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well:

1st ADDITION=1ST EDITION

pic is blurry, send me the pic in a pm, and ill try to fix that for ya

OCG fix:

Skilled White Magician + Time Wizard

Once per turn, during you Main Phase, you can discard 1 card to gain 500 Life Points

 

well, the effect is kinda short, so you might wanna try to make that longer. But, its better than some new member cards i've seen.

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1st card

OCG fix:

Skilled White Magician + Time Wizard

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card from your Hand. If the card was a monster card, increase your Life Points by 700. If the card was a spell card, increase your Life Points by 600. If the card was a trap card, increase your Life Points by 500.

 

It's better now.

 

2nd Card

OCG fix:

This card can only be Ritual Summoned by activating the Ritual Spell, "Call of the Beast". You must also tribute monsters whose levels add up to 7 or more. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 monster from your Hand to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or less Beast-Type monster from your Deck.

 

I just guessed from your Deck. You must state where you special summon it from.

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Welcome LKG, and I hope you have a good time here.

 

accepted' date=' and what ARE teh new rules?

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Any club that becomes spammy is warned and then locked. The F.T.K.s were the first club to fall foul of the regs.

 

That's why I went through the site and invited several new members, to put us back on track.

 

Sorry for not telling you Sweeny, but I thought it would be better if I did it and got it out of the way.

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how is it now


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here ya go

"Spirit Reaper" + "Flame Manipulator"

When this monster is attacked, you can discard one card to Stop the attack from destroying "Flame Reaper" (damage calculation is still applied) If the card is a zombie card, the attack is negated. If this card is attacked by a monster lv 7 or above, "Flame Reaper" is Destroyed, and half of it's attack points are subtracted from your life points.


Welcome LKG' date=' and I hope you have a good time here.

 

accepted, and what ARE teh new rules?

 

Any club that becomes spammy is warned and then locked. The F.T.K.s were the first club to fall foul of the regs.

 

That's why I went through the site and invited several new members, to put us back on track.

 

Sorry for not telling you Sweeny, but I thought it would be better if I did it and got it out of the way.

 

Thanks

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Chimera

 

One, choose a more imaginative name. Chimera is rather dull and has already been done.

 

'ritual summoned' must be capitalised as in 'Ritual Summoned'. Same with 'spell card'; should be 'Spell Card'.

 

The first sentance could be better written as:

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Call of the Beast".

 

 

Flame Reaper

 

You need to start a new line after the fusion materials.

 

OCG Fix:

 

"Flame Manipulator" + "Spirit Reaper" (Fusion materials are written in alphabetical order)

Once per turn, if this card is attacked, you can discard 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand. If you do, negate the attack. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand. If you do, it is not. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If this card is attacked by a Level 7 or higher monster, destroy this card with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. Lose Life Points equal to half this card's ATK.

 

 

I must say, this is one good card for a 1-star. Yes, the OCG was off, but you'll learn; and the idea was there.

 

 

Also, next time you update the card, don't post it in a new reply, simply replace the card in the original post by clicking the edit button and switching the image codes. Then post a new reply saying something like 'Card updated'. That way we don't have to trawl through a page of cards; we just have to look at one.

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.:JBM:. PM'd me! we visited on this morning and we had a short convo. I'm so happy!:mrgreen:

.:JBM:.?

Oh' date=' good times back then.

Ok, here's my application :)

Club Username: Kane Reiger

Why you want to join: To get better at making cards

Favorite Card: Dark Magician

Do you play the game in real life: Used to not so much anymore though

How you were referred to the club: Sweet Lightning, and Max Darkness

Can you show me some of your cards that you've made?

I might be able to help.

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K, here are some of my cards

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Fallen: When your opponent declares an attack on another monster on your field, you can change the attack target to this monster. When this effect is activated this monster gains 1500 ATK. Also if this monster is chosen as an attack target it can't be destroyed as a result of battle. For every one of your turns that this card is on the field it looses 1000 ATK, starting the the turn after it is summoned. If this monster has 0 ATK it is destroyed.

 

Fiend: Once per turn, instead of attacking, this card can do direct damage to your opponent for every fiend-type monster on your side of the field x 200.

 

Brothar: This card cannot be Normal Sumoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters on your field. When this card is Summoned destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponet's field. Also once per turn you can tribute 2 Fire Monsters on your side of the field to increase this monster's ATK by 1000 and decrease all Water Attribute Monster's ATK by 650. After using this effect this monsters ATK is decreased by 2000.

 

Follower: If there is a face-up "Brothar the Flame Lord" on your side of the field this monster cannot be destroyed in battle. Also by tributing this card and 2000 life points you may destroy all cards on the field except "Brothar the Flame Lord".

 

Working on others now, should be done by next week some time.

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