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The Fey Star-Maidens of Moon and Sun ROTR


Saiba Aisu

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Not bad at all, but:

 

1. The Spell Card is a quick play, should be a normal spell

2. When numbering things, you'd use 1, not one.

3. Field and hand don't need to be capitalized

4. The wording for the spell, should read "This card can only be activated when,"

5. LIGHT and DARK need full capitals.

6. Forgot to capitalize Graveyard

7. That final monster is still way to overpowered.

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