celtic 15 Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 im new and these are the first cards ive made. its not the full set yet but please rate them http://i18.tinypic.com/7x9tgmd.jpg http://i6.tinypic.com/8a4jt6b.jpg http://i1.tinypic.com/878o8c1.jpg http://i8.tinypic.com/6kihrmp.jpg http://i19.tinypic.com/6xt3frr.jpg http://i2.tinypic.com/8ekbjnq.jpg http://i16.tinypic.com/81zoe4p.jpg http://i7.tinypic.com/89q1do3.jpg also please give me some tips aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saboooom Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 I give them 6/10. The OCG and pics could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unskilled Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Ideas are fine, but the pictures need improvement. 5/10 Spelling or typing error on tuan. its "opponent" not "apponent" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Wow, read the first one and decided to stop, just because I can't handle all the mistakes...mainly in capitalzation. =.= as Unskilled pointed out, its "opponent", and you need to capitalize every sentence...Plus "Life Points" and "Standby Phase" and "Summoned" oh, and "Shogon Warriors" also.speaking of which, did you mean "Shogun" as in Feudal Japanese warlords?And you need to put a period after the last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Huge spelling, OCG, and capitalization problems. And don't use the "im new" excuss unless you're new to Yugioh. If you are new to Yugioh, I apologize (and you can disregard the following), but if you're using it because you're new to the forum, then I don't want to hear it. The fact you're saying "im new", to me means, "im new 2 teh fourm so if my careds r bad its cuz im new". That doesn't mean anything. When I was new to the forum, I (and others) knew how to properly word effects (for the most part :P). Again, if you said "im new" because you're new to Yugioh, you can ignore all of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 I give them 6/10. The OCG and pics could be better.7/10 but he does have a point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qwerty3487 Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 do not paste the same topic twice -50/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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