CyberAngelGirl Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Kai Samaria walked through the streets of Domino City. He wasn't lucky enough to live in the Neo sector of the city, but managed to scrape a living in the Asteroid Sector. Below Neo and above Satellite, Asteroid was a filthy place. As no one important had lived there for several years the government put almost no money whatsoever into maintaining it. Not only dirty, the Asteroid area was a fairly corrupt place. If you couldn't afford to live in Neo Domino City but hadn't done anything to merit a one-way trip to the Satellite area then you were sent here. As a result, people were discontented and were paranoid that they had been treated unfairly. As a result people took every chance to get one over on someone else, legally or not. The security had their hands full! Kai came to a crossroads and turned left as always. 3 blocks along he made as if to keep walking but pushed through an indiscreet door set into the side of a disused sandwich bar. A flight of stairs led down. After they leveled out Kai stopped in front of a mirror and looked at the 16yr old gazing out at him. 5'11, with close cropped black hair, wearing black t-shirt and pants. He walked along the corridor and pushed through the door into the dojo. Dueling wasn't banned in Asteroid, but owning a D-Wheel was. And that was what he and the 3 other people in that room owned. Getting parts was difficult enough but getting the tools was. Kai closed the door behind him and turned to face his friends. Seb,16yrs old, 5'10 with long blond hair, a serious duelist when he wanted to be but quite a lot of the time he was joking around. His twin sister Sasha, 5'6 with waist length black hair. She preferred not to duel but if she had to then she was a force to be reckoned with. And finally Richie. He was the tallest and oldest, 19yrs old and 6'2 with short brown hair. Another powerful duelist to compliment the group. He'd obviously walked in on the end of a duel, judging from the smoke billowing around the room. From the looks of things, Sasha had just smoked her brother, and now stood there berating him. “If you'd just concentrated on the game rather than trying to fiddle with your style in the middle of a game then you might actually have a chance!” Catching sight of Kai, she straightened up and walked over to him with a scowl on her face. “And what time do you call this?” she asked. “Do you care?” Kai replied, pulling her into a hug. “Luckily for you, not really.” she said, her scowl being washed away by a smile. “But really, you haven't shown up for 4 days.” Richie jumped down from his perch on a box in the corner. “Yeah, were have you been?” “Sorry guys,” said Kai, “Security have been on my butt for a while. You know how they crack down on suspected D-Wheelers.” Seb and Sasha nodded whilst Kai walked over to a picture on the wall. Tilting it to one side he punched a code into the keypad behind it. A false wall slid back and he walked into it followed by the others. “So,” he said, addressing Seb, “any news?” Using a network of contacts built up by the group over the years, Seb was trying to sort them out with places in the Prince of Freedom in Neo Domino City. The winner of that and 3 friends would be granted places in the pro-League with an opportunity to enter the next annual Fortune cup to crown the new D-King. “Yep,” replied Seb, “and before I forget, this arrived for you this morning.” Kai took the slim package extended towards him and tore it open.” Suddenly a voice blared out from the street above them. “This is the Security...”Life points will be shown in italics and speed counters underlined. Created cards will be explained in detail at the end of each chapter. If they've already appeared then look back if you can't remember what they do. Whenever a monster is summoned, it will describe it's level, atk, def, and or not it is a tuner. Enjoy! The shout had come from an amp system above ground. Sector Security had found them! Before the echoes from the shout had died away, Kai had stuffed the package into his pocket and the 4 friends were sprinting along the tunnel. After 5 seconds of sprinting they came to another door, Kai rapidly punched another sequence into a keypad and they darted through. They entered the garage and rushed towards their respective Duel Runners. They were all almost identical (think Yusei) except for colour. Kai's was predominantly black, Sasha's purple, Seb's red and Richie's was orange. Before jumping onto her Runner, Sasha put her palm on a scanner, after scanning her prints, a large door at the other end creaked open. One after the other, the 4 friends were blasting out and onto the abandoned highway. In 2016 Domino City had been built over for Neo Domino. It had been the work of a week to connect the garage to the underground highway. For a brief second all was quiet, but then the Siren of the Security was heard blazing. Richie risked a glance over his shoulder. “Security Duel Runners, 4 of them!” Seb grinned and gunned his engine. “So that's one each?” “No,” cut in Kai, “We don't want to draw any more attention to ourselves. Split up and meet at my place.” No sooner said, then the plan was cut short. “Engaging Duel mode, Autopilot. Standby.” His Duel Runner's duel disk was swinging into position. The same was happening to the others. “Field Magic. Speed World. Forced Activation.” “What's going on?” shouted Sasha. “They've forced our D-Runners to duel.” said Kai, “Looks like one each after all. Split up, win as quickly as possible.” The others nodded. Seb and Sasha sped up the first left they came to, followed by two of the security. Richie took a right being followed by another. Then Kai was left all alone with the last. “You're not getting away that easy.” growled the Security. Kai screeched to a halt. The surprised Security pulling up alongside him. “How'd you find us?” asked Kai, keeping his face purposefully blank. “Child's play.” said the Security, “A tracking chip in your boot.” “So, shall we do this?” said Kai. “Let's Ride!” Kai – 4000 Security – 4000 “I'll take the first move,” spoke the Security, “Draw!” Kai – 1 Security – 1 “I place 1 card face-down, and summon Shining Angel (4/1400/1100) in attack mode. I end my turn.” “Draw.” Kai – 2 Security – 2 “I summon Momentum Synchron (Tuner/2/1000/1200) in attack mode.” “What a puny monster,” sneered the Security, “He can't hold a candle to my Angel.” “Maybe not now,” replied Kai, “But during the battle phase only, he get a 600 point boost. So he's got enough attack power to take out the Angel, attack!” “Thank you,” said the Security, “with Shining Angel gone I can bring out Silent Swordsman LV3 (3/1000/1000).” “Oh well, then I guess I'll set these three cards face down and call it a turn.” Kai – 4000 Security – 3800 “Call that a turn?” scoffed the Security, “This is a real turn. Draw.” Kai – 3 Security – 3 “I send Silent Swordsman LV3 to the grave so I can summon Silent Swordsman LV5 (5/2300/1000). Now, he'll take out that Momentum Synchron with Silent Slash!” Kai's D-Runner wobbled as he lost a speed counter. Kai - 2 “And since you lost a speed counter I can activate my trap, Rush Absorb. This gives me that counter. Then I play Speed Spell – Sonic Buster!” Kai gasped. “This takes half of my Swordsman's points and dishes then to you as damage.” Kai - 1 Kai winced as the blast him and he lost another speed counter, but he fought back. “I play my face down, Slip Stream!. When its my turn again, I get speed counters until I have the same as you.” “Oh well,” grinned the Security, “I end my turn.” Kai – 1450 Security – 3800 “About time,” grunted Kai, “I draw.” Kai – 5 Security – 5 “I play Speed Spell – Dash Decoy. This lets me special summon a Dash Token (1/0/0) to your side of the field. And by sending 5 cards from my deck to the grave, it's in attack mode. And by the way, Dash Decoy lets me draw a card. Then I play Junk Synchron (Tuner/3/1300/500).” The Security was unimpressed. “Another piece of trash? How do you hope to win?” “By using his ability, I can summon the Cyber Ouroboros (2/100/600) that Dash Decoy sent to my grave.” As the duel progressed, both duelists left the underground and headed into the disused factory area. Kai jolted as he realized that this way would take him into the Satellite area, but he was moving to quickly to turn off. And even if he slowed down, the security would pick him off. “Synchro Summon! I tune LV3 Junk Synchron to LV2 Cyber Ouroboros. Now I can summon Junk Warrior (5/2300/1000)!” Kai was getting close to the border, he had to pull this off quick if he wanted to stay in Asteroid. “Then I play a speed spell of my own. Speed Spell – Traitor Summon. I'll special summon Handcuffs Dragon (5/1800/1800) to your side of the field in defense mode.”I'll post more later, enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Pretty cool, I guess, keep it up 8). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Actually, you need to describe more stuffs, and also your dialogue sounds... clunky. It doesn't sound quite natural. That's what I perceived by skimming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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