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[Shadow Zero]

it's code geass, you guys!

[spoiler=lelouch vi brittania commands you to watch it all now!]

 

 

[Sweet Lightning]

@Chaos: I like your new avi as well. :)

 

@Max: The Crusadians seem like a swarming archetype, providing draw power and plenty of Special Summoning opportunities. This could be excellent for Synchros, which I expect the Unnamed Character to have plenty of. ;) I like the Decks everyone has chosen, they're mixed in strategy and monsters! Is Chizuru based on anyone?

[chrid97]

yes that wat it was codw gueess

[Max Darkness]

@Max: The Crusadians seem like a swarming archetype' date=' providing draw power and plenty of Special Summoning opportunities. This could be excellent for Synchros, which I expect the Unnamed Character to have plenty of. ;) I like the Decks everyone has chosen, they're mixed in strategy and monsters! Is Chizuru based on anyone?

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@ Chaos: That's the one!

 

@ Sweet: My character's using the "Crusadian" archetype; the unnamed (since I have yet to decide whether she's American or not) character is using "Seiyaru" with additional support and the new "Cleanser" archetype which is built on getting one on the field and then swarming.

 

And Chizuru is there because I needed a female character. If anything, she's a hybrid of various people I know.

[chrid97]

i got some new names for my bloodlust deck here they are

scion

(sigh'-on) n. 1: a detached living portion of a plant joined to a stock in grafting, usually supplying solely aerial parts to a graft. 2: descendant; child. [from Middle English, in turn from Middle French cion, of Germanic origin, akin go Old High German chinan "to sprout, split open" from Old English cinan "to gape."]

sylva (also: silva)

(sill'-vuh) n. 1a: a title for a treatise on trees, or a descriptive list or catalog of trees. b: the trees of a particular region or period, collectively. (compare with flora). 2: a title for a collection of pieces, especially of poems; also, a thesaurus of words or phrases [from Latin, silva "forest." second definition after the title (Silvae) of Statius's collection of occasional poems

 

What do u think

[Max Darkness]

i got some new names for my bloodlust deck here they are

scion

(sigh'-on) n. 1: a detached living portion of a plant joined to a stock in grafting' date=' usually supplying solely aerial parts to a graft. 2: descendant; child. [from Middle English, in turn from Middle French cion, of Germanic origin, akin go Old High German chinan "to sprout, split open" from Old English cinan "to gape."']

sylva (also: silva)

(sill'-vuh) n. 1a: a title for a treatise on trees, or a descriptive list or catalog of trees. b: the trees of a particular region or period, collectively. (compare with flora). 2: a title for a collection of pieces, especially of poems; also, a thesaurus of words or phrases [from Latin, silva "forest." second definition after the title (Silvae) of Statius's collection of occasional poems

 

What do u think

 

Scion is fine, but Sylva is of course related to Sylvan, which means 'forests' or 'nature', which isn't so suitable for a group of re-born blood-thirsting demons, IMO.

[Sweet Lightning]

@Max: I see! Can't wait for the "Seiyaru" Archetype.

 

Also, I might be posting my set here, for OCG fixes and general opinions. After all, I'm still kind of a newbie. :)

 

@Chrid: Does your Bloodlust Deck have to do with trees? If it does, then good work. ;) Scion is fine...though I'm not sure about Sylva.

[chrid97]

k, ill see if i can make a new card

[Max Darkness]

After all' date=' I'm still kind of a newbie. :)

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...Says the Newb Defense League Champion...

[chrid97]

Name: BloodLust Duplicater Scion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 4

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Secret Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 1500/1400

Effect: When this card is normal summoned, flipped summoned, or special summoned special summon 2 "Scion Duplication Tokens" Dark attribute, fiend type, 1500/1400, lv 4. Once per turn you can special summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". Once there are 4 "Scion Duplication Token" destroy this card and replace it with "Scion Duplication Token" and inflict 500 points of damage to both players.

 

Name: Scion Duplication Token

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 4

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: NONE

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 1500/1400

Effect: When this card is removed from the field inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenet.

[Max Darkness]

Name: BloodLust Duplicater Scion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 4

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Secret Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 1500/1400

Effect: When this card is normal summoned' date=' flipped summoned, or special summoned special summon 2 "Scion Duplication Tokens" Dark attribute, fiend type, 1500/1400, lv 4. Once per turn you can special summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". Once there are 4 "Scion Duplication Token" destroy this card and replace it with "Scion Duplication Token" and inflict 500 points of damage to both players.

 

Name: Scion Duplication Token

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 4

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: NONE

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 1500/1400

Effect: When this card is removed from the field inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenet.

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OCG fix and balance:

 

When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 1400) in face-up Defense Position. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". If this card is targeted by an opponent's monster, you can switch the attack target to a "Scion Duplication Token" you control. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Tribute all "Scion Duplication Token" cards you control to inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the number of Tributed Tokens x 300.

[Sweet Lightning]

After all' date=' I'm still kind of a newbie. :)

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...Says the Newb Defense League Champion...

 

Haha...I guess I'm a modest guy. :) I mean, I still have little problems with OCG.

 

I'm still not as good as the creator of the Newb Defense League though, judging from our 1 on 1. XD

 

@Chrid: OCG: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Scion Duplication Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 1400). Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". If you control 4 "Scion Duplication Tokens", destroy this card and Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". When this effect is activated, inflict 500 damage to you and your opponent.

 

EDIT: I was beaten to the punch by Max in terms of OCG fixes and posting. Haha. Take his, because he has the effect balanced out.

[chrid97]

Name: BloodLust Duplicater Scion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 4

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Secret Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 1500/1400

Effect: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 1400) in face-up Defense Position. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Scion Duplication Token". If this card is targeted by an opponent's monster, you can switch the attack target to a "Scion Duplication Token" you control. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Tribute all "Scion Duplication Token" cards you control to inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the number of Tributed Tokens x 300. When an ""Scion Duplication Token" is destroyed, the controller of the token takes 500 points of damage.

[Sweet Lightning]

You should include your Token's effect on your BloodLust Card and not make a separate card.

 

For example: Ojama Trio: Special Summon 3 "Ojama Tokens" (Beast-Type/LIGHT/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1000) in Defense Position on your opponent's side of the field. The tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. When an "Ojama Token" is destroyed, the controller of that token takes 300 points of damage.

[Max Darkness]

After all' date=' I'm still kind of a newbie. :)

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...Says the Newb Defense League Champion...

 

Haha...I guess I'm a modest guy. :) I mean, I still have little problems with OCG.

 

That's not modesty. That's self-depriciation.

 

 

I'm still not as good as the creator of the Newb Defense League though' date=' judging from our 1 on 1. XD

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...I'm only the leader... I didn't actually make this club...I just stepped into the void. -_-;

 

But thanks anyway.

 

 

@ Chrid97: Tokens only have effects if they are in some way unique or are used by numerous monsters.

[chrid97]

okay

i edited it

[Max Darkness]

I think you should take the damage when a token is destroyed by battle. It balances the up-to-1200 damage you'll inflict on your opponent.

[chrid97]

okay

[Sweet Lightning]

...I'm only the leader... I didn't actually make this club...I just stepped into the void. -_-;

 

But thanks anyway.

 

*facepalm*

 

Oops. I forgot. A slip of the words...

 

And what I was trying to say was: I can still keep getting better every day. :)

[chrid97]

done

[Necro Pheonix]

Well guys, I got my grade back for my math test. I got a B, which was just enough for me to get a B-, just enough to stay in the class.

[Max Darkness]

Well guys' date=' I got my grade back for my math test. I got a B, which was just enough for me to get a B-, just enough to stay in the class.

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Well Done.

 

 

EDIT: Chapter 3 is up: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-180747.html

[Sweet Lightning]

Well guys' date=' I got my grade back for my math test. I got a B, which was just enough for me to get a B-, just enough to stay in the class.

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Nice job, Sweeny! :) I have to take my math exam tomorrow, which could make or break me...I've been studying for four hours....

 

I'd better get an A. XD

[Shadow Zero]

well good luck. SL. i hope that you do well.

and guys, could we please refrain from the one word spam posts please? *stares hard at chrid as i says this*

[Sweet Lightning]

Thanks Chaos. :)

 

And, yes, Chrid, could you not post one word posts please? Posts like that don't really contribute to the discussion and are considered spam. If you want to tell us that your card is finished, edit your post instead of making a new one. :)

 

I look forward to your next BloodLust cards, BTW. It's shaping up to be an interesting set...