Max Darkness Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 [spoiler=]OCG Fix for "Memory of Pain". Activate only if a "Memory Requim" monster you controlled was destroyed by battle during the previous Battle Phase. Pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon the destroyed monster to a Memory Card Zone. Destroy all Level 4 or higher monsters whose ATK is higher than the Summoned monster's. The Summoned monster cannot declare an attack this turn. Want to talk about it/anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Well, I've never been exposed to outright bullying, but I've have been exposed to teasing. When I moved to my present home, I was dead alone and had very little friends. A lot of people couldn't understand my dialect, so I had to adapt to that new and quite scary environment. I had moved from one of the biggest cities of Norway to some sort of village where all the boys' attention lay in tractors and cars. I was never like them, as I had... shall we say special preferences. Such as yu-gi-oh for instance. During the years I've spent here I found out I had the diagnosis Asperger Syndrom, and that explained a lot to me; I learned the reason for my intense obsessions and some times huge waves of rages over petty things. I learned to control myself and my emotions and I think that made me the one I am today. Aproximately my parents divorced and lived for themselves. Dad used to commute to the capitol around every day when we lived in Bergen and when he was home, he could explode over the simplest of things. It was a hard time. That is my past, and I still struggle to find my own path through life. My life will forever be slightly scarred from these past events, but I think I find something of a relief while making my cards here, especially my Memory Requiems, as I can channel and seal my dark past in these digital piece of cardboard for you guys to rate. Thank you for showing me your concern, Max. I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 thats extremely deep...now i obligate myself to see this card as soon as possible... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Thank you for that Wham. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 I've been through a similar series of events recently. Moving from home to uni is duanting, especially considering the closest my old friends were was an hour and a half train journey away. Although my experiences pale compared to yours, I feel I have some insight into what you're feeling. I myself have obsessive tendancies and have had to create new friendships at uni. My move was the opposite to yours; from a small town to a large city. I can't expect to fully understand and experience what you did; but at least I can provide some assistance. I've found that helps a lot. Offering something, anything can remove some of the burden. And considering your experiences, I'd say you've turned out pretty well. A celebrated MtG player, strong gymnast and the crowning glory; Legendary Super Mod of the N.D.L. ;). Those are things to be proud of. A jaded past is no hurdle to a clear future. From what I've seen, you've coped remarkably. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Thank you very much for that. I am proud of who I am today and I guess one of the reasons I joined this club was to help people get along. I simply love helping people. ...My, I was really touched by that, Max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Ursus, you're one of the nicest people on the forum...I never imagined that your past could be so rough. And...now you're a high ranking official in what I consider to be the best club on YCM. :) You'll always have friends here. :D If ya wanna duel on the network, just PM me if I'm on, anytime, (which is not frequently...school is tough right now.) and we will have a rematch. If you could call our first duel a match. XD We never finished! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 here is my most recent card please rate it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Capitalise 'Super' and 'Saiyan'. The picture is blurry and needs a background. Try this for a pic: http://wyvernsmasher.deviantart.com/art/Super-Saiyan-4-Goku-81901661 I am wholey anti-Fake-Type; so I would say change to Warrior-Type. Very bland effect. Add some more effects. OCG: Card effects cannot be activated in response to this card's Summoning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Capitalise 'Super' and 'Saiyan'.The picture is blurry and needs a background.Try this for a pic: I am wholey anti-Fake-Type; so I would say change to Warrior-Type.Very bland effect. Add some more effects. OCG:Card effects cannot be activated in response to this card's Summoning.hows this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 significantly better.and max, you are using that picture. this is not a debate or negotiation. i tried negotiating and that is not working. if you really are having trouble understanding the reason behind the pic change, then pm me about it and i can explain it to you there.http://th01.deviantart.net/fs12/300W/i/2006/292/d/c/Zero___Contest_Submission_by_ryoneko.jpgyou are using that picture for my new card. not a negotiation, a very strong suggestion that i feel must be adhered to. please don't make me say 'requirement', okay? i am trying to avoid saying that as i am trying not to be bossy. >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 I need a hand getting my card on my sig! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 hm? all you need to do is copy the img coding and put it there. it doesn't look like you'll have to much trouble doing that, since i highly doubt you are using more then 100 characters in your sig atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Here's some support cards for the N.D.L and Purple archetypes: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls lose ATK equal to the number of "N.D.L." and "Purple" monsters you control x 200. When an "N.D.L." monster you control inflicts Battle Damage, your opponent loses Life Points equal to the number of "Purple" monsters in your Graveyard x 300. All non-"Purple" monsters your opponent controls lose ATK and DEF equal to the ATK of the "Purple" monster you control with the highest ATK. Once per turn, you can discard 2 "Purple" monsters in your hand to draw 2 cards. When a "Purple" monster is destroyed by battle, its controller loses 800 Life Points. When this card is Summoned, if you do not control a "N.D.L" monster, destroy it. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can discard 1 "Purple" monster from your hand to Special Summon 1 "N.D.L" monster from your Deck. That monster cannot attack this turn. If you control a face-up "N.D.L. Lord Ursus", you can Special Summon this card from your hand during your Standby Phase. If you control a face-up "N.D.L. Soul-Fire", you can Normal Summon or Set this card with 1 Tribute. As long as this card remains face-up on the field and you control a Level 7 or higher "N.D.L." monster, you can Normal Summon or Set Level 5 or higher "N.D.L." monsters without Tributing. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play instead. If you do, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "N.D.L." monster from your hand or Graveyard and gain 600 Life Points during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 nice cards. the effects are good and the cards seem pretty well balanced. my one problem is with this card here.it looks as though there is one completely obvious ocg error there that was missed. fix that and everything should be good to go.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 I see the problem. Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 1 problem with "Purple Wave"'s picture; I used it for the original "Purple" card. If you can find an alternate picture for either card Ursus, that would solve the problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 you did huh? well the original purple pic should change on account of the current pic for purple wave is highly fitting imho. and did you get my message max? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 OCG Fixes Purple Surge Change card set ID to NDLDR-EN047 As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls lose ATK equal to the number of "N.D.L." and "Purple" monsters you control x 200. When an "N.D.L." monster you control inflicts Battle Damage, your opponent loses Life Points equal to the number of "Purple" monsters in your Graveyard x 300. Red and Blue Intertwine Change card set ID to NDLDR-EN044 All non-"Purple" monsters your opponent controls lose ATK and DEF equal to the ATK of the "Purple" monster you control with the highest ATK. Once per turn, you can discard 2 "Purple" monsters in your hand to draw 2 cards. When a "Purple" monster is destroyed by battle, its controller loses 800 Life Points. Effect changed to give the "Purple" monsters their own specific card and to balance it out. For example, "N.D.L. Sweeny Todd" has 2800 ATK (which will devastate any Deck) and can Special Summon "N.D.L. Max Darkness" which has 3000 ATK, so reduces your opponent's ATK even more. Purple Wave Change card set ID to NDLDR-EN048 Purple Fraction Change card set ID to NDLDR-EN045 If you control a face-up "N.D.L. Lord Ursus", you can Special Summon this card from your hand during your Standby Phase. If you control a face-up "N.D.L. Soul-Fire", you can Normal Summon or Set this card with 1 Tribute. As long as this card remains face-up on the field and you control a Level 7 or higher "N.D.L." monster, you can Normal Summon or Set Level 5 or higher "N.D.L." monsters without Tributing. Again, a slight change to the effect. The first is to bring your older counterpart into the fray. The second is to balance this card. I could Summon "N.D.L. Solful" (Level 1) during my Main Phase of the turn I Special Summoned this. Then, next turn, I could costlessly Summon "N.D.L. Sweet Lightning", "N.D.L. Max Darkness" or "N.D.L. Lrovani" for example. Purple Impulse Change card set ID to NDLDR-EN046 When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play instead. If you do, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "N.D.L." monster from your hand or Graveyard and gain 600 Life Points during your next Standby Phase. A slight change to make it a more deceptive effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 hey max, are you going to get to my reply or what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 That many errors, huh? O.O Will fix right away, and yes, I see that some of them are actually overpowered, now that you mention it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 well i never said that i was an expert judge of cards. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 hey max' date=' are you going to get to my reply or what?[/quote'] [spoiler=Consider this my response] Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 "N.D.L." monster you control from play. This card gains 150 ATK for each removed from play "N.D.L." monster. Once per turn, before your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 "N.D.L." monster in your Deck from play. If you do, this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. If a Level 4 or lower "N.D.L." monster you control is targeted, you can remove 1 Spell or Trap Card in your hand from play to switch the attack target to this card. Once per turn, you can skip your Battle Phase. If you do, return a number of removed from play Level 4 or lower "N.D.L." monsters to your Deck equal to the number of Level 5 or higher "N.D.L." monsters you control. When this card is removed from the field, it is removed from play. [spoiler=Purple Twins] Effect: This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 1 "Purple" monster you control. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:- Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Once per turn, you can discard any number of cards from your hand. If you do, select 2 monsters your opponent controls. The selected monsters lose ATK equal to the number of cards discarded x 300, until your opponent's Main Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Username: ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ (was Ultiamte Magician)Name of Your Club:MCM-Where Card Makers Go To Te Best Link to Club: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-175476.htmlWhy do you want to affiliate with us: I Need Help & Members Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 I LOVE the new card Max, thanks a lot. I wont be active for a couple days due to a huge school projectaccepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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