Exyst Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/osv7yw.png[/IMG] ALL scratch, except text [spoiler=V1.5, still all scratch, except text] [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/1z6qgjd.png[/IMG] [/spoiler] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUKwH81csts]Musical Inspiration: K-On! Ending[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Very Nice. ;DI would say just try to make it a little more interesting, add some background or something. But other than that, this is the smex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Speaker too? Teh smex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Pretty awesome jabroni'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Not liking the details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Not liking the details. I didn't think you would. Slightly cluttered V1.5 added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 V1.5 is pretty cluttered, I would say to clean up the left side, and also (just a little thing) change the alignment on the text a bit, so that it merges perfectly with the lines. I would say stick with the first design, but make the BG more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Made with Illustrator?Not a fan of the pentooling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Scrap v1.5, its just too messy and cluttered for the style and also makes it lqV1 is a good start but it also doesn't look finished so continue to experiment on things (that are simple) until you get something you believe looks good. Finally the piece looks quite similar to a tut for sale by Sentiment on PR, just pointing that out :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Scrap v1.5' date=' its just too messy and cluttered for the style and also makes it lqV1 is a good start but it also doesn't look finished so continue to experiment on things (that are simple) until you get something you believe looks good. Finally the piece looks quite similar to a tut for sale by Sentiment on PR, just pointing that out :P[/quote'] It's for free : D And I took the idea from that =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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