/성成현賢/.led Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Ehhh... I see 4 light sourcesDuplicated render in the left is failRender looks oversharpenedMessyBG too brightDepth pl0xYall need more flowCenter focal in this case = noBad CompoThe right arm could be possible focal so smudge or blend it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I like the 1st best =D I'm telling you guys right now, I'm going to school today, so I'll be less active. I hope this new school doesn't suck >> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 My last one for a long time which has 2 renders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I like the 1st best =D I'm telling you guys right now' date=' I'm going to school today, so I'll be less active. I hope this new school doesn't suck >>[/quote']My school starts in a week T-T Haruki your definatly improving but try sticking with one focal. I've got 2 versions of thisa one. Really just messing arounds with new C4D's. CnC and which is better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I like the 1st best =D I'm telling you guys right now' date=' I'm going to school today, so I'll be less active. I hope this new school doesn't suck >>[/quote']My school starts in a week T-T Haruki your definatly improving but try sticking with one focal. I've got 2 versions of thisa one. Really just messing arounds with new C4D's. CnC and which is better? Hikari-Chan!!!I love the 2nd oneNow I need to find 02 Hikari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 If you need a render of 02 Kari I've got it. ;) I was going to add a campfire thingy to the first but nothing turned out right. =P So for now I'm going with the second one too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I've got 2 versions of thisa one. Really just messing arounds with new C4D's. CnC and which is better? V2Got a good idea with the effect in between themI'd say change the background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Meh, I like the BG. I wanted a nighttime one and this is the best I could fine. Got a good site for BGs? But thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 gettin a hang o' this nowV1V2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 No depth, but I like the reflection off the BG. *cause the BG looks like glass*Although I'd lower the opacity on the shadow a little. Its V1 from me. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 thanks I worked on it a bit and got this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Ehhh... I see 4 light sources The thing here is' date=' I didn't add a Lightsource xD[/b']Duplicated render in the left is failRender looks oversharpened It's fine, it added depthMessy Hence the title "Chad is Messy"I know and don't need to know again"BG too bright Depth pl0x Look again, its there, hence, the bg is blurred and the bit in front Yall need more flow I think its fine, its quite easy to see which way its going and allCenter focal in this case = no Check proportions, its not centeredBad Compo Can you explain Compo, I keep forgetting what it is xDThe right arm could be possible focal so smudge or blend it Mmmkay Of course it wasn't my best, and of course I already knew about half of what you said. I'll remove the damn face later, too lazy now xD I'm still looking at tutorials and PSD's and learning.I'll get another up in no time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 thanks I worked on it a bit and got this If going for a mirror:There are far too many reflected light areas to match the lighting on the render or the direction of that same lightingReflected background has an orange sky (from what very little I can tell) but that is not represented in the lighting or coloringHow come the reflection is exactly the same as the render it's reflecting? We even see parts that are not facing the mirror being reflectedThe border is very unnecessary and doesn't look good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 LZ I love you sig like always =D Haruki, I love the mirror thing =D My first day sucked so bad >> I hate school >< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I'm so sad... My PS broke and I have to get a new laptop/// so no GFX atm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shendelzare Silkwood Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I'm so sad... My PS broke and I have to get a new laptop/// so no GFX atm You want the PS again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 You mean the PS that I gave you? lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shendelzare Silkwood Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Nope, the PS I gave him before XD the CS3 one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 What happened to the one I gave you D: ;D So many PS' given out 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Can I still be in this club if I dont do sigs anymore but do animations? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 [align=center]'Bout time I joined this. xD Name: SnitchNickname: SnitchColor of name tag: WhiteProgram(s) Used: Used to use Gimp, now use PS (around a month now).GFX Examples(At least 3): [Latest + Sig][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 You mean the PS that I gave you? lol. Nope' date=' the PS I gave him before XD the CS3 one[/quote'] What happened to the one I gave you D: ;D So many PS' given out 0.o lol @ JG Torrent = Virus @ Carly Got deleated during reboot @ Yondaime Remember, missing pieces @ Haris Virus Man lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Snitch! Bout time you got here.You mean the PS that I gave you? lol. Nope' date=' the PS I gave him before XD the CS3 one[/quote'] What happened to the one I gave you D: ;D So many PS' given out 0.o lol @ JG Torrent = Virus @ Carly Got deleated during reboot @ Yondaime Remember' date=' missing pieces @ Haris Virus Man lol[/quote']You want mine? No Torrent, Portable, CS4, and Hancock Edition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Snitch! Bout time you got here.You mean the PS that I gave you? lol. Nope' date=' the PS I gave him before XD the CS3 one[/quote'] What happened to the one I gave you D: ;D So many PS' given out 0.o lol @ JG Torrent = Virus @ Carly Got deleated during reboot @ Yondaime Remember' date=' missing pieces @ Haris Virus Man lol[/quote']You want mine? No Torrent, Portable, CS4, and Hancock Edition. That's mine =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Snitch! Bout time you got here.You mean the PS that I gave you? lol. Nope' date=' the PS I gave him before XD the CS3 one[/quote'] What happened to the one I gave you D: ;D So many PS' given out 0.o lol @ JG Torrent = Virus @ Carly Got deleated during reboot @ Yondaime Remember' date=' missing pieces @ Haris Virus Man lol[/quote']You want mine? No Torrent, Portable, CS4, and Hancock Edition. That's mine =3 Lies! I had got it from somewhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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