Lemniscate Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Not my best, I'll be the first to admit, but it's not bad imo. CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Make her smaller. imo, the render is too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Colours seem off D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Yeah, render's too big, so text steals focal. If the text is meant to say 'Mission', then text is awful. And is that Steiner? ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 It says frission. It's gonna be his new name soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 It's not a render.And the text says "frission" which is the name I am changing to.I have no idea who Steiner is. I know the focal is too big, I just didn't care enough to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Text dosent work.She's to big.I like the colors, except the blue on the left, I think it ruins it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarl Ballin Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 I'm not a fan of the render. I think it would be better without the text since you can't really put it anywhere to make it look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Again, it's not a render.Two, there is nothing wrong with the text, it's not distracting, it doesn't steal from the focal, it doesn't harm the tag in any way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 Too big focal.Colors are off.This could have been a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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