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Hey guys' date=' me and my friend are working on righting a book. I'll post it here, and It would be great if you would take the time to read and comment on it. I know there are speeling errors throughout, but I've been to lazy to fix here mistakes.

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Will read after exams. BTW, Sweeny, do you want to duel? If you're free.

 

 

@Max: I never saw the Assualt mode episode' date=' and I'm glad I missed it. ;) IMO, the only reason 4Kids showed the Aki with D Wheel episode was for...fanservice!

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Watch it, it has Yusei and his amazing flying motorcycle (I didn't make that up). Aki has now been reduced to a YGO counterpart of May from Pokemon (she's only there to look pretty).

 

I want the original, psycho, sadistic Aki back; the one everyone liked.

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Okay, I'll post this card I made a couple of days back that only a couple of people have commented on.

 

[spoiler=I must be running low on ideas]

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Effect: 2 Dragon-Type Monsters + 1 Machine-Type Monster

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it can attack once again. During your End Phase, if this card inflicted Battle Damage to your opponent, you can select 1 Monster in your opponent's Extra Deck whose ATK is equal to or lower than the damage your opponent took. During your opponent's next turn, the selected monster cannot be Summoned. During each of your End Phases, remove 1 of the Fusion Material Monsters used to Fusion Summon this card from play. If you do not, this card is destroyed.

 

 

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Your story freaks me out, Sweeny! I'm not really a fan of the whole apocalypse genre, but your story kept me on edge throughout. Oh the suspense...you just have grammar and spelling errors scattered about, but otherwise, it's great. ;) Is this going to be the next chapter(s) in your fan-fiction? It's shaping up to be a nice story. :)

 

In other news, I just beat Max with a Normalcy Deck, but he gets better every time!

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"Occult Science", well only this one:

 

[spoiler=Occult Science Caedo]

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Effect: This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by removing 1 DARK monster in your Deck from play. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Level 3 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. If you do, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to half the removed monster's ATK, until your End Phase. When this card is destroyed, it is removed from play.

 

 

 

 

Problem is, HP Doom has run out of renders, and the whole set was merely to show off that I knew about Accel Synchro Summoning (and could make a stupidly complex A.S.M.) and wanted to expand on their, frankly, pathetic showing in the amine.

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