YouLoseAndIWin Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 thanksgiving is close, but holloween has passed. Who said i lost my holloween spirt?more comming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 it needs better ocg but 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Grammar problems, Grim Reaper is a little overpowered. For The Graveyard, make it 500, not 750. Change raise to increase. 7/10 Okay pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malcomtidus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 It looks good, I agree some OCG could be improved upon. But it looks like it could totally rock! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 I don't think Reaper is overpowered...he has the same ATK as any Monarch and effect is a Flip Effect-which means you have to set him first. He could easily be Shield Crushed or NOX'd. However, I agree with Professor Cobra's other points-change The Graveyard's effect to 500 instead of 750 and change "raise" to "increase"Reaper's effect should read like this-I think:FLIP: You may select up to 3 Level 4 or Higher Monster Cards from your Graveyard and add them to your hand. I added in "up to" because if you don't have 3 Level 4 or higher Monster Cards, the effect doesn't go off. Just like you need AT LEAST 5 Monsters in your Graveyard for Avarice to go off. Pot of Avarice says "Select 5 Monster Cards from your Graveyard, then add them to your Deck and shuffle it. After that, draw 2 cards." So I'm pretty sure if the "up to" part isn't in there, the effect won't go off if there are less than 3 in the graveyard. I think we just corrected the OCG. Okay pics-I've seen better. Overall: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chazapaza Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 could be better 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouLoseAndIWin Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 ok im a beginner. whats the ocg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 OCG is Official Card Grammar-set wording every Yu-Gi-Oh card goes by. If it doesn't, it'll eventually be errated to =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouLoseAndIWin Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 oh. ok ill improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeoh master Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 hmmm funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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