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Razieus Newbie

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The fact that it's two monster types instead of one is interesting...Wouldn't it look different though? I meant, shouldn't it be Fiend-Beast or something?

Well, I'd say Dark Werewolf isn't really balanced. 3800 ATK is overpowered even for a two-tribute monster and 100 DEF is low-it could mean something, but usually doesn't. I don't know about everyone else, but I still use Book of Moon-however, I don't know how much it's played anymore(it might be played alot with Marshmallon.) The ATK reduction isn't a cost-look at Ultimate Obedient Fiend; he can't attack unless he's the only card(not monster: you can't have any Spells or Traps on your side of the field) on your side of the field and you have no cards in your hand(oh yeah-he negates the Effects of Effect Monsters he kills). He only has 3500 ATK! Dark Werewolf has 3800 ATK and the only thing that is a drawback(if you consider it a drawback) is that he loses 100 ATK/gains 100 DEF. However, he's Necrofear fodder!

 

I just reviewed Dark Werewolf as a stand-alone card. Now, let's move onto Full Moon...

Full Moon's only purpose is to keep Dark Werewolf beefy and the fact that it just lets him keep his ATK isn't worth using up a S/T slot, IMO. Also, he doesn't get back whatever ATK points he lost before Full Moon was played. So, Full Moon is rather pointless.

 

Balanced? Dark Werewolf isn't and Full Moon doesn't have any worthwhile effect. Playable? Well, you could slip the cards in your deck and try to play them in a duel. Would you want to? Not from what I see. However, if lots of people still play Book of Moon, it could be balanced out since it has such low defense and I'm pretty sure it would lose any bonuses it gained(I'm not 100% positive on this one).

 

If I was a little harsh, I apologize. I'm just trying to give an honest review. Don't take offense to any of it; use it to improve on future cards.

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The fact that it's two monster types instead of one is interesting...Wouldn't it look different though? I meant' date=' shouldn't it be Fiend-Beast or something?

Well, I'd say Dark Werewolf isn't really balanced. 3800 ATK is overpowered even for a two-tribute monster and 100 DEF is low-it could mean something, but usually doesn't. I don't know about everyone else, but I still use Book of Moon-however, I don't know how much it's played anymore(it might be played alot with Marshmallon.) The ATK reduction isn't a cost-look at Ultimate Obedient Fiend; he can't attack unless he's the only card(not monster: you can't have any Spells or Traps on your side of the field) on your side of the field and you have no cards in your hand(oh yeah-he negates the Effects of Effect Monsters he kills). He only has 3500 ATK! Dark Werewolf has 3800 ATK and the only thing that is a drawback(if you consider it a drawback) is that he loses 100 ATK/gains 100 DEF. However, he's Necrofear fodder!

 

I just reviewed Dark Werewolf as a stand-alone card. Now, let's move onto Full Moon...

Full Moon's only purpose is to keep Dark Werewolf beefy and the fact that it just lets him keep his ATK isn't worth using up a S/T slot, IMO. Also, he doesn't get back whatever ATK points he lost before Full Moon was played. So, Full Moon is rather pointless.

 

Balanced? Dark Werewolf isn't and Full Moon doesn't have any worthwhile effect. Playable? Well, you could slip the cards in your deck and try to play them in a duel. Would you want to? Not from what I see. However, if lots of people still play Book of Moon, it could be balanced out since it has such low defense and I'm pretty sure it would lose any bonuses it gained(I'm not 100% positive on this one).

 

If I was a little harsh, I apologize. I'm just trying to give an honest review. Don't take offense to any of it; use it to improve on future cards.

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Thanks, I'll Take that into Account.

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Good cards, but the effects should go as followed:

 

Dark Werewolf:

 

During the End Phase of your turn, this card loses 100 ATK points and gains 100 DEF points.

 

Full Moon:

 

While this card is activated, neagte the effect of "Dark Werewolf".

 

Hope I could help. :D

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Ah, but you wanna have SOMETHING happen when you play Full Moon, Saboooom-at least you gain ATK with Full Moon's original effect......WAIT A MINUTE! Ya know how in popular culture, werewolves are indestrucible unless killed by silver?

 

Full Moon:

Any "Dark Werewolf" card(s) you control cannot be destroyed as a result of battle

I think that's more worth the slot than just gaining 100 DEF =P

 

Also, you did a great job if those are your first cards, actually. You have good grammar, the pics are clear and the effects are worder quite well compared to many other cards I've seen. Besides, it's not overpowered-and you took criticism well. Good job *thumbs up*

 

I love making overpowered cards just for the fun of it. I make serious and realistic cards, but that gets boring when that's all you make...I need to spice up my cards!

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The 2nd version of the card is a bit better i give it 4.5/10

I dont like the "&" sign just write out "and"

Still it just doesnt seem playable. Level eight. 2800/1000 looses 100 atk a turn

Later it becomes 2400/1400 now its underpowered.

It gets weaker and weaker. Its pretty bad to begin with.

I really dont see the point of this card. It just gets worse and worse

Now..... for full moon. All it does is stop it from getting its attack points down.

First of all, its probably not going to last very long so this is useless almost. Just give it one equip card and the Werewolf is good to go. This is even worse 2/10

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Great Idea and nice pics. Some of what doji33 said is true though. I don't see the point in playing it. For your first couple of cards though they are nice. You should make more "Wolf" cards and have your "Full Moon" benefit them. Right now the fact that it only works on one card makes it too specific and really hard to be useful. What are the odds of having them both at the same time anyways? And Full Moon could have a better effect. All in all though I am impressed with idea and designs. Just keep tweeking those effects until you get some more balance.

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Good cards' date=' but the effects should go as followed:

 

Dark Werewolf:

 

During the End Phase of your turn, this card loses 100 ATK points and gains 100 DEF points.

 

Full Moon:

 

While this card is activated, neagte the effect of "Dark Werewolf".

 

Hope I could help. :D

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Dark Werewolf

During the End Phase of each of your turns, Decrease this card's ATK points by 100 and Increase this card's DEF points by 100.

Full Moon

As long a this card remains face-up on the Field,negate the effect of all "Dark Werewolf" on the Field.

 

Monsters dont gain or lose points, the points are either incresed or decreased :?

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I gave him a suggestion =P I know they're his first cards-he has better grammar than most people's first cards. Also, he should make a set around Wolf cards.

 

NEW EFFECT FOR FULL MOON(if it's not in a set based on Wolf cards):

While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot set monsters in face-down Defense Position. Any monster set in face-down Defense Position is flipped-face up and if it has a Flip Effect, the effect is negated. "Dark Werewolf" does not lose ATK points from its effect and cannot be destroyed in battle. When an attacking Beast- or Fiend-type monster with an ATK higher than the DEF of a Defense Position Monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

NOW I see some use. And Book of Moon is good for many things...I think. Also, cheeselord is right; Book of LIFE is zombies. Book of Moon is a quick-play Spell Card that flips a monster into face-down Defense Position.

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I gave him a suggestion =P I know they're his first cards-he has better grammar than most people's first cards. Also' date=' he should make a set around Wolf cards.

 

NEW EFFECT FOR FULL MOON(if it's not in a set based on Wolf cards):

[i']While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot set monsters in face-down Defense Position. Any monster set in face-down Defense Position is flipped-face up and if it has a Flip Effect, the effect is negated. "Dark Werewolf" does not lose ATK points from its effect and cannot be destroyed in battle. When an attacking Beast- or Fiend-type monster with an ATK higher than the DEF of a Defense Position Monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/i]

NOW I see some use. And Book of Moon is good for many things...I think. Also, cheeselord is right; Book of LIFE is zombies. Book of Moon is a quick-play Spell Card that flips a monster into face-down Defense Position.

 

the problem with that card would be it has too many effects and no cost, cards with3 or more effects are overpowered :?

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I like the pics on these! Phantasm seems a little weak though. 2 sacrifices, only 2400 ATK and no effect? Be better if it was only 1 sacrifice at the least. The other 2 seem a little overpowered, but then again they have no effects, and could easily be destroyed. No one wants to summon those and have them destroyed by common cards like fissure and trap hole. I would look into more effects even if it means making them weaker. Pretty cool looking though. And since these are still some of your first cards I give them eh...6.5/10. Could still be a lot better though.

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