vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Yes what do you want me to change you have to tell me before chpt 1 I'll start on that 2morrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ^ Ya know, as the writer, you can reserve the right to change charecters in any way you see fit ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 SAY WHAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 yep so if i wanted you to be the village idiot you would be the village idiot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 hey nexev would your strategy work if you were in a double battle and those were the first two pokemon to come out? No, the effects of baton pass pases on the effects when they are switched out,. If they are both out baton pass would work on a different foe.  It is important to note that all of my pokemon know Baton pass so they can continue the chain of stat boosters. In a double battle along with the baton pass I use Porygon Z and take advantage of it's high special attack to disrupt the field with attacks like Thunder, Flamethrower and other high attack specials. If Special defense is higher than the enemy's defense I switch to Rampardos. Yeah, I'm suprised Monohawks didn't know that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 i dont want my character to be the village idiot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Don't worry, since thier are no villages he will be in the least the kind hearted yet narssistic idoit of the school. You probbaly won't be any idiot, you could however be owned in one round by my Shuckle so everyone knows James Afterthoughts power early on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 dont worry i wont do that and nexev do you mind making the female protagonist? and what did you guys think of the prologue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 okay, phew,that had me going there for a second Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 He was joking about the village idiot thing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ya any who C-2 what did you think of the prologue? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 It's ok, the writing style could be better. You can try seperating a few paragraphs, and possibly try to slow down the story advancement and charecter interaction, to make the story a little more interesting. But not bad for a first ff ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 yeah. Could of been longer though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thanks of course im going to slow down a little more in the actual chapters but i should have done that here aswellPs i pmd death dealer like you saib but he nevr responed back and how doyou change your user name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 name: Sally Afterthoughtpokemon: Slakoth, unlike others Sally's energy made it's abbility not Truant but rather Iron Fist, making it a formidible foe indeed.age: 12apperance: Wears tan t-shirt and pants. Short brown hair and blue eyes. Somewhat prettydorm:(groundon brown,kyorgreblue,rayquazagreen thats in order from least to greatest) Groundon Brownbio: Sally is James younger brother who followed James to make sure he wasn't being a lazy bum. She was allowed in the school since her mom got arrested for fraud leaving the Afterthoughts homeless. However Sally was unable to actually go to the classes and just hanged out with the pokemon. She became good friends with them and had a good time at pokemon academy. When she reached twelve she got into the academy but was unable to get anywhere above Groundon because she would call the pokemon by thier nicknames, she would genuinly not know which pokemon the test was reffereing to. (She thought Drifloom was "Floaty" and thus could not ansewer any Drifloom related questions). She hangs around Tomas but only because she likes Bagon, she thinks Tomas is a loser. She knows some tatics from her brother but usually uses a hotheaded instinct approach to fighting. (However half the pokemon in the academy refuse to fight her since they like her so much) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thanks Nexev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 3 pages already. Not bad for a fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 ya i know huh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Your lucky. It usually takes luck to get pages this long. My fanfic only has three posts. Im sure it'll catch on though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thanks of course im going to slow down a little more in the actual chapters but i should have done that here aswellPs i pmd death dealer like you saib but he nevr responed back and how doyou change your user name? Dealer Umbra -.- Also, it's 3 pages for a ff without a chapter... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 thats right. Your definetly lucky fanmie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Wow im magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Wasn't calling him lucky. This thread is growing more and more full of spam... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeful lemonS Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Wasn't calling him lucky. This thread is growing more and more full of spam... thats true too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monohawks Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 i never got what spam was anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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