sythcaris Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malcomtidus Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 There is a large amount of room for improvement with OCG (Original Card Grammar) and some pictures don't fit the card well. Make sure in the editor you use the proper naming technique, such as "Sheep Sage" instead of "sheep sage" because it is obvious. Capital typing means bigger capitals in Card Title. But I do like Zeysuba - The White Dawn picture. Overall I'll give ya a 6/10. Great job and improve it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Nice cards 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parkourmania Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 i cant see some of the cards effects but nice work anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viera~Fran Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Besides the grammar, I think the pictures are really good. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 yah the grammer needs some work, but otherwise they're ok 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cutipi97 Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 well i actually like the plot lines for these cards a lot. if your gunna go to all the work to create cards as decent as these, make sure you "perfectify" your grammar, punctuation, capitals, Etc. good job!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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