New D.Heroes!!! the next wave of destiny

[Pro36ixty]

Im just thinking of making these cards, need to find images for them now. If anyone knows where i can find good images that suit these then please tell me it will be much appreciated.

 

Destiny Hero - Dame Wisdom

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FIRE/Warrior/Effect

ATK/1500 Def/1000

While you control this face-up card, you can remove from play one Spell/Trap card your opponent controls until your second Stand-by phase.

 

Destiny Hero - Scape Stalker

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DARK/Warrior/Effect

ATK/800 Def/800

When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, you can remove from play 1 attack position monster your opponent controls until the End phase of his/her next turn.

 

Dark City Rebuilt - Destinys City

Field Spell

When your opponent attacks you directly and you control no monsters, you can remove from play from your graveyard 1 "Destiny Hero" monster to make all Battle damage 0 until the End phase of this turn. During your next Stand-by phase, you can return to your graveyard the monster you removed from play. When a "Destiny Hero" monster attacks, if its ATK is lower than the ATK of the attack target, the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK during damage calculation only.

 

Thats all I've got so far, I know there are OCG errors because im not that clued up on all the OCG.

[EnkoMaun]

I see a lot of OCG errors. Dame Wisdom is OP'd, and the effect needs quite a huge rewording.

 

Scape Stalker sucks.

Dark City Rebuilt is just a dark city with Clock Tower Prison built into it.

But both are used for different strategies.

 

Also, it's not D.Hero. It's Destiny Hero.

And you got the whole logic of the effects wrong. Destiny Heroes have power to bring things and send things to the future. These... just get stuff from your deck. And there are many real cards that outclasses these.

 

So, no.

[Pro36ixty]

i've changed them a bit, yes i know there are errors and ive tryed to address them. These are just first drafts so there is alot of room to change them to make them much better

[EnkoMaun]

Then improve on your drafts BEFORE posting them.

 

That's what most people do.