overdragon12 Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 hi everybody!!!!! im new to YCM and am making my first post. firstly let me say i would enjoy any coments you might have and that i greatly accept constructive criticism. please let me know if you believe my cards are overpowered (or underpowered for that matter)secondly i would like to say i have always been a fan of revival jam and lavagolem(ill probably make a lava golem set later on sometime....)and so i decided to base my first set on revival jam. although hes not in this set himself, his long lost cousins are all here. so sit back and relax and enjoy the power of "revivial radiance" the newest set on the block Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Well, one of the major things-improve on your grammar a bit and word the cards better. I love Revival Jam-it's just his cost was huge. I was gonna make a deck around him, but it took too many cards to work and the deck would be more tedious than fun, even in a casual duel. I'd like to see a Revival Jam set-I like your idea! Although Revival Flame...I'm not too big on him...or Revival Twister =P The Revival Watchdog is a nice way around the costs, though. I think you should lower Revival Genesis's level-his effect isn't amazing, so he shouldn't be 12 stars.I like your ideas, but everything's WAAAAAAAAAAAY too overpowered. Revival's Revival is basically a Quick-Play Monster Reborn for anything with "Revival" in its name(and that's a bit broken).The two-tribute "Revival" cards that have insane effects......make them harder to summon and instead of doubling your life points, maybe just gain 1500 Life Points or something along those lines...and Revival Flame HALVES their Life Points?! For TWO tributes? They can't attack for THREE turns? Destiny Hero Dogma halves Life Points, but he's a bizeatch to get out. Work on the set and maybe focus more on cards involving the original Revival Jam. Keep at it and balance em out-it's about time Revival Jam got to see some play! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 wow.... a lot of information in there. and now that you mention it and i take a second look at them your right thank you for your input and ill continue to work on modifications. by the way more cards on the way. thanks for support:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 ok heres the redone versions based on your suggestions. again ty for ur support. [attachment=11689][attachment=11690][attachment=11691][attachment=11692][attachment=11693] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 nice cards overdragon12 keep them up, they look great for your first set 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 remember those golem cards i mentioned? heres a taste for my next set. [attachment=11847] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Genesis should be 10. When I said he shouldn't be level 12, I didn't mean make him level 5 XD! Revival Flame is fairly balanced-he has lower stats than Destiny Hero Dogma(Destiny Hero Dogma's 3400/2400) and the same cost. However, he should say "one of which must include "Revival" in its name". True, it's basically another "Destiny Hero Dogma, but he revives! Good job. But you REALLY need to work on your grammar and OCG. Maybe I'll correct it when I have nothing better to do =P And OCG is Official Card Grammar, which is kind of a certain way all Yu-Gi-Oh cards are worded. 8/10. I look forward to more-it's very good for your first set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unskilled Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 First I would like to thank you for making a set based around revival jam, I love that card. I have to agree with razieus, the original cards were HEAVILY broken but the improvements are better. Some of the card art needs slight improvement, but its not extremely important. (Revival Ice is beautiful) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pineconebird Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 nice cards i like the revivials and be shure to check out the jodda cards i will soon maby making Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 just got photobucket. updating now so you dont have to view as link. also, the next 5 cards in set will be released today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 heres a small set to follow up on the previous one. it only has 5 cards but tell me what you think. special thanks to razeius for giving me the tip to visit photobucket. im planning on making more exo-ultamatium cards later but still thats a mabe. weel see how the reviews for this are. oh by the way i know that exo-ultamatium is spelled wrong(its spelled with an e not an a on my card) hope you liked them!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted November 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 more on the way!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 I cant see them! :S Maybe you changed the links or something was wrong when you posted the links to your cards. Make sure to put the tags on each side of the link and your cards picture will show up on the page okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Great Job! 8.428 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicket Posted December 4, 2007 Report Share Posted December 4, 2007 Nice cards, mostly balanced, not too overpowered, great set, love to see more, keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overdragon12 Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Ok for a while my pictures where not apearing and i was getting complaints. now they are fixed and you can once again se my pictures =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Very nice cards but you must remember Grammer and Punctuation. You forgot capital letters everywhere even in the description. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 I love your idea on those cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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