Max Darkness Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 can someone tell me how to start a duel on the network? Simply click 'Start Duel!' under the Lightning Vortex on the homepage. You might want to add a password so strangers don't get into your Duel. If you're looking for an opponent, I'll be that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 ugh i need a mental break from my Hw <.< that i'm going finish later so whats going on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aa'une Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 alright. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 ugh i need a mental break from my Hw <.< that i'm going finish later so whats going on Well, Max is making notes on his fanfic and we are getting duels set up. Does anyone want to duel me by the way? Shoot me a PM with the password. (I can't set up duels now for some odd reason.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 alright give me a min to get it up and put up my new Self Drawn card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 9 turns : 2 summonable monsters, 5 (4 useless at the time) Spells, 2 Traps... I didn't think my luck could be that bad...I guess you call this a poll. When Hiro faces Aki; do you want it to be: a) A walkover (0)b) A lengthy, but clearly one-sided duel (0)c) An evenly matched duel, with a Deux Ex Machina at the end. (2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Hey sweet if that's the case I'll be your opponent's and speaking of fan-fics here's mine I made up for a character & a grade. [spoiler=Cursed Heart Birthmark Character: Cruchinex Xenicroc] The shadowy figure loomed above his head as Cruchinex ran in to the giant tent. “Why did it have to be a circus tent? WHY THE CIRCUS? AAAAHHH!!” he screamed as he ran away from the figure. It was more than 8 feet tall and had a large muscular body. Two large, goat-like curved horns appeared over his head. Two large, rotting bat-like purple wings with sickly dark yellow blotches beat rapidly as the creature roared and pursued him. The beast had various sea green and dusk blue tattoos or scars or markings all over its body. Whatever they were, Cruchinex could not discern because he was running for dear life. The demon howled once more. “BOY! You WILL come to me or you will not make it out of here alive!” Cruchinex started to cry. It was 2am on his 14th birthday and he had already had 4 torturous nightmares already and this was the fifth. No matter how much his body twisted, turned or convulsed, he would not be woken from the dream until it was finished, so he continued to run. He was inside the tent and the demon was not far behind him when he fell on a white substance. He picked himself up and investigated the substance drawing back as he found out that the white liquid was white blood. The demon roared as it flew into the tent. There were no people around, the air was still and the only light came from one single beam in the center with a large wooden pole in the middle of the beam. Cruchinex suddenly felt breathless and overcome with fear as the creature grabbed him in his massive hand. He suddenly felt as though he didn’t want to die despite his demented fears. As the demon walked him over to the pole, Cruchinex squirmed and writhed until he managed to free his arms and pull himself out of the demon’s grasp. Taking this opportunity given to him, he ran up the demon’s arm and kicked it in the face with as much force as he could muster. He smiled as the demon recoiled, but that smile quickly turned into pure, unadulterated fear as the demon laughed. The demon grabbed him up and faced him towards the pole. “Aaaah, you’ve got spunk. Too bad that THIS is where it will get you,” it said, pointing to something on the pole. Cruchinex looked at the creature and vomited. It was a ragdoll-like version of him, impaled through its torso on four wooden spikes. Instead of arms and legs, it had small stubs with stitches on them in their place. Each stub leaked out the white blood that the young boy had slipped on earlier. Cruchinex looked at the doll’s face which emanated his face perfectly except there were two stitched on X’s where his eyes should be. Cruchinex would’ve fainted from the vision of the ragged doll but the problem with dreams is that you can’t faint. “Now, Didn’t I tell you to come here boy? You should’ve listened,” the demon said cynically. The demon then proceeded to impale Cruchinex on the wood, in front of the doll, which reeked of death. It ripped off his arms and legs and as his blood fell on to the floor. Then the white blood formed the words: “YOU ARE MARKED,”with his blood forming the words:“CRUCHINEX XENICROC.”The bloods then moved and transformed into a somewhat twisted heart, which was covered by an eye and its pupil. The accursed heart seemed to glow and beat as he stared at it. He then screamed as the demon gouged out his eyes, leaving him there to bleed to death.Then Cruchinex woke up. It was 4am, and he was too afraid to go back to sleep. So he put on his slippers and walked out to his living room window. Still shaking from his dream he looked outside to the murky night sky. The sky was filled with stars that filled sky like hundreds of brilliant gems reflecting some unknown light. There was a tall building in the distance that was erected into his surreal night scene. The building stood tall and proud as its dark panels gave no light, no reprieve from the night’s enchantments. In Cruchinex’s mind it blurred into a shadowy figure like the shadow that he saw in his dream. He wasn’t afraid this time, in fact he seemed comforted by the shadows and welcomed them, knowing that they won’t hurt him. A gathering of comets set the horizon ablaze in a display of glory that lit up sky. During the parade of night lights, Cruchinex noticed something in his reflection, specifically in his eyes. “Oh crap. I really am marked!” he said running away from the show and into the bathroom. He looked in the mirror and saw that a thorny, dark red heart was behind his pupil, just like he saw in his dream. “I doubt there is anything I can do about this mark. But, I…I don’t know what to do,” he said tired and upset. “No matter what I do, I doubt there will be a thing I can do about this. It’s behind my eye! I am not going blind because I’m trying to be rid of some stupid mark.” Despite his fears, Cruchinex fell asleep again in his living room couch. When he woke up the sun was blazing bright in the sky. “HAPPY BIRTHDAAAY!!!!!” his parents said, presenting him a cake. “You’re fourteen now baby. You are becoming more of a man. Oh, I’m so proud of you sweetie,” his mother exclaimed. “Here’s your gift. A DEBIT CARD!!! I’ve started a banking and checking account with $150 in each. Use it wisely honey.” Cruchinex smiled at his mother. ‘Fiscally responsible as always Ma… Thank you,’ he thought to himself.His father was next. He slowly revealed a medium-sized gold box. “You know your old man has a good thing running for him with my…um…business as an accountant/arms dealer. So I got you something that only I could give you. Cruchinex, I present you with this: the Ventrobrol gloves & sabers, a Xenicorc Original.” His father opened the box and revealed a pair of black and silver gloves and a pair of curved sabers. The gloves had silver lines where his veins would be, with there being a hard, raised ball where his knuckles would be. The gloves looked like they were made of leather, but as Cruchinex inspected them he felt that they were sturdier than regular gloves and felt like fleece. He picked up the pair of sabers. They were jet black curved downward from the, grip which was wrapped in leather and resembled a fang with a handle. Right at the start of the curve there were notches and inside the blade were four holes. As he picked up the blade his father began to speak. “Son those are no normal blades. Pick them up and concentrate on making them be straight like a regular knife.” Cruchinex did as his father said and watched in glee as the blades clicked and became a straight line. “The trick is in the notches. They work by—” he said as his wife shot a glare at him. “Never mind that, just try on the gloves. They will prevent you from receiving any electric shocks while you are wearing them. But be warned—” he said. Cruchinex had already placed on the gloves on his hands when they weighed him down so much that he went straight to the floor. His father laughed. “The gloves are heavy, very heavy. They are laced with special Titanium webbing and a conductive fabric that redirects electricity. But enough about this stuff, LET’S START THIS PARTY!!!” With that, a large number of people, consisting of friends and family, revealed themselves from various hiding places and yelled, “SURPRISE!” as his birthday bash begin in their small yellow house.A few hours had passed and it was late at night. The stars were glowing again as Cruchinex looked out the window. Suddenly, Cruchinex heard something strange; it was what sounded like a wolf howling. Now normally, a wolf howling at night is quite normal, but it isn’t normal in the city of Chicago. He ignored the sound but he heard it again, and this time it was closer, much closer. There was a scratching at his door followed by the sound of a thump. Cruchinex opened the door, and saw a large black wolf at his door. “Oh you poor thing, you must be tired. Don’t worry you can stay in here for the night,” Cruchinex said. “I don’t want your damn pity. I’m your demon. My name is BlaCroc. Now let me in so I can give you your damn contract,” the wolf said. He looked tired, worn down, and most of all, angry. “Do you know how long it to me to get here? Four hours. Four hours of non-stop running, four hours of humans being the imbecilic creatures they are, four hours of almost and getting hit by sticks, bugs, and cars. I should kill you, but I won’t…I have my reasons.” A wave of air seemed to ripple through his fur, and then a small white stone pillar appeared in front of the wolf. A top of the pillar was a piece of parchment paper, filled with words and his name in blood. “Put your hand on the contract and this will be finishe1d and I can finally get some rest.”Cruchinex was absolutely stunned. Some random wolf that appeared at his doorstep, TALKED, and told him that he had a contract that he had to sign, or rather had no choice but to agree to it. The oddest thing was that he wanted to do it. He wanted to be chosen for some unknown purpose. He wanted to know who this demon was, and above all, he wanted to know what his mark could do. Without further hesitation, Cruchinex placed his hand on the pillar and the ground below his feet began to shake. A red beam of dark light erupted from the floor encompassing him. Wisps of the beam filled the air as his hair rose up far above his head. It changed from its light brown hue to a deep, crimson color. His eyes seemed to give off an aura of the same color as the beam began to fade and Cruchinex’s hair began to be completely crimson. Suddenly, he got a cramp that rocked his entire body. The strain from the last day was taking its toll on him. Cruchinex’s hair began to surge back and forth between the crimson red and its light brown color. Then the beam completely disappeared and his hair was back to normal. Cruchinex looked up as his bang fell back in place. ‘Dang it... I like it better red,’ he thought to himself. Then as if by Cruchinex’s command, his hair became crimson red again.“That’s not supposed to happen, human. That isn’t the ability of your mark…Something must have occurred when your powers were being awakened. No matter. I require nourishment, what can you give me, human?” BlaCroc asked him with authority.“Well most of our cooked food is gone. And the rest I was told not to touch. So all we have left are some pears…But I don’t think—”Cruchinex was saying.“You don’t think? Truer words have never been spoken. Go get me these pears of yours.” Cruchinex made a brief scowl at the wolf, which was responded with the sound of BlaCroc snarling at the boy. Immediately Cruchinex headed off in his kitchen, muttering, and returned with a somewhat large bag filled with pears. The hell hound sniffed the bag and muttered something about slime. He looked at Cruchinex and concluding that he’d rather stuff his face with the pears than the boy, for now, took a bite out of the fruit. Immediately, BlaCroc’s expression changed. He started to devour the pears with a ravenous fury, making no discretion between the actual meat of the fruit and its stems. Not wanting to stick around, Cruchinex left the wolf alone, to eat his food in peace.As the days passed, Cruchinex and BlaCroc had barely recognized each other. Of course, in front of Cruchinex’s parents, the two would put on a façade as though they enjoyed each others company, but in truth they seemed to despise each other. Cruchinex had made attempts to hold a conversation with BlaCroc, but the demon-wolf never uttered more than four words, and usually they were “Get away from me” or “Get me some pears.” After about a week since his birthday, Cruchinex decided to try out the gloves and sabers his father gave him. He walked out of his semi-old yellow house, and walked around the street to a park. Having nothing better to do, BlaCroc followed. The two approached a tree and Cruchinex, pulled out the sabers from his pockets. He lifted them and noticed that they were considerably lighter than when he first held them. ‘Is this the power of my mark? I wonder…’ He began to jab at the tree, with improved speed that was inappropriate for a 14 year old to have. He smiled approving of the changes that had been placed upon his body. Still smiling, he decided to place on the gloves. As he tried to lift his hands he soon realized that he was getting nowhere fast. Seeing Cruchinex struggle to lift his hands, BlaCroc began to laugh at the child.“You are feeble and a disappointment, even with the power of the mark.”“Shut up you lazy dog! You’ve done nothing but sit around and ask for pears! I don’t even know why your still here! Why don’t you get out of my damn life?” Cruchinex retorted.Your life wasn’t damned before, BUT IT IS NOW!!!!!” BlaCroc said as he pounced on the boy. Snarling he began to press down on Cruchinex’s chest, causing him to lose breath. Panting, Cruchinex refused to be taken down so easily. The boy used all the strength he could muster to pick up his arms and punch the wolf, throwing him off his chest. The wolf looked temporarily stunned, which is very unbecoming for a demon, but he then disappeared. As Cruchinex looked for the wolf, he felt the sharp pain of claws shred through his back like butter. The wolf growled as Cruchinex fell and bit onto his leg. The hound then tossed him into the tree sending a surge of pain through his back. He walked up to the boy, teeth barred, ready to strike. As he was going to bite into his neck, Cruchinex grabbed BlaCroc’s throat, choking him. His eyes began to glow a deep crimson as he picked up the wolf and threw him a good few meters away from him. “I’ve had enough of this! I’m tired of you being…YOU! I don’t even know why you’re here! I’m leaving, and I don’t care what you do, just don’t mess with me any more!” Cruchinex said, tears in his eyes from both the wounds and because his hopes were dashed.“CRUCHINEX! What happened to you?” his mother screamed as he came in the door. BlaCroc followed in behind him looking down he did. His mother glared at the wolf that merely fell as he came inside. “Ma it’s not what you think. BlaCroc and I were in the park when some older guys with dogs came and beat us up. BlaCroc did his best to protect me, but I got hit a couple of times,” Cruchinex lied. His mother looked at him and the wolf suspiciously, but sighed in relief.“Thank God. Oh my, your father and I were about to leave for our anniversary, finally, but I’m not going anywhere until your better.” Cruchinex had completely forgotten that today was the day that his parents had told him they would be going on their anniversary trip to Las Vegas, to mix business with pleasure, he supposed. Cruchinex looked at his mother and asked her not to hold out on her plans because he was a little beaten for it. All it got him was a slap on the face and the next 48 hours under her watch and care. During that time, Cruchinex and BlaCroc had actually become closer than they were before. BlaCroc explained to him why he had stayed here with Cruchinex. “My former master, the demon of deception, had begun to turn over a new leaf, despite his ways. He began to turn on the minions of Hell, and went to those pearly gates, barely escaping his destruction. When he reached the gates of Heaven they did not believe him because of who he was. He tried to convince them to open the entrance but it was too late. His fellow demons had caught up to him and dragged him back down to hell, killing him. At that moment of his death you were born. That is why I’m here; I believe…we are supposed to be with each other.” AMD I WANT IT TO BE C! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Ugh. Sounds like a bad Duel... I vote C. More exciting. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 I'VE BEEN ON a good winning streak on YGN...here's the latest epic duel.. [spoiler=Mach Dragons VERSUS Fish!!!!] Zonixs|>joined the duel.Zonixs|>loaded their deck Dran Mach II.Zonixs|>ready to duel.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>joined the duel.Shunkai|>loaded their deck You drowning yet.Shunkai|>ready to duel.Shunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>rolled 6.Shunkai|>ok now i have a decent deck XDZonixs|>oookkkZonixs|>rolled 4.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>BUZZ!.Zonixs|>BUZZ!.Zonixs|>shuffled their deck.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>drawn a cardShunkai|>i startZonixs|>kkShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move Abyssal Kingshark from hand to fieldShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>move Elemental Hero Prisma from hand to fieldZonixs|>move Swords of Revealing Light from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move Cyber Shark from hand to fieldShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move Masked Dragon from hand to fieldZonixs|>move Masked Dragon from field to handShunkai|>go sharkies XDZonixs|>wtf...Zonixs|>move Elemental Hero Prisma from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Prime Material Dragon from hand to fieldShunkai|>whatZonixs|>come to Battle Phase.Zonixs|>wrong card lolShunkai|>flip Book of Moon faceup.Shunkai|>activated effect of Book of Moon.Shunkai|>go facedown PMDZonixs|>flip Prime Material Dragon facedown.Zonixs|>turn a card into defend position.Zonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>move Book of Moon from field to graveyardZonixs|>added 1Counter counter on Swords of Revealing Light.Zonixs|>added 1Counter counter on Swords of Revealing Light.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move Abyssal Kingshark from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Cranium Fish from hand to fieldShunkai|>move Oyster Meister from hand to graveyardShunkai|>facedown monsterZonixs|>move Prime Material Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>move Swords of Revealing Light from field to graveyardZonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>Cranium is very helpfulZonixs|>flip Call Of The Haunted faceup.Zonixs|>move Prime Material Dragon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>and so is primeZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardZonixs|>flip Dragon's Rage faceup.Shunkai|>move Terraforming from hand to fieldZonixs|>activated effect of Dragon's Rage.Shunkai|>activated effect of Terraforming.Shunkai|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from deck to handShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Mausoleum of the Emperor.Shunkai|>changed their LP from 8000 to 6000.Shunkai|>move Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth.Shunkai|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>move Trap Hole from hand to graveyardShunkai|>move Terraforming from field to graveyardShunkai|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>move Fishborg Gunner from deck to fieldShunkai|>move Ocean's Keeper from deck to fieldShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>move Fishborg Gunner from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Cyber Shark from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Goyo Guardian from extra deck to fieldShunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>Goyo Guardian attacks their Prime Material Dragon at #1.Zonixs|>changed their LP from 8000 to 7800.Zonixs|>move Prime Material Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>you lose 400 and give me primeShunkai|>activated effect of Goyo Guardian.Zonixs|>changed their LP from 7800 to 7600.Zonixs|>move Prime Material Dragon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>turn Prime Material Dragon into defend position.Zonixs|>gave away control of Prime Material Dragon.Shunkai|>Cranium Fish attacks their Face-down monster at #2.Zonixs|>move Call Of The Haunted from field to graveyardShunkai|>go fish PowaZonixs|>move Masked Dragon from field to graveyardZonixs|>activated effect of Masked Dragon.Zonixs|>looking into their deck.Zonixs|>move Masked Dragon from deck to fieldZonixs|>turn Masked Dragon into defend position.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>turn Prime Material Dragon into attack position.Zonixs|>it is not yet enough!!!Shunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>Prime Material Dragon attacks their Masked Dragon at #1.Zonixs|>move Masked Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>u lose 1300 XD because DRZonixs|>activated effect of Masked Dragon.Zonixs|>looking into their deck.Zonixs|>move The White Stone of Legend from deck to fieldZonixs|>turn The White Stone of Legend into defend position.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardShunkai|>go aheadZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>flip Fish Depth Charge faceup.Shunkai|>activated effect of Fish Depth Charge.Shunkai|>move Ocean's Keeper from field to graveyardShunkai|>facedown S/YShunkai|>S/T Zonixs|>flip Rainbow Life faceup.Shunkai|>XDZonixs|>activated effect of Rainbow Life.Zonixs|>move Rainbow Life from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Mirage Dragon from hand to graveyardShunkai|>move Fish Depth Charge from field to graveyardShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>Goyo Guardian attacks their The White Stone of Legend at #1.Zonixs|>move The White Stone of Legend from field to graveyardZonixs|>activated effect of The White Stone of Legend.Zonixs|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>activated effect of Goyo Guardian.Zonixs|>move a card from deck to fieldShunkai|>get your BEWD and give white stoneZonixs|>move a card from field to handZonixs|>move The White Stone of Legend from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>turn The White Stone of Legend into defend position.Zonixs|>gave away control of The White Stone of Legend.Shunkai|>did you get your BEWDZonixs|>sureShunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>Cranium Fish attacks their Face-down monster at #2.Zonixs|>imma be rid of him soon any wayZonixs|>flip Marshmallon faceup.Shunkai|>come to Main Phase 2.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardShunkai|>changed their LP from 6000 to 5000.Shunkai|>almost 4got marshmallons effectZonixs|>dammit! its still not enuuf!Zonixs|>but whatevers..Zonixs|>changed their LP from 7600 to 6600.Zonixs|>move White-Horned Dragon from hand to fieldShunkai|>flip Trap Hole faceup.Shunkai|>activated effect of Trap Hole.Zonixs|>kk im just using him for his effectShunkai|>bye bye white horn and okZonixs|>Remove your 2 spells from your graveyardShunkai|>move Terraforming from graveyard to RFPZonixs|>move White-Horned Dragon from field to graveyardZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>move Book of Moon from graveyard to RFPShunkai|>move Trap Hole from field to graveyardShunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>ergg...Zonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>move Lightning Vortex from hand to fieldZonixs|>activated effect of Lightning Vortex.Zonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from hand to graveyardShunkai|>activated effect of Prime Material Dragon.Zonixs|>move Lightning Vortex from field to graveyardZonixs|>I love you prime!!!!Shunkai|>move Magical Mallet from hand to graveyardZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>thanks for your prime XDShunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>activated effect of Cranium Fish.Shunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from hand to graveyardShunkai|>monsterZonixs|>move Red-Eyes Wyvern from field to graveyardZonixs|>niceShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>come to End Phase.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>activated effect of Red-Eyes Wyvern.Shunkai|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move Red-Eyes Wyvern from graveyard to RFPZonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>activated effect of Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon.Shunkai|>flip Bottomless Trap Hole faceup.Shunkai|>activated effect of Bottomless Trap Hole.Zonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from hand to graveyardZonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from field to RFPZonixs|>activated effect of Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon.Shunkai|>move Bottomless Trap Hole from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Zonixs|>flip Threatening Roar faceup.Shunkai|>Goyo Guardian attacks their Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon at #3.Zonixs|>activated effect of Threatening Roar.Zonixs|>wooahShunkai|>come to Main Phase 2.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move Threatening Roar from field to graveyardZonixs|>activated effect of Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon.Zonixs|>move Mirage Dragon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>turn Mirage Dragon into defend position.Zonixs|>come to Battle Phase.Zonixs|>Blue-Eyes White Dragon attacks their Goyo Guardian at #2.Shunkai|>move Goyo Guardian from field to graveyardShunkai|>changed their LP from 5000 to 4800.Zonixs|>Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon attacks their The White Stone of Legend at #5.Zonixs|>hes got piercing!Shunkai|>move The White Stone of Legend from field to graveyardZonixs|>woooo!!!!Zonixs|>activated effect of The White Stone of Legend.Zonixs|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>changed their LP from 4800 to 2250.Zonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from deck to handShunkai|>thanks for clearing me fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Zonixs|>nop probShunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>activated effect of Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth.Shunkai|>move Terraforming from hand to graveyardShunkai|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from deck to fieldShunkai|>move Abyssal Kingshark from deck to fieldShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Abyssal Kingshark from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Red Dragon Archfiend from extra deck to fieldShunkai|>move Magical Mallet from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Magical Mallet.Shunkai|>move a card from hand to bottom of deckShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from hand to top of deckShunkai|>move Mirror Force from hand to top of deckShunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from hand to top of deckShunkai|>move Bottomless Trap Hole from hand to top of deckShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Zonixs|>you only had 1 card in your hand!!!Zonixs|>and isnt M.M limited?Shunkai|>i know i fixed it xDShunkai|>i hit wrong 1 and noShunkai|>move Magical Mallet from field to graveyardShunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>Red Dragon Archfiend attacks their Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon at #3.Zonixs|>move Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon from field to graveyardZonixs|>byby!!!Shunkai|>Cranium Fish attacks their Mirage Dragon at #4.Zonixs|>move Mirage Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>you lose 200 toZonixs|>changed their LP from 6600 to 6400.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>changed their LP from 6400 to 4400.Zonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>Red Dragon Archfiend attacks their Marshmallon at #2.Shunkai|>activated effect of Red Dragon Archfiend.Zonixs|>move Marshmallon from field to graveyardShunkai|>bye bye marshmollow you get roastedShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>activated effect of Cranium Fish.Shunkai|>move Cranium Fish from hand to graveyardShunkai|>facedown s/tZonixs|>move Mirror Force from field to graveyardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>we have stand off going onShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>ahhhhhh!!!!Zonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>how you look through deck?Zonixs|>move Foolish Burial from hand to fieldZonixs|>activated effect of Foolish Burial.Zonixs|>move Foolish Burial from field to graveyardZonixs|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>now i see itZonixs|>move The White Stone of Legend from deck to graveyardZonixs|>activated effect of The White Stone of Legend.Zonixs|>looking into their deck.Zonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from deck to handZonixs|>move Kaibaman from hand to fieldZonixs|>activated effect of Kaibaman.Zonixs|>move Kaibaman from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from hand to fieldShunkai|>BWEDUD or just 3 BEWDZonixs|>just 3Zonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Cranium Fish.Shunkai|>move Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth from hand to graveyardZonixs|>move Trade-In from field to graveyardShunkai|>S/YShunkai|>activated effect of Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth.Shunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from hand to graveyardShunkai|>looking into their deck.Shunkai|>move Ocean's Keeper from deck to fieldShunkai|>shuffled their deck.Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>flip Fish Depth Charge faceup.Shunkai|>activated effect of Fish Depth Charge.Shunkai|>BEWD 1Shunkai|>Zonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>move Fish Depth Charge from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Book of Moon from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Book of Moon.Shunkai|>BWED 2 facedownZonixs|>flip Blue-Eyes White Dragon facedown.Zonixs|>turn a card into defend position.Shunkai|>BEWDZonixs|>what did you flipShunkai|>move Book of Moon from field to graveyardZonixs|>im mean tribute?Shunkai|>oceans keeperShunkai|>that i summoned last turnZonixs|>kkShunkai|>BEWD in def no facedown atk XDShunkai|>or is it def on your screen?Zonixs|>i should put it...Zonixs|>defShunkai|>yes thats what book of moon does Zonixs|>its face downShunkai|>put card in facedown def XDShunkai|>move Book of Moon from graveyard to fieldZonixs|>it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Shunkai|>read card yourselfZonixs|>lolZonixs|>ive don it!Shunkai|>move Book of Moon from field to graveyardShunkai|>stupid lagShunkai|>Red Dragon Archfiend attacks their Face-down monster at #4.Zonixs|>your in a predicamentZonixs|>move Blizzard Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>i atk facedown blue eyesShunkai|>activated effect of Red Dragon Archfiend.Zonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from field to graveyardZonixs|>1 leftShunkai|>now die blue eyes Shunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>woahhhZonixs|>RED DRAGONS EFFECT ACTIVATESShunkai|>if only i got the other 1 XD 2Zonixs|>NUKE YOUR FIELD!!!!!!!!!Shunkai|>i didShunkai|>move Cranium Fish from field to graveyardZonixs|>YOU ONLY ATTCKED W/HIM...Shunkai|>move Superancient Deepsea King Coelacanth from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Prime Material Dragon from field to graveyardShunkai|>ok so XDZonixs|>WONDERFUL....Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>move Stamping Destruction from hand to fieldZonixs|>ON YOUR FACE DOWN/S/TShunkai|>i still have 1 more SDKC in deck leftShunkai|>move Negate Attack from field to graveyardShunkai|>changed their LP from 2250 to 1750.Zonixs|>dAMMIt!!!!!!Zonixs|>move Stamping Destruction from field to graveyardZonixs|>move a card from hand to fieldShunkai|>facedown destoryedZonixs|>move Elemental Hero Prisma from hand to fieldZonixs|>Blue-Eyes White Dragon attacks their Red Dragon Archfiend at #2.Shunkai|>move Red Dragon Archfiend from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Blue-Eyes White Dragon from field to graveyardZonixs|>Elemental Hero Prisma attacks their Opponent LP.Shunkai|>changed their LP from 1750 to 50.Shunkai|>than prismaZonixs|>end their turn.Zonixs|>...Shunkai|>down to 50 pionts will i pull a yugiShunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardZonixs|>DAMN....Shunkai|>move Heavy Storm from hand to fieldShunkai|>activated effect of Heavy Storm.Zonixs|>move Negate Attack from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Mausoleum of the Emperor from field to graveyardZonixs|>move Dragon's Rage from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from hand to fieldShunkai|>move Heavy Storm from field to graveyardShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>THANk YOU!!!!!Zonixs|>come to Draw Phase.Zonixs|>drawn a cardZonixs|>come to Battle Phase.Shunkai|>i lose right XDShunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from field to graveyardShunkai|>or notZonixs|>Elemental Hero Prisma attacks their Royal Swamp Eel at #1.Zonixs|>move Elemental Hero Prisma from field to graveyardShunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from graveyard to fieldShunkai|>move Royal Swamp Eel from field to graveyardZonixs|>YOU WILLZonixs|>end their turn.Shunkai|>whats nextShunkai|>come to Draw Phase.Shunkai|>drawn a cardShunkai|>-1500 XDZonixs|>?Shunkai|>i played ocean keeperShunkai|>move a card from field to handZonixs|>WHEN?Shunkai|>move Ocean's Keeper from hand to fieldShunkai|>Ocean's Keeper attacks their Opponent LP.Zonixs|>move Gorz The Emissary of Darkness from hand to fieldShunkai|>this turnZonixs|>created Phantasm Token on the field.Zonixs|>KKShunkai|>now i lose XDShunkai|>end their turn.Zonixs|>changed their LP from 4400 to 2900.Zonixs|>drawn a cardShunkai|>GGZonixs|>Yes very!Zonixs|>Phantasm Token attacks their Ocean's Keeper at #1.Shunkai|>this a LONG DUELZonixs|>Gorz The Emissary of Darkness attacks their Opponent LP.Shunkai|>move Ocean's Keeper from field to graveyardZonixs|>gREAT GAMEShunkai|>changed their LP from 50 to 0. 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Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 How to make "Chainsaw Insect" stupidly overpowered. Summon "Chainsaw Insect" while your Life Points are lower and clear the opponent's field of Spells and Traps. Special Summon 4 tokens. Then equip "United We Stand", "Megamorph" and 3 "Mage Power" cards to "Chainsaw Insect", before activating "Gaia Power" That's 18300 ATK all in all... Beatdown? More like overkill. (And all without the aid of a sacrifice...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 I'm back so anyone into a duel with me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Envoy of justice, reborn with even greater strength. Rise and deliver us from villainy! Power Tool Dragon /Assault Mode! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Already rated.Anyway a nice card.I wouldn't use it, but it would work with my first set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Hey Max, your good at card effects...would you help me mak e a set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 I think he can't awnser you know. Anyway want to duel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 I can't at the moment...but hey can you read the spoiler about the story?Hey sweet if that's the case I'll be your opponent's and speaking of fan-fics here's mine I made up for a character & a grade. Pay attention to this part beloooooooow [spoiler=Cursed Heart Birthmark Character: Cruchinex Xenicroc] The shadowy figure loomed above his head as Cruchinex ran in to the giant tent. “Why did it have to be a circus tent? WHY THE CIRCUS? AAAAHHH!!” he screamed as he ran away from the figure. It was more than 8 feet tall and had a large muscular body. Two large' date=' goat-like curved horns appeared over his head. Two large, rotting bat-like purple wings with sickly dark yellow blotches beat rapidly as the creature roared and pursued him. The beast had various sea green and dusk blue tattoos or scars or markings all over its body. Whatever they were, Cruchinex could not discern because he was running for dear life. The demon howled once more. “BOY! You WILL come to me or you will not make it out of here alive!” Cruchinex started to cry. It was 2am on his 14th birthday and he had already had 4 torturous nightmares already and this was the fifth. No matter how much his body twisted, turned or convulsed, he would not be woken from the dream until it was finished, so he continued to run. He was inside the tent and the demon was not far behind him when he fell on a white substance. He picked himself up and investigated the substance drawing back as he found out that the white liquid was white blood. The demon roared as it flew into the tent. There were no people around, the air was still and the only light came from one single beam in the center with a large wooden pole in the middle of the beam. Cruchinex suddenly felt breathless and overcome with fear as the creature grabbed him in his massive hand. He suddenly felt as though he didn’t want to die despite his demented fears. As the demon walked him over to the pole, Cruchinex squirmed and writhed until he managed to free his arms and pull himself out of the demon’s grasp. Taking this opportunity given to him, he ran up the demon’s arm and kicked it in the face with as much force as he could muster. He smiled as the demon recoiled, but that smile quickly turned into pure, unadulterated fear as the demon laughed. The demon grabbed him up and faced him towards the pole. “Aaaah, you’ve got spunk. Too bad that THIS is where it will get you,” it said, pointing to something on the pole. Cruchinex looked at the creature and vomited. It was a ragdoll-like version of him, impaled through its torso on four wooden spikes. Instead of arms and legs, it had small stubs with stitches on them in their place. Each stub leaked out the white blood that the young boy had slipped on earlier. Cruchinex looked at the doll’s face which emanated his face perfectly except there were two stitched on X’s where his eyes should be. Cruchinex would’ve fainted from the vision of the ragged doll but the problem with dreams is that you can’t faint. “Now, Didn’t I tell you to come here boy? You should’ve listened,” the demon said cynically. The demon then proceeded to impale Cruchinex on the wood, in front of the doll, which reeked of death. It ripped off his arms and legs and as his blood fell on to the floor. Then the white blood formed the words: “YOU ARE MARKED,”with his blood forming the words:“CRUCHINEX XENICROC.”The bloods then moved and transformed into a somewhat twisted heart, which was covered by an eye and its pupil. The accursed heart seemed to glow and beat as he stared at it. He then screamed as the demon gouged out his eyes, leaving him there to bleed to death.Then Cruchinex woke up. It was 4am, and he was too afraid to go back to sleep. So he put on his slippers and walked out to his living room window. Still shaking from his dream he looked outside to the murky night sky. The sky was filled with stars that filled sky like hundreds of brilliant gems reflecting some unknown light. There was a tall building in the distance that was erected into his surreal night scene. The building stood tall and proud as its dark panels gave no light, no reprieve from the night’s enchantments. In Cruchinex’s mind it blurred into a shadowy figure like the shadow that he saw in his dream. He wasn’t afraid this time, in fact he seemed comforted by the shadows and welcomed them, knowing that they won’t hurt him. A gathering of comets set the horizon ablaze in a display of glory that lit up sky. During the parade of night lights, Cruchinex noticed something in his reflection, specifically in his eyes. “Oh crap. I really am marked!” he said running away from the show and into the bathroom. He looked in the mirror and saw that a thorny, dark red heart was behind his pupil, just like he saw in his dream. “I doubt there is anything I can do about this mark. But, I…I don’t know what to do,” he said tired and upset. “No matter what I do, I doubt there will be a thing I can do about this. It’s behind my eye! I am not going blind because I’m trying to be rid of some stupid mark.” Despite his fears, Cruchinex fell asleep again in his living room couch. When he woke up the sun was blazing bright in the sky. “HAPPY BIRTHDAAAY!!!!!” his parents said, presenting him a cake. “You’re fourteen now baby. You are becoming more of a man. Oh, I’m so proud of you sweetie,” his mother exclaimed. “Here’s your gift. A DEBIT CARD!!! I’ve started a banking and checking account with $150 in each. Use it wisely honey.” Cruchinex smiled at his mother. ‘Fiscally responsible as always Ma… Thank you,’ he thought to himself.His father was next. He slowly revealed a medium-sized gold box. “You know your old man has a good thing running for him with my…um…business as an accountant/arms dealer. So I got you something that only I could give you. Cruchinex, I present you with this: the Ventrobrol gloves & sabers, a Xenicorc Original.” His father opened the box and revealed a pair of black and silver gloves and a pair of curved sabers. The gloves had silver lines where his veins would be, with there being a hard, raised ball where his knuckles would be. The gloves looked like they were made of leather, but as Cruchinex inspected them he felt that they were sturdier than regular gloves and felt like fleece. He picked up the pair of sabers. They were jet black curved downward from the, grip which was wrapped in leather and resembled a fang with a handle. Right at the start of the curve there were notches and inside the blade were four holes. As he picked up the blade his father began to speak. “Son those are no normal blades. Pick them up and concentrate on making them be straight like a regular knife.” Cruchinex did as his father said and watched in glee as the blades clicked and became a straight line. “The trick is in the notches. They work by—” he said as his wife shot a glare at him. “Never mind that, just try on the gloves. They will prevent you from receiving any electric shocks while you are wearing them. But be warned—” he said. Cruchinex had already placed on the gloves on his hands when they weighed him down so much that he went straight to the floor. His father laughed. “The gloves are heavy, very heavy. They are laced with special Titanium webbing and a conductive fabric that redirects electricity. But enough about this stuff, LET’S START THIS PARTY!!!” With that, a large number of people, consisting of friends and family, revealed themselves from various hiding places and yelled, “SURPRISE!” as his birthday bash begin in their small yellow house.A few hours had passed and it was late at night. The stars were glowing again as Cruchinex looked out the window. Suddenly, Cruchinex heard something strange; it was what sounded like a wolf howling. Now normally, a wolf howling at night is quite normal, but it isn’t normal in the city of Chicago. He ignored the sound but he heard it again, and this time it was closer, much closer. There was a scratching at his door followed by the sound of a thump. Cruchinex opened the door, and saw a large black wolf at his door. “Oh you poor thing, you must be tired. Don’t worry you can stay in here for the night,” Cruchinex said. “I don’t want your damn pity. I’m your demon. My name is BlaCroc. Now let me in so I can give you your damn contract,” the wolf said. He looked tired, worn down, and most of all, angry. “Do you know how long it to me to get here? Four hours. Four hours of non-stop running, four hours of humans being the imbecilic creatures they are, four hours of almost and getting hit by sticks, bugs, and cars. I should kill you, but I won’t…I have my reasons.” A wave of air seemed to ripple through his fur, and then a small white stone pillar appeared in front of the wolf. A top of the pillar was a piece of parchment paper, filled with words and his name in blood. “Put your hand on the contract and this will be finishe1d and I can finally get some rest.”Cruchinex was absolutely stunned. Some random wolf that appeared at his doorstep, TALKED, and told him that he had a contract that he had to sign, or rather had no choice but to agree to it. The oddest thing was that he wanted to do it. He wanted to be chosen for some unknown purpose. He wanted to know who this demon was, and above all, he wanted to know what his mark could do. Without further hesitation, Cruchinex placed his hand on the pillar and the ground below his feet began to shake. A red beam of dark light erupted from the floor encompassing him. Wisps of the beam filled the air as his hair rose up far above his head. It changed from its light brown hue to a deep, crimson color. His eyes seemed to give off an aura of the same color as the beam began to fade and Cruchinex’s hair began to be completely crimson. Suddenly, he got a cramp that rocked his entire body. The strain from the last day was taking its toll on him. Cruchinex’s hair began to surge back and forth between the crimson red and its light brown color. Then the beam completely disappeared and his hair was back to normal. Cruchinex looked up as his bang fell back in place. ‘Dang it... I like it better red,’ he thought to himself. Then as if by Cruchinex’s command, his hair became crimson red again.“That’s not supposed to happen, human. That isn’t the ability of your mark…Something must have occurred when your powers were being awakened. No matter. I require nourishment, what can you give me, human?” BlaCroc asked him with authority.“Well most of our cooked food is gone. And the rest I was told not to touch. So all we have left are some pears…But I don’t think—”Cruchinex was saying.“You don’t think? Truer words have never been spoken. Go get me these pears of yours.” Cruchinex made a brief scowl at the wolf, which was responded with the sound of BlaCroc snarling at the boy. Immediately Cruchinex headed off in his kitchen, muttering, and returned with a somewhat large bag filled with pears. The hell hound sniffed the bag and muttered something about slime. He looked at Cruchinex and concluding that he’d rather stuff his face with the pears than the boy, for now, took a bite out of the fruit. Immediately, BlaCroc’s expression changed. He started to devour the pears with a ravenous fury, making no discretion between the actual meat of the fruit and its stems. Not wanting to stick around, Cruchinex left the wolf alone, to eat his food in peace.As the days passed, Cruchinex and BlaCroc had barely recognized each other. Of course, in front of Cruchinex’s parents, the two would put on a façade as though they enjoyed each others company, but in truth they seemed to despise each other. Cruchinex had made attempts to hold a conversation with BlaCroc, but the demon-wolf never uttered more than four words, and usually they were “Get away from me” or “Get me some pears.” After about a week since his birthday, Cruchinex decided to try out the gloves and sabers his father gave him. He walked out of his semi-old yellow house, and walked around the street to a park. Having nothing better to do, BlaCroc followed. The two approached a tree and Cruchinex, pulled out the sabers from his pockets. He lifted them and noticed that they were considerably lighter than when he first held them. ‘Is this the power of my mark? I wonder…’ He began to jab at the tree, with improved speed that was inappropriate for a 14 year old to have. He smiled approving of the changes that had been placed upon his body. Still smiling, he decided to place on the gloves. As he tried to lift his hands he soon realized that he was getting nowhere fast. Seeing Cruchinex struggle to lift his hands, BlaCroc began to laugh at the child.“You are feeble and a disappointment, even with the power of the mark.”“Shut up you lazy dog! You’ve done nothing but sit around and ask for pears! I don’t even know why your still here! Why don’t you get out of my damn life?” Cruchinex retorted.Your life wasn’t damned before, BUT IT IS NOW!!!!!” BlaCroc said as he pounced on the boy. Snarling he began to press down on Cruchinex’s chest, causing him to lose breath. Panting, Cruchinex refused to be taken down so easily. The boy used all the strength he could muster to pick up his arms and punch the wolf, throwing him off his chest. The wolf looked temporarily stunned, which is very unbecoming for a demon, but he then disappeared. As Cruchinex looked for the wolf, he felt the sharp pain of claws shred through his back like butter. The wolf growled as Cruchinex fell and bit onto his leg. The hound then tossed him into the tree sending a surge of pain through his back. He walked up to the boy, teeth barred, ready to strike. As he was going to bite into his neck, Cruchinex grabbed BlaCroc’s throat, choking him. His eyes began to glow a deep crimson as he picked up the wolf and threw him a good few meters away from him. “I’ve had enough of this! I’m tired of you being…YOU! I don’t even know why you’re here! I’m leaving, and I don’t care what you do, just don’t mess with me any more!” Cruchinex said, tears in his eyes from both the wounds and because his hopes were dashed.“CRUCHINEX! What happened to you?” his mother screamed as he came in the door. BlaCroc followed in behind him looking down he did. His mother glared at the wolf that merely fell as he came inside. “Ma it’s not what you think. BlaCroc and I were in the park when some older guys with dogs came and beat us up. BlaCroc did his best to protect me, but I got hit a couple of times,” Cruchinex lied. His mother looked at him and the wolf suspiciously, but sighed in relief.“Thank God. Oh my, your father and I were about to leave for our anniversary, finally, but I’m not going anywhere until your better.” Cruchinex had completely forgotten that today was the day that his parents had told him they would be going on their anniversary trip to Las Vegas, to mix business with pleasure, he supposed. Cruchinex looked at his mother and asked her not to hold out on her plans because he was a little beaten for it. All it got him was a slap on the face and the next 48 hours under her watch and care. During that time, Cruchinex and BlaCroc had actually become closer than they were before. BlaCroc explained to him why he had stayed here with Cruchinex. “My former master, the demon of deception, had begun to turn over a new leaf, despite his ways. He began to turn on the minions of Hell, and went to those pearly gates, barely escaping his destruction. When he reached the gates of Heaven they did not believe him because of who he was. He tried to convince them to open the entrance but it was too late. His fellow demons had caught up to him and dragged him back down to hell, killing him. At that moment of his death you were born. That is why I’m here; I believe…we are supposed to be with each other.” AMD I WANT IT TO BE C![/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Sorry, but to be honoust, I don't have the time to read that whole bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 @ Whamo: I'll help you with a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Max I see you returned.So what's up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Not much. Will probably upload a couple of chapters of my fan-fic tonight. EDIT: Chapter 5 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Thanks Max, I'll Pm the main features of the set... you migyht've seen some it with sinister despartaion and such but I want to finish it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Have just read that the title of the 100th YGO 5Ds episode is: "Revival! Dark Signer! Machine Emperor vs Earthbound God" which gives a rather subtle hint to what will happen in that episode. This shows a few things. 1. The Japanese like exclaimation marks far too much.2. We're going back on what was said when the King of the Underworld was defeated (as in, all Dark Signers would be revived)3. Konami evidently have run out of ideas, or can't think of how to advance the story. It should be good since the "Machine Emperor" cards are easy fodder for "Proof of Powerlessness", a card that works so well with the Earthbounds, along with "Raregold Armour". Wipe out their low-levels then stop them from attacking. Excellent. Just add an "Earthbound Whirlwind" and you're good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Guys, I have an announcement. I am taking a weekend trip to a friend of mine in the capitol, and I will not bring my PC, out of fear of a thug stealing it. So I will not be able to be online over the weekend. Sorry for that. See ya! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Guys' date=' I have an announcement. I am taking a weekend trip to a friend of mine in the capitol, and I will not bring my PC, out of fear of a thug stealing it. So I will not be able to be online over the weekend. Sorry for that. See ya! :D[/quote'] capitol of were? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 capitol of where? I'm guessing Norway' date=' since that's where he lives... And Ursus, have a good trip but before you go, you'd better comment on my fic and new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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