Enrise Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 nice trophy lucifer how is 4 coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Eh, slight writers block, but I'm hanging. I can't have all the chapters be filler chapters, cause, I need some sort of action or other thing that relates to the story. I know that there will be a part where Rokujo meets Satan in person. But not soon. It will take ages before that will happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 BUMP.Need....moar....comments and....subscribers possibly X_x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 ughh somone else post. personally i likied you old name beter. if you need help just ask me id be glad to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 I just needed something fresh.But you can help by advertising for me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiley Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 I have read the first two chapters and.... LOVED IT its great some parts (especially the parts with Chrome) make me laugh a bit. It lacks punctuation in some bits but it has a mysterious edge with the pentagram that I love although to improve pic up a few books and see how they describe the things in the room and how they author and direct how the characters move; other then that nothing I think I will subscribe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Care to, show those punctuation mistakes?And added to subscribers.I think I'll be able to do Chapter 4 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiley Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Sure obviously I cant do all of them but I will show you a few (if there are a few) I spot when I skim over it.could only see oneEDIT: “What, are you following me?”or if you ment it to be what are you following me as one “What are you 'following me?” to give it a gap and flowI'm in the top set for everything 8-) I feel like such a geek xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 ^You mean nerd? Nerds are usually the ones that are skilled in a lot of educational things, whether Math, Enlgish, etc.And that's a good thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 I just needed something fresh.But you can help by advertising for me? yeah of course Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Good. Mind if you add it like mine is in my sig? Or just something flashy, that will get people's attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiley Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 [align=center]Yeah thats the one,:lol:But, but, but,I iz notbecause I watch sports and do boxing 8), and haz got magic drawing skillz liek.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 [align=center]Yeah thats the one' date=':lol:But, but, but,I iz notbecause I watch sports and do boxing 8), and haz got magic drawing skillz liek.[/align'] Meh, I do some sports also. I can also draw D=.Glad you read this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 ok will add i give u rep for u join forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 What Forum? Oh that forum.I been joined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiley Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 lol I like it so much that I think your going to like this.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-151456.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 lol I like it so much that I think your going to like this.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-151456.html Let me call a girl to eek for me.*Grabs a girl*Now."EEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Okay, go away.*Girl leaves*Dude. Awesome. Ima post in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiley Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 =D ty very much *about to read the new chapter* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 that card is very good awesome make an equip card for him or somethin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Everyone, due to parental annoyance, I may have to wait till Friday or a certain day where I am somewhere from home to these things. But I can guarantee that since the Chapter is on my computer, I will complete it before Friday, but it will be posted Friday.--On a side note, I do very well think that I have become a successful member, but since I have more responsibilities upon increase of Grade Level in High School, I may spend less time on here, but I will do my best to keep you all entertained with the following Fan Fic of my own imagination.Thank you,Leviathan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 yes i do think you are a very successful member here bont dont leave forever u is 2 awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 its friday? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Chapter 4 is up. Yes, I know that it is really shorter, but I do like how Rokujo handled the Hospital scene =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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