Minigarras fan fic EPISODE 3!!!

[minigarra]

Heres another exiting instalment OF MINIGARRAS FAN FIC!!!

Second post and due to popular demand ALL BIOS NOW HAVE HAIR COLOR EYES AND HAIR STYLE

 

Bio's

Name:Twelven

Deck Style:Spirits of the elements

Age:13

Hair:Dirty Blonde

Hair Style:None Really

Eyes:No Pupals?

 

(TA):LETS SEE SOME ACTION WITH TWELVEN VERSUS KEITH!!!

 

'Keith go's first'

I play one card face down and summon.

Star Servant (100/100 Light/Star Creature **)

And now i activate from my hand the spell.

Black Hole Star.

Black Hole Star is a spell card that allows you to summon another monster to the field

that is a Light Star Creature.

 

And I choose Black Hole Synchron (100/1600 Light/Star Creature ****)

AND NOW I SYNCHRO SUMMON!!!

STAR KING!!! (XXXX/XXXX Dark/Devine Beast ******)

HIS ATTACK AND DEFENCE IS THE NUMBER OF CARDS IN YOUR HAND X1000

Star King 6000/6000

I end my turn

 

'Twelvens Turn'

I play the Chearful Coffin. *Discards 3 cards from hand*

 

Keith:what good is that?

 

Twelven:Wait.

Now i remove Spirit Token of Wind from play (0000/0000 Wind/Spirit *)

In order to summon Wind King Rysu (1900/1900 Wind/Spirit ****)

Now i remove Spirit Token of Fire from play (0000/0000 Fire/Spirit *)

In order to summon Fire King Resu (1900/1900 Fire/Spirit ****)

Now do to Wind King Rysu's effect I DESTROY ALL MONSTERS ON THE FIELD!!!

Play one card face down and end my turn

 

'Keiths Turn'

I play Dark Fire Symbol (Spell Normal)

And sacerfice Fire Knight and Dragon egg TO SUMMON.

DARK DRAGON OF FIRE!!!! (6000/6000 Dark/Dragon ************)

This card can only be played by the effect of Dark fire simbel or its own effect.

When this card is sent from your hand to the grave yard

at the end of that turn you may pay all but 1 LP to special summon it to the feild it cannot attack the same turn

and none of your creatures can change position the turn this card is destroyed.

 

NOW ATTACK DARK DRAGON OF FIRE!!!!

 

5000 - –1000

 

(TA):THATS IT FOR THIS DUEL SO WELL SEE YOU TOMORROW FOR ANOTHER!!!

[Weather Report - Stand]

Why the hell did you make another topic for your lame story instead of putting it into the first topic? DUH.

[eyeofthedeck]

Dude, you need to work on your spelling, puntuation (make sure your I's are capitals when alone), grammar and you need to lengthen the duels because this fic has little potential to be as successful as one of Kendo's stories or Weather Report's. Also, do you plan anything? With my fanfiction I've only posted 2 episodes but I've almost finished planning all of season 1! I've also planned 3 seasons and I'm currently planning a fourth. Also, a tournament as a plot is a bit cliche'd.

[.:Incognito:.]

[spoiler=My first Weather Report!]

Heres another exiting instalment OF MINIGARRAS FAN FIC!!!First thing I notice' date=' is this fic has no title. I haven't read the first 2 chapters but judging from the title it's not exciting.[/b']

Second post and due to popular demand ALL BIOS NOW HAVE HAIR COLOR EYES AND HAIR STYLE.

 

Bio's

Name:Twelven Whatzamajigger. Last name?

Deck Style:Spirits of the elements

Age:13

Hair:Dirty Blonde

Hair Style:None Really

Eyes:No Pupals?There's no way that can be right!?!?

 

(TA):LETS SEE SOME ACTION WITH TWELVEN VERSUS KEITH!!!What? Wus going on!?

 

'Keith go's first' So you haven't learn to put periods? And what's with all the '?

I play one card face down and summon.

Star Servant (100/100 Light/Star Creature **)No period? ;_; You make me sad. And fake types?

And now i activate from my hand the spell. And I activate my Spell from my foot!

Black Hole Star. So you have learned about periods. But. Put. Them. In. All. The. Wrong. Places

Black Hole Star is a spell card that allows you to summon another monster to the field

that is a Light Star Creature. Why down here????

 

And I choose Black Hole Synchron (100/1600 Light/Star Creature ****)

AND NOW I SYNCHRO SUMMON!!!

STAR KING!!! (XXXX/XXXX Dark/Devine Beast ******)

HIS ATTACK AND DEFENCE IS THE NUMBER OF CARDS IN YOUR HAND X1000

Star King 6000/6000

I end my turn

Take it easy, but I love the way everyone shouts while playing a children's card game! So... A 6 star dude with 6000 ATK. This would be meta if made.

'Twelvens Turn'

I play the Chearful Coffin. *Discards 3 cards from hand*

 

Keith:what good is that?Noob, doesn't know about DWs.

Twelven:"Wait.

Now i remove Spirit Token of Wind from play (0000/0000 Wind/Spirit *)

In order to summon Wind King Rysu (1900/1900 Wind/Spirit ****)

Now i remove Spirit Token of Fire from play (0000/0000 Fire/Spirit *)

In order to summon Fire King Resu (1900/1900 Fire/Spirit ****)

Now do to Wind King Rysu's effect I DESTROY ALL MONSTERS ON THE FIELD!!!

Play one card face down and end my turn." There's no way that can be right! He's a noob. So, why did he summon Wind if he would just destroy it in a second?

 

'Keiths Turn'

"I play Dark Fire Symbol, (Spell Normal)"

Aand sacerficeI lol'd Fire Knight and Dragon egg TO SUMMON.

DARK DRAGON OF FIRE!!!! (6000/6000 Dark/Dragon ************)"Underpowered maybe?

This card can only be played by the effect of Dark fire simbelI lol'd hard or its own effect.

When this card is sent from your hand to the grave yard*facepalm*

at the end of that turn you may pay all but 1 LP to special summon it to the feild it cannot attack the same turn

and none of your creatures can change position the turn this card is destroyed.

 

"NOW ATTACK DARK DRAGON OF FIRE!!!!"RAAAAAAAAAGEEEEE!!!!!!!!! ROOOOOAAAAR Dude seriously take it easy!"

 

5000 - –1000 Now when did he lose life points? He should have 2000 right now?

 

(TA):THATS IT FOR THIS DUEL SO WELL SEE YOU TOMORROW FOR ANOTHER!!!

 

It sucks. No periods. The story sucks if it is even a story. You know there's this thing called school.

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[eyeofthedeck]

Seriously, why are your episodes so short?

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

It's so bad. -_-

 

No description of your characters.

Too much scrip format.

Not enough detail.

Title is just err...bad.

My first fanfic was never this bad. (I put too much description into it)

And I don't like posting fanfics on YCM.

 

How old are you, anyway? I'm 11.