Yu-Gi-Oh The Dark lords return Chapter 2 nearly complete please review!!

[Bassa]

Hi there!! I'm bassa and i'm a fanatic about Yu-gi-oh! I hve decided to write a story about Borvon.

 

 

The Dark Lords are rising again and Gronus has decided to hold a Yu-Gi-Oh tournement to decide which of the best duelists should rise and defeat the evil that has spread the land. Borvan is one of the duelists invited to this such tournament...

 

 

 

[spoiler=prologue]The wind howled against the rooftops as Borova strolled down the allyway. He walked slowly staring...glaring, passes by looking at him in a way of hatred. He stopped. He stood silently in the middle of the road,thinking about the invitation. He had been invited to the biggest Yu-Gi-Oh tournament of the year...But he had stopped playing three years ago since the terrible war of the gods. he thought for ten minutes and then turned round, heading home...he had some packing to do...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1 Return of an Old Friend]The sun rose from behind the treetops as Borova stepped out into the crowded streets. Duelists from all over the world had come to play, or witness this huge event. He pushed himself to the front of the crowd to see what everyone was looking at. And there, stood in the middle of the road were Granold and Borovas best friend Dan. It looked as if they were having a duel...

 

(dan had a face down trap with no monsters and Granold had three face downs and Red Dragon Archfiend, a huge dragon with daggers for claws)

 

Granold: And now Red Dragon Archfiend attack Dan directly.

 

(The fiend let out a bright ball of flame and Dan's life points went down to zero.)

 

"You are no match for me, Dan. This tournaments mine and these people know it. Now, hand over those nice cards of yours..."

 

"Stop," yelled Borova over all the commotion, "you can't just take my friends cards like that. If you want them, you'll have to duel me first."

Borova pulled his duel disk from his bag and inserted his deck.

"Let the duel begin!"

 

Borova: "I draw. First I'll Summon Trap Beast X: Lord of spying." (ATK 1500 DEF 500).

 

(A Bright red eye appeared on the field)

 

"I'll throw down a face down and its your move..."

 

Granold: "Weak start there...Mmm...I draw and summon Junk Warrior in attack mode." (ATK 900 DEF 500)

 

(A large warrior made of junk and carrying a gun appeared on the field)

 

"Next i activate its effect on the turn that it is summoned its attack doubles (ATK 1800 DEF 500). Now i attack your puny little Trap Beast X..."

 

Borova: "Not so fast. I activate My Trap beast X's effect Once per turn by sending one Trap Beast from you hand,deck or field to the grave destroy one card your oppnent controls...I'll choose junk warrior..."

 

Granold: :x "Ok your move"

 

Borova: "I draw. Yes! First i activate Mine field and now for every card you play you lose 200 Life points...and since you played Junk warrior..."

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 3800)

 

Borova: "...And now i attack you directly with my Trap Beast X..."

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 2300)

 

Borova: :P "...Your move"

 

Granold: "Now I activate the Trap Rising From The Dead. Now that you destroyed a monster through effect i can summon one level 7 monster from my hand...Alien Hero: Eye guy (ATK 2000 DEF 1500). Weren't expecting that my friend. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned."

 

Borova: :???: "But you now lose 400 Life points for summoning and playing a trap Card..."

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 1900)

 

Borova: "My move.I draw. I summon Trap Beast III: Moon Stalker...(ATK 1000 DEF 1200)..."

 

(A golden Wolf appeared on the battle field)

 

Borova: "I activate my Moon stalker's effect. By sacrificing this monster you can special summon one Trap Beast from your Deck Or graveyardAnd i'll choose this beast. I play him in face down defence position.I play down a face down and end my turn"

 

Granold: "Right i will attack with my Alien Hero on your Trap beast X..."

 

Borova: "I don't think so i play my face down. Ancient ring of power. This card decreases the ATK of a monster by 1000, so your Aliens attack is now 1000 which means you lose another thousand Life Points..."

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 900)

 

Granold: "...I draw. I play one monster face down and i end my turn."

 

Borova: "Giving up ey! Right this turn is the last now you played a monster you lose another 200 Life points..."

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 700)

 

Borova: "Now i sacrifice my Trap beast X: Lord Of Spying and my face Down Trap Beast IV: Magic Trapper to summon Lord of despair.

(Level 8 ATK 3200 DEF 2700) I attack your Alien Hero: Eye Guy...!!!"

 

(Borova: 4000 Granold: 0000)

 

Granold fell to his knees and weeped to the ground. Dan walked up to Borova.

"Thanks old freind. I don't think we'll be seeing him around any time soon."

 

But the tournament was only just beggining...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2 The Rise of The Duelists]Borova and Dan crossed the road toward the Duel stadium. The main draw would be being called in about ten minutes time and they couldn't be late.

"Thanks again for saving me, i don't kow what i'd do without you" Dan exclaimed. "I thought that was the the end...I mea..."

"STOP! I mean...urghh...oh i'm sorry Dan its been a tough week you know with me starting dueling again its just...hard." Borova sighed, "Why was i invited anyway. I mean its not as if i was a very good duelist" They strode off towards the stadium.

 

"Change of Plan Gunter. This tournaments going to take to long if everybody plays. We'll be here for months. I know let's choose 32 of the best duelists."Gronus stutted pouring himself yet another glass of wine.

"But sir...People have come from all over the world to duel here, we can't just turn them down when they get here" Gunter put in standing from his chair.

"Well...We can...Oh alright we'll choose 32 of the best and hold another tournement for the others. Does that suite you?" Gronus replied.

"Excellent!" cried Gunter slyly tipping poison into his masters cup.

"He He He!"

 

The two took there seats in the stand and stared down at the man on the dueling fields.

"Ladies and Gentlemen. Theres been a slight change of plan."

The crowd started to shout out. Complaining about the bad orginisation of the event. But the Man continued.

"Yes. We have chosen the best 32 duelists from around the world to compete in a tournament and then the rest of you can duel in another."

He continued.

"What so were not good enough ey. Can't play like the best." People started shouting. But The man still continued.

"The 32 people are on the screen now." He pointed up as each competitor was reaveled. The familier faces were there like Jack and Yusie but a surprise face had creeped on the board.

Borova.

 

"There's something fishy going on." Borova cried standing in his seat, hands on his head. "How am i supposed to beat these top duelists.

 

[EnkoMaun]

Hmm, not bad for a first fanfic. Obviously there are a lot of stuff that you have missed, you should ask "Weather Report" to do a weather report for you.