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OK' date=' so I lost my first 1 on 1 against Sweet Lightning. Can you guys tell me what's wrong with this card...

[spoiler=The Card I Need Help On']285869.jpg[spoiler=Lore]The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 5 different "The Dragon from the" monsters. This card gains the following effect(s) for each monster you control:

- EARTH: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls.

- FIRE: Once per turn, you can remove 1 non-FIRE monster your opponent controls from play. During the second End Phase after this effect was activated, Special Summon the removed from play monster.

- LIGHT: You can draw 1 card during each of your Standby Phases.

- WATER: This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up WATER monster on the field.

- WIND: This card can attack your opponent directly. This effect can only be used once per Duel.

 

 

My thoughts on it sometimes make me think about it my thoughts: The pic is super overused. The idea is very generic. the fact you can draw an extra card is an Exodia Turbo up Exodia Dragon and intense drae engine. Seaking Fish OTK Dragon of the Elements. The WIND part could just instantly win you a duel if your opponent has a field full but instant attack. The EARTH part is vaguely reminding me of a nerfed JD. Finally the FIRE part reminds me of D-Hero Doom Lord. Anyway this is a card I'm using for a contest just a quick idea:

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Here is my card:

 

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Lore: This monster can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control (this monster cannot be Set). This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage as long as this card is face-up on the field. Durin g each of your End Phases increase the ATK of this monster by 1000.

 

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Daily News this is the card I was talking

 

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[spoiler=Lore]The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 5 different "The Dragon from the" monsters. During your Draw Phase roll a six-sided die. The number you roll determines the effect you can use this turn.

1: Pay 1000 Life Points to destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls.

2: Remove 1 monster your opponent controls from play. During the second End Phase after this effect was activated, Special Summon the removed from play monster.

3: Draw a card during your Standby Phases.

4: Gains 300 ATK for each face-up WATER monster on the field.

5: Pay 1000 lifepoints to attack your opponent directly.

6: Gain 300 lifepoints for each monster you control.

 

 

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Oh sorry, let me think about that. A Luck Card huh?

1. A nerfed JD effect that only effects the Spells and Traps

2. Like a Doom Lord also

3. Like the one I already reviewed

4. If you fail a Seaking OTK you can re-attempt

5. 3 turns of rolling a 5 is a death toll sort of like a JD with a field

6. Increase Life Points like a Gift of the Mystical Elf

Really it reminds me of a whole bunch of cards combined into 1 single card that revolves around a certain roll.

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I review cards based on a comparison to a similar card, I forgot to give the overall I would give it an 8.9/10 the OCG seems fine with me. The fact that it activates during the Draw Phase is cool because I was making a card that would counter all effects that take place to negate effects that take place in the Standby Phase. Nice card overall.

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Thanks bakupenguin' date=' Chaos, and Ursus. Theirs just 1 problem, were best friends, so she told me who she likes just last night, and guess what... It ISNT me... crap...

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@ Sweeny: This may not be the advice you want to hear at this point, but give up.

 

You evidently have a good, lasting friendship with this girl which has taken time to build, and in my opinion, does not deserve to be wasted on a relationship.

 

You risk everything when you enter into a romantic attachment with someone. Now, that's fine if don't know each other that well. But when it's your best friend, you're putting a great friendship on the line.

 

If it doesn't work out, it can destroy everything; and you can lose a friendship that can be irreplaceable.

 

I'm just saying; be cautious. Rash actions might jepodise more than you think.

 

 

 

Well, Max, if you were anybody else I would have probably punched you in the face right now. But I didnt for 2 reasons

1. This is the internet, I cant punch you over the internet

2. I trust you enough that I know that you wouldnt just say that to screw me over. And your right. I'm going to take your advice and I thank you. It means a lot to me.

 

 

 

I'm glad you've seen my reasoning. And thanks for not physically assaulting me.

 

 

Club Username: Daily News

Why you want to join: It sounds like a good idea so I decided to join

Favorite Card: Great Maju Garzett FTW!!!

Do you play the game in real life: Yeah

How you were referred to the club: Sweeny Toad invited me

 

Accepted and Added.

 

 

I'm using for a contest just a quick idea:

[spoiler=Card]

Here is my card:

 

sxjhnc.jpg

 

 

Lore: This monster can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control (this monster cannot be Set). This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage as long as this card is face-up on the field. Durin g each of your End Phases increase the ATK of this monster by 1000.

 

 

OCG Fix:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters you control. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Any Battle Damage this card's controller takes is reduced to 0. During each of your End Phases' date=' this card gains 1000 ATK.

 

[i']Interesting and oddly balanced.[/i]

 

 

Club Username:kanurou

Why you want to join: looks fun!

Favorite Card: dark magician

Do you play the game in real life:use to

How you were referred to the club: Chaos zero

 

Accepted and Added. Oddly I wasn't informed of this acceptance...

 

 

hey anyone here like pokemon? if you do come join da arceus disciples.

 

Yes they do, but no advertising your own club here, okay? If you want to affiliate that's fine.

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