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My newest card:

 

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[spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned from the Remove From play or your hand when there are 10 or more "Desperate" or "Mirror's Eye" cards in your Graveyard. This card cannot be Special Summoned Graveyard. This card's type is also treated as DARK and EARTH. Once per turn, you can take control of as many cards as possible on your opponent's side as possible, until your opponent's next Standby Phase. This card can activate the effects of those monster by paying 500 Lifepoints. This card gains ATK & DEF equal to the combined ATK of all the monsters. If you activate this effect, you must skip the Main Phases of your next turn. When this card is removed from the field, remove from play all cards your opponent controls and gain lifepoints equal to the number of cards removed x500. During the Standby Phase pay 2000 Lifepoints, or destroy this card. Two turns after this card was summoned, send this card to the Graveyard.

 

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welcome New Members...

 

at WHAM

 

I wont correct your OCG..because mine isnt perfect either..but ive already seen some mistakes..(for example "Life Points"..or "This card's type is also treated as DARK and EARTH. Once per turn, you can take control of as many cards as possible on your opponent's side as possible, until your opponent's next Standby Phase.")...

You should invest more time in that card..i make the same mistake..

my cards are completed within only 2 minutes..but full of OCG mistakes..because i dont care ^^

 

 

The effect hmm..

I think you wanted to much.the effect wouldnt need to be that long..some parts are just like.."and another effect..aaaand another one...and here you go..another effect"..

reduce that..and the card will be OK

 

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@War Torn:Thats alright War Torn, but I'm sure Max will accept them anyhow.

 

@Galadrien: We won't, next time that happens, hit post reply and then the screen will pop up, then ramdonly put something their, hit post preview, and the you should see your post, it works for me. Then say what you want to say.

 

@Max or Anyone who can help with OCG: I'm trying to work this effect out, but it just seems to be hard, maybe you could help.

 

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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it twice to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn, you can select 1 monster you control. That monster can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each during the Battle Phase. The selected monster cannot attack your opponent directly if you activated this effect.

 

 

The first part is all I need help on, where I have it saying twice. I do not think that would work, so i need your expertise on how to make a gemini monster so you have to summon it three times to get its effect, like the first time to bring it out on the field, then two more times to get its effect. As in a Double Gemini Summon, kind of got the idea from Double Synchro summoning.

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For admin purposes: all accepted.

 

 

@ Whamo:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Set, or Special Summoned from the Graveyard. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand or your Removed from Play Zone when there are 10 or more "Desperate" or "Mirror's Eye" cards in your Graveyard. During each of your Battle Phases, pay 2000 Life Points or destroy this card During your second End Phase after this card was Summoned, send this card to the Graveyard. This card also treated as a DARK and EARTH monster. Once per turn, you can take control of any number of monsters your opponent controls, until the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF become the total ATK and DEF of those monsters. Also, if those monster(s) effect(s) can be activated, you can activate them once as this card's effect by paying 500 Life Points. If you activate this effect, skip your Main Phase 1 and 2 during your next turn. When this card is removed from the field, except by its own effect, remove from play all cards your opponent controls and gain Life Points equal to the number of cards removed x 500.

 

 

@ XzY:

 

I can't think of a better way to word it.

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it twice to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn, you can select 1 monster you control. That monster can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each during the Battle Phase. The selected monster cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

 

 

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@War Torn: That could actually be wicked, but I don't like that too much. I still think it would work, b/c the card I'm using would be considered op'd if I did what you said. Also, it really wouldn't be ruining the purpose, b/c the purpose of gemini's is to have a wide variety, so in doing this, its making it even broader by comparison, if you understand the gist.

 

@Max: I have a few questions.

1st: What do you mean by Digimon broke rule 41?

2nd: This was JBM's saying, but do you know what he meant by it, "(always Lrovani at heart)"

I am sorry, it just sounds different and I was wondering what it had meant, thats all.

3rd: The avi you have, its been bothering me ever since I saw it, what anime does it come from?

If you don't want to answer any of these or you cannot, that is fine.

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Club Username: Galadrien

Why you want to join: 1. Cause i'm a newb 2. Cause i heard about this club, so now i want to join it. 3. Cause nobody replies to my threads 4. Cause everyone rates my cards as if i was a pro

Favorite Card: Exodia Necross (Undead Exodia FTW)

Do you play the game in real life: Used to

How you were referred to the club: I was just randomly searching the forum, and then I found it.

 

here's my newest card (plz help with ocg)

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Lore: As long as this card remains face-up on the field. All Winged Beast-Type monsters are switched to Attack Position and must attack every turn.

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