Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Chapter Three up. Hope ya'll enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 fortunately by today's standards the original ygo characters can much less effective than they were back when the anime aired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 fortunately by today's standards the original ygo characters can much less effective than they were back when the anime aired.Huh, not being rude but the grammer in that sentence is messed up a bit so i don't really know what your trying to say. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 yeah well you read my PM, now you know what I'm getting at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Yeah. Chapter 4 would probably be up by now but I was stupid and didn't think of how I was going to build John's deck. So now I'm looking up Insect monsters on Wikia and I'm about half done with building his deck. Should I post their Deck Lists like I posted their descriptions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 depends on how many made up cards you put into their decks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I'm not using made up cards in this fic. Every card that is going to be used is going to be a real card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I posted David's, Ashley's, and John's Deck Lists. I hope they're okay they took forever to build and type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 that's good to hear, makes it easier not to cheat in the duels then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Chapter 4 up!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 David's victory was almost TOO easy, fortunately that will change....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 David's victory was almost TOO easy' date=' fortunately that will change.......[/quote']and that means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 he'll have to struggle later on, everyone will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Oh,well, yeah. Later in the story the duels will become much longer and more complex. Some duels might even take two or more chapters. We'll just have to wait and see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 just know you won't be able to attach as many chaps as you want in your first post. Eventually it'll cut you off (you'll know when you get there) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 awww that sux. come on i need more people than ragnarok to read and comment this. someone plz? Oh and ragnarok i really appreciate you reading and commenting on this thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 no problem. If you really want people to read this, I suggest you start PMing people. It's certainly the fastest way to get their attention Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 I've actually been reading this, but I'm kind of at a loss of words at how to describe it. Looks like I have to use what somebody else said.i liked itThis.It doesn't seem perfect to me, but I don't know what I would change to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 I've actually been reading this' date=' but I'm kind of at a loss of words at how to describe it. Looks like I have to use what somebody else said.i liked itThis.It doesn't seem perfect to me, but I don't know what I would change to make it better.Thx, that means a lot. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 see? There's more than just myself, you just have to wait until they know how to respond. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Yeah...Chap.5 will be up by Sat. night. School is taking up time so, yeah...Btw, should I give the Chapters names or is it fine the way it is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 oh I never care about chap names anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 It's not too bad for a first fanfic, don't worry about it.Continue writing, and you'll find that your style will automatically eventually suit more people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 I'm hoping to see the next chapter here soon.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 I'm hoping to see the next chapter here soon....It's coming soon don't worry. The latest it will be up is tomorrow night. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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