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Lighting is bad, the source of light should at least be as bright as the highlighted areas on the focal

Glowing hand doesn't look that good, far too bright to fit in with the surroundings particularly the light source dimmer than it, is also based too close to the same distance as the focal to recieve all the light that it has

Highlighted areas on the c4ds are somewhat adequately lit for the light but do not match how strong the light is on the focal nor the direction that the light is coming from

Starry background does not work very well with this style

Effects going over focal seem too distant to be in front

The blue effects around the glowing hand and the focal's face are bad

The shapeless effects put over the focal do not suit the environment they're in very well

The highly contrasted effects near the hand are too bright and contrasted

Text font is a terrible choice

 

I got all I could find, not sure if that's all

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