Nikkiboy029 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 [spoiler=Some Stuff] ok i drew the first one for a contest on DAand the second one was of this girl who is like really innocent and always worried all the timehow'd they come out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 arms a little rough and uneven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 arms a little rough and uneven. Ok when you say that do you mean the shading on the armOr the shape of the arms themselves(I'm assuming you mean the guy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The edges, well, outlines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The edges' date=' well, outlines.[/quote'] Oh okI see it now, wow I didn't notice thatThanks for the adviceI'll try to fix that later EDIT: anymore fixes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 You need to make his elbow, look more like an elbow. It just doesn't look right at the moment. Also, what DG said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 You need to make his elbow' date=' look more like an elbow. It just doesn't look right at the moment. Also, what DG said.[/size'] ok i edited it, and made the censor smaller so you could see the whole arm, does it look any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The outline still looks a bit, what's the word, Scratchy? Also, the hand needs to be made to look like fingers. Not like he's got a human glove on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 make his elbow at a more 90 degree angle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 It wouldn't really be 90 Degrees. You have no idea how large her breasts are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The outline still looks a bit' date=' what's the word, Scratchy? Also, the hand needs to be made to look like fingers. Not like he's got a human glove on.[/size'] alright thanks :)i think that if i edit it that much i would probably need to do the pose over againso for now i think thats as good as i can get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 These are pretty good in my opinion.1st pic: The colors for the ears are creative, but why does the guy's hair stick up so much? You shouldn't draw the collor bone extending all the way to her shoulders, just a little less though. I like the heart gem on the girl's forehead, and the goggles and glasses(why both?) on the guy. But 3 highlights in their eyes seem like a little much, maybe just 2? The guy's arm seems ok to me, I'm not sure it that's because you fixed it or what. Nice work on the shading, is the light coming from in front of them? 2nd pic: What's that puple thing behind her? I can't see her left shoulder, is that a result of the purple thing? 3 highlights and a gaping mouth work good for somebody that's worried all the time, and I like the bow in her hair =3. Her collar bone doesn't go out too far like in the first pic, that's good. Shading appears as if it's coming from the upper-right, if so, good job. Maybe add some teeth though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Read dates. LOCKED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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