Aesirson Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 Thank you guys, will start writing Chapter 4 now, and I know my grammar isn't the best and my word choices can be weird at times too. I will try to make Bob a bit more original and Boss will have a bigger role later :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 yeea..I can't wait the 4th chapter..:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted August 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 4: The Way to Victory! Dueling the Savior!]The sky was clouded, as always these days. The sound of two D-Wheels racing through the docks was the only thing that broke the silence. From atop a building Bob and Lex watched as the mysterious D-Wheeler, claiming to be Yusei, had summoned the legendary Stardust Dragon to the field, and how the only defense that Niko had on his side of the field was his Crimson Angel - Agony with both zero attack and defense points."What is he going to do now?" Lex asked."I don't know." Bob said and watched the dragon flying next to the white D-Wheel of Yusei. "And Stardust's effect doesn't make things better!""What effect?" Lex looked at Bob."Stardust has the abillity to tribute himself to counter any destruction from card effects..." Bob looked at the both D-Wheelers as they passed the building. "Are you scared?" Yusei asked Niko. "Did the appearance of my dragon frighten you that much?""I'm more scared at the fact that you are doing this, if you really are that Yusei I'm thinking off!" Niko said. "Yusei would never threaten someone!""You have a lot of learn, Niko!" Yusei said and laughed. "Godwin made me see something when he defeated me... He promised me power!""Apparently he corrupted you!" Niko said. "The Yusei that tried to defeat Godwin was not like this... He would never seek power instead of helping people!""That was the old Yusei, Niko!" Yusei laughed again. "But let's stop the small talk, Stardust! Attack his Crimson Angel with Shooting Sonic!"Stardust opened up it's mouth and fired a beam against Agony, and the beam blasted right through it and hitted Niko's D-Wheel, but Agony wasn't destroyed."Why is it still there?" Yusei asked."Because of my Trap Card!" Niko said and activated his Trap. "Crimson Barrier! After this card is activated a Crimson Angel of my choice cannot be destroyed by battle, and since I only have Agony on my field he will be my choice!""But you still lose Life Points and Speed Counters!" Yusei laughed."Ugh!" Niko grunted as his D-Wheel slowed down and his Life Points was reduced by 2500."Your move!" Yusei shouted. "It will also be your last!" Niko: 1500 LP 3 SCYusei: 4000 LP 5 SC "I will make sure it isn't! Draw!" Niko looked at the card he had just drawn. "This will do for now! I change Agony to defense position and set a card face-down! Your turn!" Niko: 4 SCYusei: 6 SC "Kehehe..." Yusei giggeld and drew a card. "You better be working on a plan, because I will destroy you sooner or later! Since your Agony won't destroyed it's no use to attack, so it's your turn again!" Niko: 5 SCYusei: 7 SC "I will defeat you, wether you really is Yusei or not! Draw!" Niko drew his card and looked at it. "Looks like my plan has been completed, I will defeat your Dragon this turn! I summon Crimson Angel - The Victory!" (0/0)"So you mean that you will defeat me with a monster with zero attack points? Well that would be amusing!" Yusei laughed."You if someone should know that a monsters attack power isn't all!" Niko smiled. "Now I discard three Fairy monsters, that would be my whole hand, to increase my monsters attack to 3000!" (0-->3000)"What!? That makes him strong enough to defeat Stardust!" Yusei shouted."That's right! Victory! Attack Stardust with Shining Halberd!" Niko shouted and pointed at Stardust. But when the angel raised it's halberd and flew against Stardust a scarecrow appeared out of Yusei's face-down card. "Scrap-Iron Scarecrow!?""That's right, Niko, and it renders your attacks useless!" Yusei laughed again."I also has a Trap card in store!" Niko activated his face-down card. "Crimson Angel Storm!""What does that do?" Yusei asked."By removing from play 1 Crimson Angel from my Graveyard I can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field! And your Scrap-Iron Scarecrow is my target!"A storm began to blow around the two duelists and it targeted Yusei's trap card."Hehehe!" Yusei laughed again. "Don't you know about my dragon's effect? I activate Stardust Dragon's effect to tribute it to save my Trap! Victim Sanctuary!"Stardust Dragon turned into shining dust that blocked Niko's storm."That's rather stupid!" Niko smiled."What do you mean, if I didn't defend it you would just destroy my Stardust during your next turn with Victory anyway, this way I get to keep my dragon!" Yusei laughed."I'm not the one missing card effects here! I was well aware of your dragon's effect!" Niko smiled. "But if you've looked at Victory's effect you would have known that he was destroyed at the end phase anyway!""But I still prevented the destruction of my trap card, and my dragon is comming back during the end phase anyway!" Yusei said."He's comming back, yes, but not to your side of the field!" Niko smiled even wider. "I activate Agony's monster effect!""What is that!" Yusei shouted."By sending him to the graveyard, I get to special summon a Level 8 or lower monster from either players graveyard!""Yes!" Bob shouted. "He figured out how to counter Stardust Dragon!""So he will be able to defeat him?" Lex asked and looked at Bob."I don't know, Yusei still has his Scrap-Iron Scarecrow in play..." Bob kept watching the duel as Agony turned into black dust and infiltrated Yusei's graveyard, and brought out the white dragon to Niko's side of the field."The real Yusei wouldn't make such a foolish mistake!" Niko shouted. "I end my turn and my Victory goes to the grave!" His angel was destroyed, but he still had Yusei's Stardust Dragon on his side of the field. Niko: 6 SCYusei: 8 SC "You've stolen my dragon from me, but I can still win! Draw!" Yusei drew a card. "I will have to rely on my Scarecrow for now, your move!" Niko: 7 SCYusei: 9 SC "I will have to put all my hope on the next card I draw, I really hope that it's something that can save me! Draw!" Niko closed his eyes and held the card before them. He slowly opened them. "Great! I activate the Spell card Speed Spell - Last Hope!" He activated his Spell card and his D-Wheel rapidly lost all it's speed. "This card can only be activated when my Speed Counters is higher then six, and it instantly removes all of them, but it let's me draw 2 cards!" He moved his hand to the deck. I have to draw the exact right cards now, or else I won't be able to defeat him! He drew two cards and looked at them. A smile spread on his face. "I summon Bringer of Hope!" (500/500) The angel appeared and flew next to Stardust, and it raised it's hands and two other angels appeared next to it. "Say hello to my Hope Tokens! I then set a card face-down and end my turn!" Niko: 1 SCYusei: 9 SC "My turn then, I will end you this turn! Draw!" Yusei drew a card, but apparentky it didn't enjoy him that much. "Why don't I draw the right cards!? Defeating this punk should in fact be very easy for a master like me!""Just face it! You are not Yusei, he would never be that arrogant! And the reason you don't draw the right cards is that you don't have any heart in those cards, Yusei had that, and that's why he always drew the best cards at the right moments... Except for the last draw he ever made..." Niko looked down and a tear was rolling down his cheek. Suddenly he looked up. "End your turn already, you fake!""I was going to do that!" Yusei shouted. "Your turn!" Niko: 2 SCYusei: 10 SC "I will prove your not Yusei, and I will do it with my next card! Draw!" He drew his card and looked at it. "I was right! I tribute my Hope Tokens to Summon Crimson Angel - Divine!" (0/0) The angel appeared and pointed it's spear against Yusei. "Now I will synchro summon!" Bringer of Hope turned into three green rings that surrounded Divine and they both flew up to the sky."Here it comes!" Bob said and smiled. "Niko will summon his trumph card now!""But what about Yusei's Scarecrow?" Lex asked. "Won't it stop his attacks?""I'm sure Niko have it all figured out!" Bob said. Then he shouted: "You rock, Niko!"Niko looked at Bob at the roof and did a thumb up. Then he looked at Yusei again."The apocalypse is over! After the destruction that it brought the people of this world look up to you! Synchro Summon! The savior! Future's Hope!" (3000/3000) A long, white dragon with four wings appeared beside Stardust Dragon and spreaded it's wings and roared. "This guy will ensure my victory in this duel! Future's Hope! Attack him with Postapocalyptic Life!" The dragon opened it's mouth and blasted of a green energy wave at Yusei."Have you already forgotten about Scarecrow, Niko?" Yusei said and laughed."Of course not, activateing Future's Hope's effect!" Niko raised his ahnd in the air. "By sending a face-down card to my grave I can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card! And I wills end my face-down trap card to my graveyard!""What the...!?" Yusei was hit by the green energy wave and his life points rapidly fell down to thousand and he lost a total of three Speed Counters."Now I will finish this with your own monster! Stardust Dragon! Attack him directly! Shooting Sonic!" Niko pointed at Yusei and Stardust Dragon blasted of it's energy beam at Yusei who's life points was reduced to zero, but his D-Wheel was still racing next to Niko. Niko's dragons disappeared as he deactivated Speed World."And now... Tell us who you really are!" Niko shouted and pointed at Yusei.Yusei just looked down, and then suddenly turned to Niko, but now two glowing, red eyes could be seen through the black visor. His voice also sounded a lot more darker and evil now."I've already told you! I am Yusei Fudo!" Yusei said and actiavted the auto pilot of his D-Wheel and let go of the steering. He then, with some problems, stood on the seat and looked at Niko. "I will not accept defeat!""What the...?" Niko shouted as Yusei jumped on him and made Niko lost control of teh D-Wheel and crashed into the container that once contained Bob. They both flew of it and Niko landed on the ground and hurted his left arm badly. He looked around the dock and saw that Bob and Lex was comming against him, then it all turned dark... Made-up cards: Crimson BarrierContinuous Trap CardActivate only when a "Crimson Angel" monster you control is selected as an attack target. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the attacked monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Crimson Angel StormTrap CardRemove from play 1 "Crimson Angel" monster in your Graveyard. Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. Speed Spell - Last HopeSpell CardActivate only when you control a "Speed World" with more then 6 Speed Counters on it. Your Speed Counters become 0. Draw 2 cards. Tell me if I forgot something. Sorry for short chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 just like I expected...another awesome chapter...Now I see in my head how should Future's Hope...If you want I could search pics for you...I have over 4000 pics...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 Updated the first post with all chapters. Also I would like to request a Banner for thsi fan-fic, if anyone had the time. I'll pay you for it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 ABANDON AND DIE, SPAWN OF DARKNESS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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