daxinator Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 Episode 1:Ivan's Journey Begins! Ivan:"It's a bright shiny day".*yawning*Ivan's Mom:"Honey are you up"Ivan:"Yeah mom I'm awake."As he walk out his bedroom he says "What for breakfast mom".*phone rings*Ivan:"Hello who is it."Prof.Z:"It's me Professor Z remember"Ivan:"No its just someone making a prank"*he hangs up**phone rings again*"What is wrong with you"Prof.Z:"It's your big day".Ivan:"I don't have a big day"Prof.Z:"Of course you do you just turn 10"Ivan:"Ooooooooohhhhhhh Ok!He runs out of his house and he sees his friends shouting "YOU ROCK!"Ivan:"yeah I guess so"he runs in the Prof.Z's lab.Prof.Z:"There you are here choose one of these starters".Ivan:Let's see I'll take the the fire one what's its name."Prof.Z:"that one is Vipyre"Ivan:"I'll take the snake""Ok I guess this is mine now"Prof.Z:"Would like to name it"Ivan:"Ummmm... no"Prof.Z:"Very well then here's a poke'dex and five pokeballs~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Poke'Ball-Has a normal rate of catching a weak pokemonWarning:Works sometimes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Ivan:"that means it explodes"*All shocked*Prof.Z:*gasp*"No".Prof.Z:"It catches pokemon you twit".Prof.Z:"Now scurry on remember your journey begins now!"-----------------------------------------------------------Plz rate & comment if you have any question or suggestion Plz PM me! P.S. I'll post episodes every day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 Very short and did you make those sprites? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 No I didn't but I asked premission to use them on this site why?Also its my first episode I don't know why I made it short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 Well, the sprites were perfect. and for 1st try it is pretty good. Just try to make them longer 8/10 just for being short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 ok thanxnext episode:Out of Ferien TownSneak Preview:"What is that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 Alright. And another tip from a fan-fic maniac. Never post MANY episodes in a row. Always wait for a comment. And always write them on MS word at first then check the spelling errors and then post it here. Hope i helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Episode 2: Out of Ferien TownIvan:"Ok now that I'm leaving the gate of Ferien Town let's start here"Ivan's Mom:"Ivan you forgot your backpack"Ivan:"Thanx mom".Ivan:"Ok out comes the poke'dex"Ivan:"Come out Vipyre".As it appears out of the Poke'BallDexter: "When this pokemon gets mad it would start biting anything"Ivan:"Ok that I don't want to do".Ivan:"Ok let's go".Ivan:"What is that".Wild Voltcan Appears!Lv.5Ivan:"I wonder what is its name"Ivan takes out of his pocket the poke'dex and points at itDexter:"It is said that a Zapodos left it because it did not look like its mother."Ivan:"That was beautiful"Ivan starts to cry.Ivan:"Go Vipyre. Use tackle now."It was raging towards wild Voltcan and tackled it. Voltcan used Thundershock and shocked Vipyre.Vipyre got mad and it ended the battle by biting.Ivan:"Go Pokeball"Shake,Shake,Ping! Wild Voltcan was caught!Ivan:"I caught a Voltcan"Ivan:"I'm going back to Ferien Town"As he finally arrives to Ferien Town he goes to visit Prof.Z he ran inside the lab and saw Prof. Z excited.Ivan:"Look what I caught Prof.Z I caught a Voltcan."Prof.Z:"Very impressive that pokemon will very much help you against the first Gym Leader".Ivan:"You mean my dad"Prof.Z:"Your dad is Gym Leader Matt"Ivan:"Yup"!Prof.Z:"Well anyway good luck also train well."As Ivan left the lab quickly he encountered a Silkworm.Ivan:"Wow I can't believe that's a Silkworm"As close he got to take out his Poke'Dex he heard something coming down at him.Valicant:SCCCRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!Ivan:"What the"!As the wild Valicant swooped down and grabbed the wild Silkworm it left.Ivan:*gasp*"All man"!Ivan:"Idiot me I could of threw the Poke'Ball".Ivan:"I feel sorry for that Silkworm."Ivan:"OH WELL!"Officer Jenny:"Hey you do you want a ride to Case Town".Ivan:"No".Officer Jenny:"What's wrong"Ivan:"I could of caught my 3rd pokemon."Officer Jenny:"Valicant"Ivan:"Yup"!Office Jenny:"Here you could mine".Ivan:"No Thanks"Officer Jenny:"Well do you still want that ride to Case Town you could sleep in the Pokemon Center there".Ivan:"Thank You!" To Be Coutinued! Next Episode:"Arriving Case Town"Sneak Preview:"Were here!"Plz rate and Vote if you have any questions or suggestion Plz Contact me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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