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hi my first fan fic ever (don't be mean)

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(thinking)

Character name-dialog

{my thinking}

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SREAM OR SHOUTING!

 

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Episode 1 : "Elemental Soul"

 

There had been legends of Mighty Warriors that had fased epic battles to protect what they love and belive,the continous battles betwen good and evil , but always the heart of corage , the iron will and the inner power to bring justice had defeated...but the darkness in all hearts have never banished totaly even in the heats of the so called Heros...

 

In a dark nigth with a scarlet moon ,that is reflected in a lake iin the midle of the jungle , only the ligth of a torch shines in the shadows of this wild place , moving fast in directon to the lake, iluminating a red Dresed and a barbarian Loking man.

???- Don't stop or everithing will be lost!

???< the voice of man>- I know, shut up.., I'll distract them, you must continue!!!!!!!!!!

???-No i can't leave you Sir. Wildheart.

Wildheart-I told you Don't call me like Sir., Just run, RUNNNNNNNNN OR I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

???-ok...(sorry sir. Wildheart)

A Grup of warriors- AAAAAAAA

Wildheart-Your opponent isME!

 

A tear cross her cheek while she washed her swordman fasing a swarm of enemies far and more far until she lose sight of the battle (im so egist i know that i must deliver this box (please survive my love...).

 

He was sorounded by hundreds of enemies, holding strongly his sword in the rigth hand and the Boomerang in the other, blood of the fallen foes cover the ground once and again in what felt like hours, until they stoped just like that {making a kind of batle arena}...

From the Crowd an black armored warrior with a black sword{Sephirot Music but with Darck blade inside of Sephirot}

???-So...you helped her ...after all, you TRAITOR!

Wildheart- You are wrong, you all desroyed everithing i followed and i wont let you continue whith that Dark Blade, CYCLONE ATTACK.

Dark Blade-Fusion Sword Marusame Blade!and the cyclone boomerang caused an explotion that deflected the cyclon rigth back to Wildheart who managed to catch the boomerang but recibing the impact and been throwed across the army .

Dark Blade-NO! I'll have the plesure of finish himDIE!.

Wildheart fel that his soul was leaving his body but he didn't want to surrender, he wanted to figth back(NO IT CAN"T BE LIKE THIS, I WANT TO SAVE EVERYONE!), then he felt a heart beating and a second one, a Power that like nothing that he ever felt before, He was in the Middle of a Huge room infront of a green shinig orb.

???- So you want to unlesh the power to save that what your soul seak, then i'll realise your true power, your Elemental Soul.

wildheart-(what?)

He was ack in the ground , everithing was slow, his body healed in a moment , Dark Blade reacted redy to kill Wildheart forever, but a green ligth born from Wildheart.

Wildheart-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

 

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Episode 2: "Heroes"

 

The first ligth waked Wildheart , he wached his sorroundings everithing .was destroyed , it looked like the botom of a crater(what hapened? that power is mine...Amelia).He tried to get up when he saw a group of extrange people, 5 in total, one had wings and a green falcon like outfit, one had a blue golen armored surrounded by "Thunder"{that's wildheart's oppinion}, a woman dresed in at tight red outfit with flames in her hands, an blue armored guy with orbs and Cape and a Stone Man.

???-So he is the one that unleshed that Elental Soul? Bubleman?

Bubleman- It seems so Avian(wath a way to unleash your powers ... interesting)

???- No doubt my armor sistems not lie...

Bubleman-You must be proud Sparkman.

Sparkman-(...bastard)

Avian-any way, and who are you?(to wild heart), taking it as an intend to surround him , he , well slashed, but his sword was stoped by the "stone man"{who have been throwed there by the red dresed woman} Wildheart landed preparing for the Counter Attack a ligthing that was thrown by spakman so Wildheart used his boomerang.

Wildheart-Cyclone Attack< the attacks clashed and the boomerang wining aming Sparkman but was stoped by the "Rock Man".>

Sparkman-Thanks Clayman

Wildheart jumped to catch the boomerang but Avian deflected it and throwing away most of WildHeart Weppons{well all exept his sword}

WildHeart-Bastard!

???-So you like explotions Swordboy, BURST RETURN!!!

???-ups...

Avian-Maybe you over done it...Burstinatrix

Burstinatrix-sorry...anyway. Who is he!?

 

Everithing turned Dark, and he was again in that room but now the orb was red and the mistical voice was femenine.

???- A new chalenge is in your way alongside new alies who you will become one with now take the second power of your soul warrior.

He was in the midle of a metal room surrounded by the extrange people , he tried to move,but he was tied with metalic chains.

Wildheart-Who are you?.

Avian- The Elemental Heroes

Wildheart- Then Heroes of Darkness try toof The Wildheart of Stalion{Wildheart home town}

Sparkman- Stop "Last Blade" by Comand of Tirial!

Wildheart-Your Mayesty?(what's happening)

Sparkman-Not quite,Im one of the Elemntel Heros, Sir. Wildheart, welcome to the "future".

 

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i acept coments but insults {well i'll use my Insult Mirrorforce and my insult Cylinder"

well i hope to post Episode 3:"Legends" the next monday or tuesdey after that...}

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I know it's a day later but from today it will be Elemental hero Chronicles Tuesday(...)

enjoy, replay and give me reputation(bad joke), enjoy!

 

Episode 3- "Legends"

Wildheart -(your majesty?)

Everybody was confused an silent.

Sparkman - Everybody please, leave me alone with Sir. Wildheart. , please.

Wildheart-Your highness? Prince Rilian?

Sparkman- No, but he is one of my ancestors.

Wildheart - Your highness , What this Last Blade can do for you?

Sparkman - For starters call me Sparkman.

Wildheart- Ok, Lord Sparkman.

Sparkman- Just Sparkman(…), Second you no longer have to have any loyalty to me or my family.

Wildheart-(???)

Sparkman -As…As there is no longer kingdom to protect anymore…

Wildheart – What! What do you mean with that? “Welcome to the future”? And that you are Rilian’s Descendent?

Sparkman - It had been 5000 years…According to the legend.

Wildheart-(?!)

Sparkman – 5000 years ago after Sir. Wildheart caused the great pulse that destroyed Dark Blade and his army . The Messenger of the Heart was slain by a mysterious warrior of darkness…Then after the destruction of the Heart. The evil army of the “Dark Fire” guided by the “Forbidden One” charged without mercy against the Antran Kingdom, however thanks to the destruction of Dark Blade’s Forces a group of survivor ,including Prince Rilian pregnant wife, managed to escape from destruction and in that moment of Darkness a light shined in the darkness a powerful group of magic warriors who controlled the elements and called themselves “Elemental Heroes” who defeated the “Dark Fire” and sealed the darkness away but same as the dark forces they banished without trace…The survivors returned to the kingdom but it was truly destroyed , just Rilian’s wife family stayed so the kingdom didn’t reborn and they became the only inhabitants of the now Antran Island…That’s the legend.

>

Wildheart – ( Nooooo!!!!!!!!!, Amelia…Rilian…Antran…Brother….i fail you all…)

Sparkman - Bandage that

Sparkman – So Wildheart?

Wildheart – just call me Wildheart.

Sparkman –(…) Ok Wildheart. What are you going to…oh right you must be hungry (after 5000 years)

Wildheart – No I’m fine what’s your question.

Sparkman – Follow me < adjusting his helmet on and opening the door> .

Wildheart – I didn’t now the was a way to make metal Flying ships. What magic it is?.

Sparkman- This “ship” is flying hanks to the most advanced Space Aeronautics ( My own invention{full pride}).

Wildheart – A machine? (…!)

Sparkman –Yes(…).

Burstinatrix – Welcome to the pizza hour ! Today we have the “Burstinatrix Pizza”.{Yes, both Bubleman and Burstinatrix were spying the “meeting”{…} and in the moment the first of Wildheart stomach sounds appeared , she ran to synthesize a Pizza {She had, well…a crazy personality}}

Sparkman - (Synthesized pizza…smiling…What you did this time?!)Did you repaired the Radioactivity scanners as I asked you?

Burstinatrix – Of course! Don’t doubt it for a second (I must repair them later without being noticed{inner anime drop}.

Sparkman – Right…(…)

Burstinatrix – Right. .

Wildheart - (Incredible{first pizza ever})It’s delicious Lady Burstinatrix.

Burstinatrix – Thanks…(He is kinda…)shutting down the speakers>.

Burstinatrix – I got to go!.

Wildheart - Thanks Lady Burstinatrix.

Sparkman - …(…)

Wildheart – So what was your question? Lor…Sparkman.

Sparkman – Before as you should noticed we name ourselves with the name of the Legendary “Elemental Heroes” of the great war of Antran.

Wildheart – Yes. Why?

Sparkman - Because we all share the power of the “Elemental Souls”.

Wildheart – I heard Avian saying something about it before, what it’s an Elemental Soul?

Sparkman – {Huge monologue alert}An Elemental Soul is the maximum manifestation of the inner power of each soul relation to the Cosmos, shortly an Elemental Soul is a soul that have the potential to control the energy of the cosmos and an Elemental hero is the one that managed to unleash his own sealed potential however just few souls have a Elemental Soul Potential, that we can’t force to open, and just fewer of them Unleash it.When I unleashed my Elemental Soul it was totally uncontrolled, my house was destroyed by a lighting storm caused by myself, 15 people died, including my mother, her blood was on my hands and I couldn’t end my own life so I decided that I must control my power and I traveled the world in a trip that lead me to the “Elemental Temple”, a place were I was instructed not just in how to control my powers, I learn everything about them, history, mythologies , sciences, magic, arts and the honor of the warrior, along side another boy with similar talents, Anthony, aka. Bubleman so we joined forces and organized a company from my family, my money, “E.H. Detectives”, just a covered up to our Rocky heroics, the time passed and I we were on a huge “building on fire” situation it seemed lost when a winged adolescent came to help us, Avian, and we created a real Tempest to save the situation, and we united, as “Tempest” we fought many foes but none of them like the “Hell Ground Gang”, who almost destroyed us but in the moment of true a member of them, Burstinatrix, saved us all ,after that we returned to the Elemental Temple where we were Re-Trained, and we reborn as the brand new Elemental Heroes, and we decided to “Not just not to harm the innocent, not just to made justice, we swear that even if it was hard , deadly even if it cost our lives, with our mistakes and pasts, we’ll fight to protect those who need us and what we believe, because we are the Elemental heroes”. So would you join us Wildheart?

Wildheart – I..

Burstinatrix – Have to go, Wildheart ..

Sparkman – Are you coming?

Wildheart – I failed to protect Rilian and the Heart (Amelia, the kingdom….)...

Sparkman – But thanks to you hundreds made it alive, we are here thanks to that and never let a mistake stop you from saving that in what you believe …So in what you believe in ?Wildheart...

Wildheart-…(Flash back finish> )

??? – I am the first one of an army! you are domed human kind!.

Burstinatrix – Stop it “Kempashi”!.

Avian – It’s over , “Kempashi ”!

Kempashi ->It’s just getting fun!Sleeping already? jajaja!, Lets play Burstinatrix, shall we! Ja ja ja ja! Lests make some devastation! Ja ja ja ja!!!!!

 

Next episode : Episode 4 –“Heroism”

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o...kay

lets get started

 

Episode 4 : "Heroism"

 

Kempashi- jajaja!, Die and cover mi claws with blood,

jajaja!

Burstinatrix- YOU GOT IT BIG BOY!Fire Furry

Him throwing Hundreds of litle fire Dagers and then she delivered a great fire punch on on of the wodden

parts throwing kempashi back>Combo!{...}(it finish?, ok now to take care of Avia...)

Kempashi raised>

It was fun, but DIE!

>YOU! leat's play "HERO"!

Sparkman- Spark Blast!

blocking the attack and crashing sparkman agains a near were Avian was,Sparkman tried to get up but he

was grapeled by Kempashi's tentacles>

Kempashi -I'll crush youuuuuuuuuu jajaja.

Wildheart-(What do i belive in?...I am a Last Blade!)

faling>Wild Chargeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! managed to fall on his foot> )

Sparkman-(thanks...)What!

forming a robot warrior equiped with Large worning stars>.

Kempashi-I'm the fist one and the

last you will EVER SEEEEE!

Wildheart-Sparkman! Ligthing Blade!!!

was on slow motion for Wildheart as the Morning star attack Approched>.

Burstinatrix and Avian- I Don't thik sooo!!!

a green and grey blast while Burstinatrix turned into a red fire blast>that merged and hitted

Kempashi and throwing him some meters back{Camara returns to normal speed}

and the blast was impulsed to the top of a near building , then the energy disapeared and the was a big Green

One winged guy with read Dragon Head as rigth arm and a Dragon tail>.

???-That got to hurt.

Kempashi- Who are you???>

Wingman-I'm the Wind of Flames, the razor wind,

a pole, that was in the roof of a building(inner anime drop for me)}> the wing of fire that is goiing to throw

you apart,Here comes Flame Wingman!!!

Throwing kempashi back and then unlsing a fire blast from the dragon Head that throwed Kempashi

damaged, melted in some parts> to the looby of the "Hiron" as Wingman landed near Wildheart>.

Wildheart-(...!).

Woman-Mi children!Help! My ChildreN ARE STILL INSiDE!

Kempashi-I'm just the first a war but pleaseeee BLOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!

Wildheart-

woman and other pople out of there, sparkman was doing the same, then Wildheart earing sence detected

the the screming of two small children,Then he Jumped, then he impulsed himself with the border of a window and

falling boulder after that, and then he unleshed a rotating attack that pirced him in the bulding, then was next of

a bed that was being used as hiding by a young boy and her litle sister

from"Full Metal Alchimist"{during her visit to hugges house}>>.

Boy-Who are you?!

Wildheart-An Elemental Hero, i'm her to help

Building start falling to the side wildheart came from, so he start runing breaking throught the door with

his rigth shoulder with out stoping, then he keep run at higth speed and

jumped throwgth a window , landing in the wall

and impulsing from it,then he landed next to a group of people>(What?)

a familiar presence as a group of scared people came out from the darknes,

evil loking,red shining eyes and even semi ddemon claws} was next to him and then banished>then from the sky, a

huge"Clayman" with blue parts landed and stoped the bilding fall.

???-Sparkman! Flare Wingman!

Sparkman-Ok Mudballman!

Mudballman-Sparkman!stoped it with a migthy energy

blast>Wingman!

Wingman-I know...(you don't lead, you mud{...?})

melting parts of the building>

bleach when the soul leaves the body, but the fusion disapear and leaves the Elemntal Heroes behind instead ,then

Bubbleman Drawed one capsule from his bealt that beacame the"Buble Blaster" and he shoted it at maximum power

to the building, cooling it, then flame wingman catche Bubleman and clayman>(jajaja you nead me "leaders"jajaja

{...})

Wildheart-(what just happened? Did they Mealted together?{he is still from 5000 years back})

Girl-What is your name sir?

Wildheart-(...Who was tht guy?did he had an elemental soul?)

Girl-what is your name sir?

Wildheart-I am...The Elemental Hero : Wildheart

Sparkman- so?

Wildheart- yes , I'll join

throwed the others next>>.

Wingman- Welcome to the team! Finaly someone that i can figth medieval Stile

had an anime drop>.

Bubbleman-I suppose is time to leave,Sparkman(ok my gosh ,he is realy beated up, poor man, he nead medical atention).

Sparkman-(...bastard)Activating Tractor Bean on Elemental Soul Signatues, code 010411, Done...{...}

 

Next Episode : "Fusions,Dreams and Antran?"

 

i realy hope you all enjoyed...see you later.

Also read"the Darkness of Duelins" on the Fan Fic Section

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Sorry by the delay, but yesterday was hard any way my new deck is compleat because of yesterday.

Anyway enjoy and i would like your opinion.

 

Episode : "Fusions,Dreams and Antran?"

 

Wildheart-(...?,wow, we are back at the ship?...)

Sparkman,Clayman , and Flame Wingman>

Bubbleman- Clayman!i need help with the cabin(Poor Sparkman he realy need medical

atention and Wingman always ignores me) .

Wingman- Go to your coputer Bubble Nerd! and hurry up Silent spy from the Elemental temple

a furious face>

Wildheart-...

Sparkman-I'd said you to stop it alredy, clayman had been an important member of the team since the day we

compleated or training at the temple also..

Wingman-Yeah we were forced to accept him by "The Elder"... that speakless crep me out!

Sparkman-Give it up alredy you know that because of his clay body he can't produce oral sounds...

Wingman-ok...(...)

Wildheart-Any way...what...I have some questions...

Sparkman-(...)ok shot.

Wildheart- Three questions: What happened how...well..what happened to Burstinatrix and Avian, do they just merged?

Sparkman- ( )Well it's that

Wingman- I can explain that if you that, if you want

Sparkman- ok(thanks)(...)

Wingman-So you want to now aboth the "Elemental Fusion"?

wildheart-"Elemental Fusion", so that was a fusion(Fusion : Merging){first time he heard the word} and what hapened

to them???

Wingman- well as you should alredy know those wo Ulesh their

Elemental Soul , the Elemental Heros, had "super powers"like elemental manipulation or super stenght, that are

created by their ele mental souls, but wath you didn't know is that the same elemental soul have a frequense that

conect their soul with the enviorement, that is wath creates the super powers.

Wildheart-(...)

Wingman- If two or more of these frequense synchronize those Elemental souls, then their bowners would be able of

merging, creatic a new bieng.

Wildheart-So you are Burstinatrix and Avian?

Wingman-Naaa...Even if i was created by their fusion, im no one of them, i'm a brand new hero!. However they'll

remember wathever i done, same as i now wathever i done, well i can't now their thoughts, but i can know wath

they fell(!), hey between us there's anithing between you and "these girl"???

Wilddheart-(...)...Then wath happen to them while they are you?

Wingman-They are sleeping in my Elemental Soul, same i'm on them since

they first fused. Any more questions?

Wildheart-(So the Fusion can go and break like when Bubbleman and Clayman) There are another Elemental Heroes?

Wingman-Why?

Wildheart-Because there was a misterious guy manipulating shadows , it was stange, it was like being near an

"elemental Soul"...

Wildheart-Yeah there are there are other heroes that haven't united tto our litle "squadron", and i supose that

guy was NecroShadow, he is an "Solo" Hero, also there are Ocean that is living in Atlantis, Woodsman is guarding

"Dark Jungle" , Heat who is protecting the Elemental Temple and

a sad voice> and Blagdeedge that is half dead by now...

Wildheart-...Sorry

Wingman-Da.Don't worry aboth it! another question?

Wildheart- If the batle finishe why are you still fused?{Inocent question}

Wingman-(Why everybody like them beter?!?!?!)see you later

see you around! into Avian and Burstinatrix>.

Burtinatrix-Welcome to the team swordsboy!

Wildheart-...(...)

Avian- Burstinatrix as we won't arive to the base until morning...i supose hat it'll be beter

if to take a rest...

Burstinatrix-(...)kay...Follow me swordsboy i'll guide you to Resting room

pasing througth halways and halways{is a hige ship}until they arived to the "Resting Room"

Was like a Exequiutive Section of a plane> and as soon as Wildheart seated he felt sleep.>

Wildheart-(

Everithing that Happened in the Last day , Dark Blade , Amelia , Rilian , his litle Brother, Tha Elemental Heroes,

the batles, the children pased infront of him, but sundly he was in the midle of the crater sorounden by green

flames, he saw himself knoked out, he tried to mmove but he was just a presence with out body, then something

something emerged from his body, it was like a shadow of himsels sorrounded by blake fire, it turned into a

demoniac version of himself.

???- Finaly!!!Now you are needed no more

Wildheart body was no more> Now is time to fulifie my master's desire...

until they arived to the boat where Amelia was crying, then the deon turned himself

into Wildheart.

Amelia- My..I was...i suposed the...now im just happy

Staved her...Why? my love...

???-Nothing personal is just that i don't love you

box as she grapeled hisleg>So you don't learn.

Amelia-why?

her on his arms>don't touch me i hate you!

Amelias blood>

Wildheart-(!!!)no...NOOOOO!!!

 

Then he felt somethin burning on his fase that woked him up> )What!

shaped burnon his fore head>.

Burtinatrix-Good morning sleepy head and welcome to Antran Island.the

"Hero City"!

 

Next Episode- "The Last Blades"

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Episode 6 - "The Last Blades"

 

The Delta Wing arived to Antran Island, a tropical island full of ruins expt for a Group Of higth teck Skigrepers that were on the midle of the city, "The Hero City"(Main Quartel of the Elemental Heroes)

Avian in the Speakers- Everyone prepare for landing on the Trilian Tower(main building of the complex) with moved down to the undergrownd{realy fast})

Avian - ...Burstinatrix give wildheart a Tour and give him the keys to the 11th floor, Bubleman i want checking for all the sistems

Bubbleman- Okay Avian, Clayman it would be posible to you to inform the "elder" about yesterday events(Sparkman...), Sparkman i recomend you to asist to the Medical room.

Sparkman-(...bastard!)I'm fine...and you?

Bubbleman-That's great, and i'm fine i wasn't trashed by an Automaton

Avian-(...) but then the cahrge was stoped as avian grapeled Sparkman change of palns Burstinatix i...(!){Wildheart and Bursttinatrix Leaved the place before all the rack happened}

ok i take you to the Medical Room Maximus...

Sparkman-YOU KNOW THAT!that that's not may name anymore Alphonce...

Avian-Ok Sparkman

Sparkman-Thank's Avian...

 

Meanwhile in other place Burstinatrix and Wildheart were on the midle of the Tour.

Burstinatrix-An that's why beaf burger is called Hamburger, Any other questions?

Wildheart- Yeah...what was that thing Kempashi...was a machine?

Bursinatrix-yes it was, he was some kind of robot an automaton

Wildheart-How the ship fly?

Burstinatrix-...(Why? god why?) Lets leave the questions for a while...ok?...

Wildheart- As you wish my Lady.

Busrtinatrix- follow me Computer to the Eleven floor!

Computer-Correct, moving to the eleven floorFloor reached, key neaded.

Burstinatrix= SwordBoy you must place your rigth hand on the blue monitor

Wildheart-Ok

Burstinatrix-Computer alo asign his a 2 Level code

Computer-Code B015 Granted

Burstinatrix- Welcome Home...Now these is your room >Now these computer respond to voice ask him whatever you want Now wait me here r i'll kick you as

Wildheart- Computer? What are you and what is your name?

Hologram->Im a Blue phonetix shaped hologram assistent but i have no name.

Wildheart- From now on your name is Falcon...

Falcon-Falcon acepted...any questions?

Wildheart-I...what happened to the temple?

Falcon- Temple sir?

Wildheart- The Last Blades Temple!

Falcon - Is still there on the nothen sea border.

Wildhear-thankyou...http://gallery.herberthouse.org/albums/album11/RCC_Metropolitan_Cathedral_of_Christ_the_King_Liverpool_Church_finished.jpg but ten times biger and the walls were filled by "Elian" runes and it was realy trashed, but still standing}

Wildheart-Is my fault if i were there

and drawed his sword as a figure was emerging from the Smoke>

 

Next episode - "Secrets"

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