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[Nathanael D. Striker]

Kinda sounds like this a more generic version of this clu...b

 

We already had that happen with Striker once' date=' didnt like it, and would rather not have it happen again. PM Max the details of our club, and he'll decide if it's too much like this one.

[/quote']

 

My club is not a generic version of this club, at least not anymore. I fixed it!

[Lord Ursus]

Good, Striker. Rip-off clubs are very uncreative.

 

And chrid, seems like a good idea, but I think the idea is allready used, as a lot of clubs here focus on the wellfare of its members, so I guess it's used in mainly all of the clubs here.

[chrid97]

then whatelse should I do

[Lord Ursus]

...

 

I don't know.

 

But don't you worry, you'll come up with something great. You just have to find something that'll catch their interest. ;)

 

And I have added an Archetype tutorial to my guide. Max, may I ask you to put the link to it on the first page?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-171254.html

[Max Darkness]

[spoiler=[b]@ Chrid97[/b]]

Edit

Name: BloodLust Head Assasin Shadow Stalker

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 7

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultimate Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2800/2600

effect: When this card is special summoned inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenent.

Once per turn by paying 500 Life Points you can destroy 1 card on the field or attack your oppenet directly. Once per turn by paying half of your life points destroy all cards the field(excluding this card) and then inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300.

 

Odd assassin. High level and a destructive effect' date=' compared to an expected low-level debilitating effect. And stupidly overpowered. Paying 500 LP to cause 2800 ATK to your opponent...

And then for some reason you've squeezed in "Neo-Daedalus"' effect (a Level 10 that's Nomi) Remove the last effect. In fact, re-work this card completely.[/i']

 

 

Name: BloodLust Master General Magon

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 5

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2100/1900

Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "BloodLust Solider" and "BloodLust Minion". Once per turn you can special summon 1 "BloodLust Solider" or "BloodLust Minion" from your hand' date=' graveyard, or removed from play pile. For every "BloodLust" monster on the field this card gains 300 ATK and DEF.

[/quote']

 

Relatively balanced, but could become overpowered.

 

then what else should I do

 

Wait around to come up with a different idea. And like everyone said' date=' it seems too like a lot of the clubs here already.

 

And what is the current obsession with having a club? I can't understand it to be honest.[/i']

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Striker[/b]]

What chrid said was not a swear word. A mod said that same word and they said it wasn't swearing.

 

But if someone takes offense to it' date=' then it's vulgar.

 

 

Don't I usually do, but I think that someone else needs to fix that.

 

Fix that now!!!

 

It's my evil mood...

 

That's right! Mwhahahahahahahaha!

 

Please Help me!

 

Yea' date=' I was rushed when I did the effect at school though. I should change tails to:

This card loses 100 ATK for each Warrior-Type monster in your opponent's Graveyard.

 

How does that sound!

 

It sounds fine, so Sweet Lightning rate it now!

 

Sorry about that it was my split-personality (aka- Evil Mood)

 

 

I just hope I can keep it in...

 

No you can't

 

I've seen most decks have at least 1 warrior in a deck. (You didn't see anything)

 

This thread almost got locked because of you guys and your spamming. Please stop spamming from now on. I don't want this wonderful thread to be locked. Not that I'm saying anyone is doing it right now' date=' but seriously. D:

[/quote']

 

1. Continue to Spam and you'll be banned.

 

2. Not every Deck has Warriors.

 

"Ancient Gears" are a self-contained archetype (all Machines) taking support from the "Gadget" and "Machine King" and "Jinzo" archetypes (also all Machines)

 

"Blackwings" are also self-contained. And are all DARK Winged Beasts.

 

"Aliens" and "Venom" are all Reptiles.

 

"Batterymen" are all Thunder and are almost self-contained.

 

Zombie, Archfiend, Psychic and Dragon Decks almost always lack any Warriors.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ DragonMaster[/b]]

can i join?

i have no idea what im doing!

 

Yes. Fill this in:

 

Club Username:

Why you want to join:

Favorite Card:

Do you play the game in real life:

How you were referred to the club:

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Lord Ursus[/b]]

And I have added an Archetype tutorial to my guide. Max' date=' may I ask you to put the link to it on the first page?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-171254.html

[/quote']

 

I'll add it. On a side note about your tut, you might want to split Chapters 2 and 3 into a different spoiler, because they are not immediately obvious at the moment.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Sweet Lighting[/b]]

Konami's To-Do List:

 

- Showcase and release "Majestic Savior Rose Dragon"

- Showcase and release "Majestic Savior Fairy Dragon"

- Showcase and release "Black Rose Dragon / Assault Mode", "Ancient Fairy Dragon / Assault Mode" and "Power Tool Dragon / Assault Mode"

- Release "Infernity Zero" and other "Infernity" monsters.

- Release more Machine-Type Tuners

- Create a special episode where Yusei must win with 1 LP against a villian with a million LP.

- Give us a frame of reference as to how far in the future we are. (Because it's at least 50 years and what happened to the Egyptian Gods?)

 

 

I've just noticed something Sweet. I was watching the final episodes of the Dark Signer arc (Season 2?) and I realised that in the final episode, where they beat Godwin, the whole story wrapped up nicely and YGO 5Ds could have finished there with no problem, since everything had been done.

 

And when you watch the next episode, it reminds you far too much of the first episode of the "Waking the Dragons" arc in the original YGO. It's like this:

 

Yusei: "And now Godwin! Majestic Savior Star Dragon will attack, ending this convaluted arc filled with overused plot elements and children's card game playing zombies!" Yes, you did read that right.

*Godwin LP: 3000 → 0*

Yusei et all: "Yay! We've beaten the ultimate evil (with a children's card game on flying motorcycles)!"

*Card-Meteor falls to ground*

Yusei: "...Oh. Turns out there's an even more sinister and more ultimately evil power out there..." *sighs*

...

Yusei, Jack and Crow: "Plot-less filler!"

*Rua and Ruka (on powered skateboards(!)) get pwned by gigantic-metal-bird-thing.

Y, J + C: "Could this be the beginning of a new story?"

Bruno: "Hi. I'm a mysterious character with no backstory (like Ishizu). Let's talk nerd Yusei."

Y, J + C: "No it isn't."

...

Yusei and Kiryu: "Pointless filler!" (Which for some reason leads to more yaoi fics...)

*Lotten LP: 1000 → 0*

Kiryu: "...Well that achieved a lot..."

Yusei: "I'm going now."

...

???

 

 

It's as if they've decided to give up on the idea of a coherent story and have turned it into Card Captor Sakura (1 plot episode, 1 filler episode) except they're putting all the filler at the start. Fun.

 

 

[Scatty]

...

 

I don't know.

 

But don't you worry' date=' you'll come up with something great. You just have to find something that'll catch their interest. ;)

 

And I have added an Archetype tutorial to my guide. Max, may I ask you to put the link to it on the first page?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-171254.html

[/quote']

 

You can't just put limits and regulations to archetypes. They can simply be anything and everything.

[Max Darkness]

You can't just put limits and regulations to archetypes. They can simply be anything and everything.

 

Of course you can; in fact you have to. The "Ancient Gears" are all EARTH Machines, the "Blackwings" are all DARK Winged Beasts, the "Alien" archetype is entirely Reptile. And all share similar appearances with their fellow members.

 

Plus, there have to regs over archetypes. The Earthbound Gods are an archetype, but because they are all trump cards, only one can be on the field at one time, since there are no weaker monsters to balance them out.

 

The "Warriors" archetype is made up of powerful Synchros and weak Tuners, giving a balance.

 

An archetype isn't an archetype if they don't have a characteristic(s) that links them together.

[chrid97]

Name: BloodLust Head Assasin Shadow Stalker

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 7

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultimate Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2800/2600

effect: When this card is special summoned inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenent.

Once per turn by paying 500 Life Points you can destroy 1 card on the field or attack your oppenet directly. Once per turn by paying half of your life points destroy all cards the field(excluding this card) and then inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300.

 

Name: BloodLust Master General Magon

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 5

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2100/1900

Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "BloodLust Solider" and "BloodLust Minion". Once per turn you can special summon 1 "BloodLust Solider" or "BloodLust Minion" from your hand, graveyard, or removed from play pile. For every "BloodLust" monster on the field this card gains 300 ATK and DEF

 

I thought if the ones below in scholl and i was hopping i didnt froget the naem and efects

 

 

Name: BloodLust Tax Collecter

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 2

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 200/100

Effect: You can only gain this effect once per turn. You can pick 1 card on your oppenents side of the field or hand and place it in your hand or field or for every card your oppenent has on the feild or hand(you choose) you can decrease his Life Points x200 for each card and increase your by the same number. During your stand by phase you must tribute 1 monster, discard a card from your hand, remove a monster in your graveyard from play, and pay 1000 Life POints. If you don not this card is destoryed

 

Name: BloodLust Civilion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 1

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Common

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 0/0

Effect: Flip: When this card is destroyed by battle special summon 3 "Civilion Tokens"(Dark/1/ATK 0/DEF 0/Fiend) to your or your oppenents side of the field. If it is special summoned to your oppenents side of the field it gains this effect:

This card cannot be tributed

If it is summoned to your side of field it is treated as a normal type monster.

[Max Darkness]

Name: BloodLust Tax Collecter

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 2

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 200/100

Effect: You can only gain this effect once per turn. You can pick 1 card on your oppenents side of the field or hand and place it in your hand or field or for every card your oppenent has on the filed or hand(you choose) you can decrease his Life Points x200 for each card and increase your by the same number.

 

Name: BloodLust Civilion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 1

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Common

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 0/0

Effect: Flip: When this card is destroyed by battle special summon 3 "Civilion Tokens"(Dark/1/ATK 0/DEF 0/Fiend) to your or your oppenents side of the field. If it is special summoned to your oppenents side of the field it gains this effect:

This card cannot be tributed or destroyed by battle. This card must remain in face up attack position.

If it is summoned to your side of field it is treated as a normal type monster.

 

1. I thought this was an army of resurrected fiends desiring the blood of the living' date=' not a civilisation. 2. The first two haven't been changed since last time. 3. These two are stupidly overpowered.

 

Let me give you an example of Tax Collector's rampant abuse.

- Your opponent has 4 cards on the field (2 monsters and 2 face-downs) and 3 cards in their hand.

- You pick-up your opponent's face-downs ("Mirror Force" and "Negate Attack") and add them to your hand.

- You set aforementioned Traps and thus have an illegal Deck.

- So this card is not only overpowered, but also disallowed.

 

As for BL Civilian, how is your opponent supposed to get rid of the Tokens? All tokens have a way to be removed, and since they can't be destroyed by battle or switch their Battle Position, you've got an easy route to victory.

Either re-work these cards completely or scrap them.[/i']

[chrid97]

ill fix them and the first 2 bloodlust cards only one person corrected them and i wanted more people to fix them in any way possible

btw when the bloodlust cam back to life or were created(still not sure witch ine) they made are going to make a civilation and are planning to invest the world with these bloodlust creatures, and then universe

edit: i edited the cards

[Necro Pheonix]

Hey peoples, I am officially changing my name to Necro Pheonix. I have won a free name change from Opal.

 

What do you think?

[Max Darkness]

@ Chrid:

 

I did comment on those two, check my previous posts on this thread.

 

 

@ Sweeny/Necro:

 

Not again... And it's pretty good.

[chrid97]

@Max: you did

@Sweeny: how did u win the name change and i guess its a good name

[Necro Pheonix]

Well, I won one, and i decided that that one was good.

 

EDIT: YCM Secret Santa, I gave one of the best gifts.

[chrid97]

how did u win one though

Edit

Name: BloodLust Head Assasin Shadow Stalker

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 3

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 700/600

effect: When this card is special summoned inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenent.

Once per turn by paying 500 Life Points you can destroy 1 card on the field or attack your oppenet directly. Once per turn by paying half of your life points destroy all cards the field(excluding this card) and then inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300.

[Max Darkness]

Ah, you didn't get to choose. You won 'Necro Phoenix'.

 

[spoiler=Transcend Machine King]

 

Effect: This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 3 Machine-Type monsters or by Tributing 1 "Machine King" or "Perfect Machine King" you control. This card gains 750 ATK for each other Machine-Type monster on the field. Once per turn, if this card would be removed from the field, you can discard 1 Machine- Type monster from your Deck to negate the effect. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)

 

 

[chrid97]

kool card

nice pic and effect and name

Name: BloodLust Tax Collecter

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 2

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 200/100

Effect: You can only gain this effect once per turn. You can pick 1 card on your oppenents side of the field or hand and place it in your hand or field or for every card your oppenent has on the feild or hand(you choose) you can decrease his Life Points x200 for each card and increase your by the same number. During your stand by phase you must tribute 1 monster, discard a card from your hand, remove a monster in your graveyard from play, and pay 1000 Life POints. If you don not this card is destoryed

how is it now?

Name: BloodLust Civilion

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 1

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Common

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 0/0

Effect: Flip: When this card is destroyed by battle special summon 3 "Civilion Tokens"(Dark/1/ATK 0/DEF 0/Fiend) to your or your oppenents side of the field. If it is special summoned to your oppenents side of the field it gains this effect:

This card cannot be tributed

If it is summoned to your side of field it is treated as a normal type monster.

[Max Darkness]

kool card

nice pic and effect and name

Name: BloodLust Tax Collecter

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 2

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Fiend

ATK/DEF: 200/100

Effect: You can only gain this effect once per turn. You can pick 1 card on your oppenents side of the field or hand and place it in your hand or field or for every card your oppenent has on the feild or hand(you choose) you can decrease his Life Points x200 for each card and increase your by the same number. During your stand by phase you must tribute 1 monster' date=' discard a card from your hand, remove a monster in your graveyard from play, and pay 1000 Life POints. If you don not this card is destoryed

how is it now?

[/quote']

 

It's the bolded part which is the real problem, since it can give you access to cards you shouldn't have. You could use this card to gain 2 "Mirror Force" cards to obliterate your opponent. And as long as you have one monster in your Graveyard to start off with, you'll always be able to fulfull it's maintainance costs.

 

(Draw a card, tribute a monster, discard a card, pay LP. Next turn, draw a card, remove monster sent to Graveyard last turn from play etc.)

[chrid97]

what if i change it to maybe 1 spell or monster

[Sweet Lightning]

Hey peoples' date=' I am officially changing my name to Necro Pheonix. I have won a free name change from Opal.

 

What do you think?

[/quote']

 

So. "Death Phoenix". Sounds pretty epic to me, but you didn't get to choose? D:

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Chrid97[/b]]

Edit

Name: BloodLust Head Assasin Shadow Stalker

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 7

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultimate Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2800/2600

effect: When this card is special summoned inflict 500 points of damage to your oppenent.

Once per turn by paying 500 Life Points you can destroy 1 card on the field or attack your oppenet directly. Once per turn by paying half of your life points destroy all cards the field(excluding this card) and then inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300.

 

Odd assassin. High level and a destructive effect' date=' compared to an expected low-level debilitating effect. And stupidly overpowered. Paying 500 LP to cause 2800 ATK to your opponent...

And then for some reason you've squeezed in "Neo-Daedalus"' effect (a Level 10 that's Nomi) Remove the last effect. In fact, re-work this card completely.[/i']

 

 

Name: BloodLust Master General Magon

ATT: Dark

Card Type: Effect

Lv. 5

Trap/Magic Type: None

Rarity: Ultra Rare

Type: Warrior

ATK/DEF: 2100/1900

Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "BloodLust Solider" and "BloodLust Minion". Once per turn you can special summon 1 "BloodLust Solider" or "BloodLust Minion" from your hand' date=' graveyard, or removed from play pile. For every "BloodLust" monster on the field this card gains 300 ATK and DEF.

[/quote']

 

Relatively balanced, but could become overpowered.

 

then what else should I do

 

Wait around to come up with a different idea. And like everyone said' date=' it seems too like a lot of the clubs here already.

 

And what is the current obsession with having a club? I can't understand it to be honest.[/i']

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Striker[/b]]

What chrid said was not a swear word. A mod said that same word and they said it wasn't swearing.

 

But if someone takes offense to it' date=' then it's vulgar.

 

 

Don't I usually do, but I think that someone else needs to fix that.

 

Fix that now!!!

 

It's my evil mood...

 

That's right! Mwhahahahahahahaha!

 

Please Help me!

 

Yea' date=' I was rushed when I did the effect at school though. I should change tails to:

This card loses 100 ATK for each Warrior-Type monster in your opponent's Graveyard.

 

How does that sound!

 

It sounds fine, so Sweet Lightning rate it now!

 

Sorry about that it was my split-personality (aka- Evil Mood)

 

 

I just hope I can keep it in...

 

No you can't

 

I've seen most decks have at least 1 warrior in a deck. (You didn't see anything)

 

This thread almost got locked because of you guys and your spamming. Please stop spamming from now on. I don't want this wonderful thread to be locked. Not that I'm saying anyone is doing it right now' date=' but seriously. D:

[/quote']

 

1. Continue to Spam and you'll be banned.

 

2. Not every Deck has Warriors.

 

"Ancient Gears" are a self-contained archetype (all Machines) taking support from the "Gadget" and "Machine King" and "Jinzo" archetypes (also all Machines)

 

"Blackwings" are also self-contained. And are all DARK Winged Beasts.

 

"Aliens" and "Venom" are all Reptiles.

 

"Batterymen" are all Thunder and are almost self-contained.

 

Zombie, Archfiend, Psychic and Dragon Decks almost always lack any Warriors.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ DragonMaster[/b]]

can i join?

i have no idea what im doing!

 

Yes. Fill this in:

 

Club Username:

Why you want to join:

Favorite Card:

Do you play the game in real life:

How you were referred to the club:

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Lord Ursus[/b]]

And I have added an Archetype tutorial to my guide. Max' date=' may I ask you to put the link to it on the first page?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-171254.html

[/quote']

 

I'll add it. On a side note about your tut, you might want to split Chapters 2 and 3 into a different spoiler, because they are not immediately obvious at the moment.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]@ Sweet Lighting[/b]]

Konami's To-Do List:

 

- Showcase and release "Majestic Savior Rose Dragon"

- Showcase and release "Majestic Savior Fairy Dragon"

- Showcase and release "Black Rose Dragon / Assault Mode", "Ancient Fairy Dragon / Assault Mode" and "Power Tool Dragon / Assault Mode"

- Release "Infernity Zero" and other "Infernity" monsters.

- Release more Machine-Type Tuners

- Create a special episode where Yusei must win with 1 LP against a villian with a million LP.

- Give us a frame of reference as to how far in the future we are. (Because it's at least 50 years and what happened to the Egyptian Gods?)

 

 

I've just noticed something Sweet. I was watching the final episodes of the Dark Signer arc (Season 2?) and I realised that in the final episode, where they beat Godwin, the whole story wrapped up nicely and YGO 5Ds could have finished there with no problem, since everything had been done.

 

And when you watch the next episode, it reminds you far too much of the first episode of the "Waking the Dragons" arc in the original YGO. It's like this:

 

Yusei: "And now Godwin! Majestic Savior Star Dragon will attack, ending this convaluted arc filled with overused plot elements and children's card game playing zombies!" Yes, you did read that right.

*Godwin LP: 3000 → 0*

Yusei et all: "Yay! We've beaten the ultimate evil (with a children's card game on flying motorcycles)!"

*Card-Meteor falls to ground*

Yusei: "...Oh. Turns out there's an even more sinister and more ultimately evil power out there..." *sighs*

...

Yusei, Jack and Crow: "Plot-less filler!"

*Rua and Ruka (on powered skateboards(!)) get pwned by gigantic-metal-bird-thing.

Y, J + C: "Could this be the beginning of a new story?"

Bruno: "Hi. I'm a mysterious character with no backstory (like Ishizu). Let's talk nerd Yusei."

Y, J + C: "No it isn't."

...

Yusei and Kiryu: "Pointless filler!" (Which for some reason leads to more yaoi fics...)

*Lotten LP: 1000 → 0*

Kiryu: "...Well that achieved a lot..."

Yusei: "I'm going now."

...

???

 

 

It's as if they've decided to give up on the idea of a coherent story and have turned it into Card Captor Sakura (1 plot episode, 1 filler episode) except they're putting all the filler at the start. Fun.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Developer's Thought Process]

Producer Guy 1: Phew! We finally got done with the 5D's anime! That was tough work, thinking of a main plot with almost no filler!

 

Producer Guy 2: Yeah! Well, let see. Satellite and Neo Domino City are finally united and peaceful, the Dark Signers have been finished, and Yusei has all his friends back! We're done!

 

*They start packing up. Producer Guy 1 gets a phone call, and hangs up, looking somber.*

 

Producer Guy 1: They...said 64 episodes isn't enough...

 

Producer Guy 2: What?! What could we possibly do now?!

 

*Both look at each other, and smile*

 

Producer Guy 1: You thinkin' what I'm thinking?...

 

Both:FILLER!

 

Producer Guy 1 (talking feverishly): Let's introduce...what was it...Yliaster? Oh! And let's bring back the Time Wizard and Kiryu and we could also show Aki and Rua and Ruka getting introduced to Turbo Duels and...

 

Producer Guy 2: Ruka and Rua can't drive...

 

*They smile again*

 

Both: SKATEBOARDS!

 

Why, Konami, why? What are you guys THINKING?

 

 

[Necro Pheonix]

I got to choose. I just got one for free, so I can still get another.

[Sweet Lightning]

In that case, very cool choice. ;)

 

So the mods are only letting us get one name change now?

 

I was not aware...

[Necro Pheonix]

Yeah, 1 and thats it.

[chrid97]

In that case' date=' very cool choice. ;)

 

So the mods are only letting us get one name change now?

 

I was not aware...

[/quote']yea i think its dumb. I think it should be at least 1 every 2 months

[Necro Pheonix]

But, its not. I guess they have their reasons though...