

Back against the wall

 

So I go berserk

Inside these damn walls

But nothing will work

And my body falls

 

I sit there dying

here, right on the floor

no, I'm not crying

but I do want more

 

So I then arise

To face my new fears

Arise from the lies

From all of my years

 

I found my way though

My great, great escape

a feeling so new

Now to face my fate

[Dark]

I read it out loud, and I feel like the syllables don't really match up, giving it a bad tone. :/

[Huntar!]

I wanted it to all be 5 syllables a line and to rhyme. I didn't read it aloud either.

[Dark]

It some cases your first word needed to be two syllables instead of one and vice versa.

[Huntar!]

yeah, i should read things alout before I post them, but whatever.

 

I had to change a few lines to find things to rhyme with them, and still had nothing for "escape" other than cape, rape, and ape.

[Dark]

Probably my last haiku for now.

 

The seasons will change.

They will pass us by again.

But always come back. / But always repeat.

 

Either of the last lines works.

[Huntar!]

Come back works better than repeat.

[Kitty]

I sit in this room

so cold and so dark

so filled with such gloom

just driving me stark

 

I look to the sky

so bright and so blue

I might just seem shy

But I think of you

 

I breath in and out

the air just so stale

I know its about

my face then grows pale

 

I'm dying from this

this same f***ing scene

Not filled with no bliss

It makes me so mean

 

I"m here freaking out

So snug and so small

I sit and I pout

Back against the wall

 

So I go berserk

Inside these damn walls

But nothing will work

And my body falls

 

I sit there dying

here' date=' right on the floor

no, I'm not crying

but I do want more

 

So I then arise

To face my new fears

Arise from the lies

From all of my years

 

I found my way though

My great, great escape

a feeling so new

Now to face my fate

[/quote']

 

Awesome poem Depressing as always Princey

[Huntar!]

Why thank you, ma chere.

[Kitty]

Ok no spanish or what ever it is unless you want to translate..... i get enough headaches from it in school thank you...

 

but btw: you are welcome Princey...

 

Poem

 

Darkness totally engulfing

the remains of my broken soul

With a heart in peices

 

=/ idk if it's (syllable wise) right but it's how i feel at the moment

[OMGAKITTY]

The sun shines so bright

I smell the scent of flowers

It is a good day

 

This thread is getting too gloomy.

[Kitty]

NO SUNSHINE!!!!!

and gloomy is good, pain is good, gloomy emotional pain makes you feel alive...

[Dark]

The sun shines so bright

I smell the scent of flowers

It is a good day

 

This thread is getting too gloomy.

 

The moon shines so bright,

I smell the scent of moonlight.

It is a good night.

[OMGAKITTY]

Rhyming haiku?

 

Classy.

[Huntar!]

Ok no spanish or what ever it is unless you want to translate..... i get enough headaches from it in school thank you...

 

but btw: you are welcome Princey...

 

Poem

 

Darkness totally engulfing

the remains of my broken soul

With a heart in peices

 

=/ idk if it's (syllable wise) right but it's how i feel at the moment

 

poem was a bit dark' date=' even for me. xD And it was french. ma chere means "my dear".

 

The sun shines so bright

I smell the scent of flowers

It is a good day

 

This thread is getting too gloomy.

 

YAY OUTSIDE YAY FLOWERS YAY LIFE I LOVE LIFE IN ALL OF ITS AMAZINGNESS WOOT

[Altαir]

Boo depression. Go optimism. You guys gotta start thinking the glass is half full... of tears...

[Dark]

Rhyming haiku?

 

Classy.

 

That was partially intended, but I didn't realize that all three lines were PERFECT rhymes.